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one consenting adult part 2( sequel to parenting)
“It was nothing really. I just happened to be in the right place at the right time,” I shrugged.
“Tee, Alice wanted me to remind you not pick up a bottle of whiskey… she would be bringing that with her tonight.”
“Oh, okay. Um, Serena, were having a poker party, sort of. Youre invited to join us.”
“Im sure shes busy, Mom. She hasnt finished unpacking and she has to finish that,” Evan answered for me before I could get a word out.
“Unpacking isnt really any fun. Especially on a Friday night. Come over, join us,” Tina invited.
“Um…”
“Then you can meet your other neighbor, Shane,” Bette added.
“Okay,” I shrugged, “Im not really busy anyway.”
“Good, good… it will give us a chance to learn a little bit more about you.”
“Right. Well, Ill let you uh,” I said walking to the door.
“See you tonight,” Bette called after me.
“Feel better, Evan.”
I waved at the teenage girl and noticed her shy return.
*****
“*****,” Shane muttered.
“Okay… who are you and where did you learn to play poker like that?” Alice asked me.
Smiling, I pulled the red and blue chips closer. I had won four hands in a row.
“I played in college.”
“Yeah, uhuh… thats what they all say. In between study breaks,” Tina griped.
I laughed.
“She cheating, Tee?” Bette asked walking back into the room.
She passed out the beer bottles she held in her hand.
“I cant tell,” Tina answered.
“Hmmm, deal me in Al,” Bette said handing me the last bottle.
I took a swig of the tangy liquid and stacked my chips.
“So, Serena… where did you go to school?” Bette asked.
“Princeton.”
As Alice dealt five cards to each of us around the small table, I watched them all. Shane shifted onto her knees picking up her cards. Danas eyebrow went up as well as her mouth into a little smirk. Alice huffed when she lifted up her last card. A smile played across Tinas face as she studied her hand. I chanced a look at Bette and found her face stone.
“Not gonna find anything,” a voice said in my ear.
She laid her hand on my shoulder as she sunk down next to me. A flutter expanded from my stomach to my chest.
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Damm Serena is hot, and her comment on leaving the show is this because I’m a lesbian?? WTF my jaw hit the ground and it’s still kinda open even now. Why can’t I have any hot neighbors. They have shane and serena and I get a fat old man who stares, and some lady who is never home. So how old is evan cause this is a different story so she could be older.
What a great crossover! I really like this!! Rock on! (P.S. I followed you perfectly!)
Serena huh?..well done Evan..lol..and i bet Bette feels something about it..lol..great chapter as always..post soon
Why are you portraying an adult woman being attracted to a minor?
Not cool.
Is Evan jailbait in this story?I like the introduction of Serena. More drama on the way.
Good thing you included the last little bit…. Becuase I kept saying What? throughout the story
becuase it didn’t make any sense as far as being realistic or well it was a little contraversial
……the fact that Evan is 15 and the neighbor is at least 24…unless she’s like Dougie Houser…which I doubt.lol
I really like your writing stylistically…especially on the first page.
Good Chapter.
I love it!! Serena Sutherland was my favorite character on Law and Order!! I hope you update soon!!!
when i saw your update , the first thing i did was to check how many pages i got to read. and when i saw 4 i was really happy. special ed raised a good point because up until the last part i was wondering if you went ahead of time and didnt say anything. but its not uncommon for an older person to feel for a younger person just know that you have to control it. great story. keep em coming
K
Great story. Don’t know who the law and order chick is :) but I like it. Can’t wait for more.
ok i get that evan is a minor, but shes knows what shes doing.bette and tina are years apart in age.
Great Chapter. I like how you included Serena. Her departure from L&O was so abrupt…now we get to see a little more of her. Yay! Can’t wait to see where you take us. Thanks for another great one and please post soon.
now i wish i watched that show.. but tell us how old even is again…i like this story