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    Out of Control chapter 7

    Story written on November 6, 2005 by Ja Ik.
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    Tina tells Kit her secret and her suspicious about the ‘car accident’.

    OUT OF CONTROL chapter 7

    The next time Dr. Martin ventured out to report to the group of anxious woman she was please see they were all there waiting. They were all hopelessly lost in though when she walked over to them. Tina was the first to see her as she stood, “Doctor.”

    “Hello, ladies. I just wanted to let you know we moved Bette out of recovery. She is now in the ICU. We can’t have a lot of people back there walking around. For now it can only be Kit and Tina. We’ll be back in a few minutes.” The three woman walked away heading toward the ICU.

    Dr. Martin stopped after a short walk, “Here we are. Please remember to keep very quiet. You are going to have 10 minutes. Follow me.” Silently Kit and Tina followed the Doctor through the ward. When they reached Bette’s bed Tina took a shocked gasp and grabbed for Kit. Kit held her close experiencing her own shock of the sight they were seeing. Bette was still pale, which in itself was a shock, considering her usual color was a deep brown. She was still on the respirator and she had a patch of hair missing from the surgery. Dr. Martin came up behind them place a hand on their shoulders and spoke quietly, “I know this is a shock but she is doing well all things considered. The respirator is just a precaution due to her problem breathing on her own when she first came in. She won’t be on it much longer.”

    Tina looked Dr. Martin in the eyes, “When will she wake up?”

    “Well, that is difficult to say at this time. It could hours it could be days. I’m sorry I can’t give you any more than. Like I said this is a waiting game. She is out of recovery which is a good step but she’s not quite out of the woods yet. We just have to wait.”

    “Wait for what?”

    “Bette.”

    With that Tina again caught the eyes of the doctor questioningly, “Tina, Bette has to want to wake up. That being said she needs to know the people closest to her are herewaiting for her. I’m going to step outside. You have 5 more minute. Talk to her, touch her. Let her know you are here.”

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    1. Whhheeeeee, can’t believe I’m first. Just found your story today and read all of it and I think it is just great. Like the way you are treating the separation but I don’t like either of them being hurt. Surely, Bette will be okay and Tina’s revelation about the baby and her love for Bette should help her want to live and wake up very soon. Please post soon. Thanks.

    2. Whhheeeeee, can’t believe I’m first. Just found your story today and read all of it and I think it is just great. Like the way you are treating the separation but I don’t like either of them being hurt. Surely, Bette will be okay and Tina’s revelation about the baby and her love for Bette should help her want to live and wake up very soon. Please post soon. Thanks.

    4. wow..very sad..im glad Kit is there for Tina and i hope Bette wake up soon even in deep sleep she can feel and the thought of Tina and the baby will bring her back cant wait for next chappy post soon thanks ;o)

    5. Glad that Kit and the ganag is there for both Bette and Tina. They just need to keep talking to her. and soon she will open her eyes. Tina needs to get rid of Helene soon. thanks

    6. definately not tina’s fault, if trust is an issue, bette needs to work on it so tina can trust her again and i hope that nothing will affect them again, and they’ll work it out, as long as there’s love between them, they should be able to overcome anything

    11. interesting how your incorporating s2 into your story. thanks for posting so often. study then write, study then write. itll work out for all of us. thanks.

    13. i should be studying, too. but i’m hooked on your story, so i’ll be sleeping late tonite :). hopefully tina telling bette she is pregnant will jolt bette awake. write on!

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