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    Out of Control chapter 7

    Story written on November 6, 2005 by Ja Ik.
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    Tina tells Kit her secret and her suspicious about the ‘car accident’.

    They came back to group looking somber. Tina spoke without prompting, “She’s still unconscious and on the respirator. The doctor said it’s because Bette had a problem breathing when she came in. She won’t be on it much longerit’s just a precaution. We just have to wait for her to wake up but she has to want to wake up.”

    When Tina was finished speaking Dr. Martin told the rest of the group two more would be able to spend a couple minutes with Bette. Dana and Alice were the first to go with the doctor telling them, “You are sisters if anyone asks.” Alice and Dana just looked at each other doubtful. Dr. Martin saw their looks then said, “Okay, you’re cousin. But it would a ***** of a lot easier if you two were sisters.” She smiled at them sweetly and lead them down the hall with Alice indicating to Dana what she thought of Dr. Ilene Martin’s backside. Dana swatted at Alice as the turned the corner out of sight.

    Tina was looking a little wore down after their brief visit. Kit noticed this, “Come on honey. Let’s sit down over here.”

    “Thanks Kit. I’m sorry I didn’t tell you. Actually I didn’t tell anyone. Alice knows only because she thought I was depressed and subsequently eating my pain away. A time went by it just got harder. It was easier to keep it to myself then to figure out how to tell everyone, especially Bette.”

    “Tina, Bette still loves you. She never stopped no matter what you think. She loves you more than she loves herself. I go over to the house as often as I can. I find her more often then not sitting by the pool lost. I think she drinks more than she eats. She’s been hurting. I don’t want this to sound like an excuse but our Dad wasn’t the best role model. Growing up she worshipped him. He taught her to be strong and guarded. He didn’t teach my baby sister to trust or to say ‘I love you’. She learned that on her own. She also, learned to say I’m sorry on her own. Tina she said I’m sorry to you. Our father never said I’m sorry to anyone including our mother. He was a womanizer thru and thru. No apologies.”

    “I hear what you’re saying, Kit. I haven’t stopped loving Bette either. It’s the trust thing I’m having trouble with. I want to her to come out of this so we can begin again. I want her in my life. IGod, this is my fault. It’s my fault she’s in there.”

    “Baby, what are you talking about how is Bette’s accident your fault. You weren’t even there.”

    “Because I don’t think it was an accident. Kit I think she did it on purpose.”

    “Tina, what are you telling me exactly?”

    “Kit, I think she was trying to kill herself”, Tina took a deep breath. Kit was waiting silently for her to continue the conversation. “She crashed her car in that intersection because I didn’t listen. She shouldn’t have gotten in THAT car. She should NOT have been driving. I destroyed her in the meeting. I didn’t see it and I let her go. She thought I let her go. *****, Joyce”

    “Tina, that wasn’t your fault. Bette doesn’t tell anyone how she is feeling even when she needs to. I don’t disagree that she shouldn’t have been driving but she could not have known that. And who is Joyce?”

    “Joyce Wishnia. She’s my lawyer. In the meeting Bette knelt in front of me saying she was sorry and she loved me. She begged me not to destroy us. Joyce was there telling me it was an act. She told Bette to stop the dramatics. I was confused and angry. After that the meeting was over and Bette” Tina’s words trailed off. She put her head in hands crying hard.

    Kit pulled Tina into a tight embrace rubbing her back gently whispering, “It wasn’t your fault.” Tina wrapped her arms around Kit desperate to hang onto to the piece of Bette that was her sister.

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    Comments

    1. Whhheeeeee, can’t believe I’m first. Just found your story today and read all of it and I think it is just great. Like the way you are treating the separation but I don’t like either of them being hurt. Surely, Bette will be okay and Tina’s revelation about the baby and her love for Bette should help her want to live and wake up very soon. Please post soon. Thanks.

    2. Whhheeeeee, can’t believe I’m first. Just found your story today and read all of it and I think it is just great. Like the way you are treating the separation but I don’t like either of them being hurt. Surely, Bette will be okay and Tina’s revelation about the baby and her love for Bette should help her want to live and wake up very soon. Please post soon. Thanks.

    4. wow..very sad..im glad Kit is there for Tina and i hope Bette wake up soon even in deep sleep she can feel and the thought of Tina and the baby will bring her back cant wait for next chappy post soon thanks ;o)

    5. Glad that Kit and the ganag is there for both Bette and Tina. They just need to keep talking to her. and soon she will open her eyes. Tina needs to get rid of Helene soon. thanks

    6. definately not tina’s fault, if trust is an issue, bette needs to work on it so tina can trust her again and i hope that nothing will affect them again, and they’ll work it out, as long as there’s love between them, they should be able to overcome anything

    11. interesting how your incorporating s2 into your story. thanks for posting so often. study then write, study then write. itll work out for all of us. thanks.

    13. i should be studying, too. but i’m hooked on your story, so i’ll be sleeping late tonite :). hopefully tina telling bette she is pregnant will jolt bette awake. write on!

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