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Over me: Chapter 5
“Oh, shit! Al!”
Alice, thinking I was urging her on, began to fuck me faster, until I sat up so quickly I almost broke her neck.
“Stop!”
She looked up, momentarily confused and then saw what I had seen.
“Fuck.” She murmured; her lips and chin glossy with my wetness.
Ethan was standing swaying slightly, his face frozen in an open-mouthed frown. Then he seemed to come to life.
“What the fuck is this?!” He shouted then all at once his mouth twisted and he slapped his hands over it, retching sounds coming from his throat. He ran to the bathroom and began vomiting violently.
Alice and I automatically began to get dressed, stiffly struggling into our clothes, not looking at one another. I swallowed feeling nauseous myself, how could we have been so careless?
Ethan continued to throw up for several minutes as we sat on the sofa in a stunned silence.
“Al?” I finally said, quietly.
She turned to me, her face flushed. “You should go, Dane.”
“What? Are you sure?”
Alice rubbed her eyes.
“I need to talk to him alone. Shit – this is such a mess…” She groaned.
I was concerned. “What if he-“I shot an anxious glance towards to the bathroom, lowering my voice even more, “-gets violent?”
She sighed. “He’s not like that; he’s really a decent guy. Sometimes. Look I owe it to him ok?” She paused, giving me a significant look. “Just like you do.”
I looked down. “We didn’t plan this, Al.”
She wiped her face self-consciously, even though she had already done so. “We didn’t stop it either though, did we?”
I was silent.
“Go home, Dana.”
I rose reluctantly, pausing when I realised the noises from the bathroom had ceased. Alice stood with me, walking to the door. I stopped in front of it, feeling shaken.
“What about us?” I whispered.
“I’ll call you tomorrow.” We touched hands briefly and then I went out the door, leaving Alice to face Ethan alone.
The journey home was a blur. I kept wanting to turn back, to run towards Alice as fast as I could, but I didn’t. She was right; I owed it to Lara to face up to what I had done, even though the thought of telling her made my gut twist painfully. So much for not hurting anyone, Dana.
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(26 votes, average: 3.46 out of 5)
Woah hot and intense, I love this story so much, it’s incredibly well written I was even talking to the screen when Dana saw Ethan, I hope Dana and Alice can sit down and have a chat about everything that’s still between them. Post soon though because I have a feeling this is going to be fantastic.
How confused is Dana? Does she know what she wants – other than sex with Alice? They can’t exactly blame it on alcohol because they were relatively sober when they hooked up. I hope Alice is okay. Ethan does seem to be a jerk. Maybe he’ll be too wasted to remember what he saw or do anything to her. Lara seems like she isn’t going to put up with Dana’s crap.
I really want to see what happens next betwen Alice, Dana and Lara. You are 1 of my top three fanfic writers! PPS
wow, this is so excellent, I’m really enjoying your fic so far. I’m glad you’ve portrayed Lara with a spine. What are Dana and Alice thinking (or are they?)??Maybe some serious talking coming up? I hope so…can’t wait to see where you go with this;) PPS!
Another beautifully portrayed chapter! Hope you can post soon!
I’m really liking this version of Lara…reminds me of the girl I liked so much in Season 1, that was nowhere to be seen in Season 3. It’s a bad situation for everyone, and I can’t help being incredibly sad for Alice. Somehow I have a sinking feeling about Ethan…please don’t let him hurt her too badly. And please give Dana the slightest bit of decency as a human being. Really though, this chapter was almost too good, can’t wait until you continue.
Drama!! Great chapter, loved it! Please post again soon xx
that was amazing..i really enjoyed this chapter, but it was really fucked up that ethan ruined their lil’ fuck fest!! lol but how will things work out for the Alice/Dana and Dana/Alice?? PPS