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Over me: Chapter 5
I tried to imagine her beautiful face full of hatred for me, but all I could see were her tears which was much worse.
As I walked down our street I checked my cell: six missed calls from Lara and a text: “Where are you? I hope ok. Please call! L xx” It felt like a communication from another lifetime. My watch said 3.12am.
I tentatively unlocked the door and went in. The lights were off. I removed my shoes carefully and started to tip-toe into the bedroom.
“Where were you?” Lara’s voice echoed out in the darkness, flat and angry.
I swallowed my mouth suddenly dry. There was a click as Lara turned a lamp on and I blinked into the sudden light.
She was sitting in the easy chair, her hands tightly clamped on her lap, eyes accusing.
“Well?”
I couldn’t help it: I took the coward’s way out. “I-The awards ran over, baby – I’m sorry, I would have called but my cell was dead and then-“
She held up her hand. Enough.
“Just stop!”
She stood up, walking towards me.
“Stop lying!”
My eyes widened as I focused on her tear-streaked face. But now the crying was over and all that was left was anger.
“I called the Plaza. Someone very helpful told me you’d left, that you’d left early actually.”
Shit.
I ran my hands through my hair.
“I can explain, honestly…”
She laughed bitterly.
“Don’t use that word, Dana – do you even know what it means?!”
I started to protest but she cut me off again, her voice scarily calm.
“Why didn’t you tell me Alice was going to be there?”
“I didn’t know, honest- really I didn’t.” I held the eye contact persuasively.
She looked thrown for a moment.
“You left together…?”
I wasn’t sure if it was a question or a statement.
“No.” I said a little too vehemently, searching her face for some sign that she believed me.
She suddenly seemed to deflate and slumped back down onto the sofa.
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(26 votes, average: 3.46 out of 5)
Woah hot and intense, I love this story so much, it’s incredibly well written I was even talking to the screen when Dana saw Ethan, I hope Dana and Alice can sit down and have a chat about everything that’s still between them. Post soon though because I have a feeling this is going to be fantastic.
How confused is Dana? Does she know what she wants – other than sex with Alice? They can’t exactly blame it on alcohol because they were relatively sober when they hooked up. I hope Alice is okay. Ethan does seem to be a jerk. Maybe he’ll be too wasted to remember what he saw or do anything to her. Lara seems like she isn’t going to put up with Dana’s crap.
I really want to see what happens next betwen Alice, Dana and Lara. You are 1 of my top three fanfic writers! PPS
wow, this is so excellent, I’m really enjoying your fic so far. I’m glad you’ve portrayed Lara with a spine. What are Dana and Alice thinking (or are they?)??Maybe some serious talking coming up? I hope so…can’t wait to see where you go with this;) PPS!
Another beautifully portrayed chapter! Hope you can post soon!
I’m really liking this version of Lara…reminds me of the girl I liked so much in Season 1, that was nowhere to be seen in Season 3. It’s a bad situation for everyone, and I can’t help being incredibly sad for Alice. Somehow I have a sinking feeling about Ethan…please don’t let him hurt her too badly. And please give Dana the slightest bit of decency as a human being. Really though, this chapter was almost too good, can’t wait until you continue.
Drama!! Great chapter, loved it! Please post again soon xx
that was amazing..i really enjoyed this chapter, but it was really fucked up that ethan ruined their lil’ fuck fest!! lol but how will things work out for the Alice/Dana and Dana/Alice?? PPS