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Over me: Chapter 5
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“I wish I could trust what you say, Dana.” Her voice was barely a whisper. “You don’t know how much I wish that.”
I gradually moved to sit down next to her, looking at her warily. She turned and our eyes met. Her look was so wounded I almost cried. You have to tell her the truth.
I took a breath.
“We did leave together, Lar…”
She sat up, her brows drawn.
“…but it’s not what you think.” I continued.
Her expression said, so tell me, and it better be good.
“Ethan – her boyfriend – he got really wasted and she couldn’t find him. I said I’d help and we eventually found him then we shared a taxi.”
I paused. She was staring at me unblinkingly.
“I was going to get dropped off at Wax, like we planned.” I gestured. “But… things got out of hand with Ethan. He was really high, Lar – I couldn’t leave Alice, or any friend, in that situation.”
She let a silence develop, studying me carefully, waiting for me to break the eye contact first. I did.
“It wasn’t so long ago that she was more than just a friend, Dana.”
“That’s in the past.” I responded quickly.
Lara shook her head, standing again, arms folded.
“You used to flinch at the sound of her name, you know? Tell me she was crazy.” She rubbed her temples as if working her thoughts into shape. “But now… you’re talking to her in restrooms? Going out of your way to help her?”
I didn’t know what to say. Lara licked her lips and stared me down. “Is this something to do with us?” She raised her voice. “Aren’t you happy, Dana?”
I went to hold her but she dodged my embrace.
“Answer me.”
I could hear my voice trembling. “Of course I am, baby.”
Lara smiled bitterly. “No. You aren’t.” She started to walk away from me. “You figure it out, Dane? Ok? In the meantime-“She had reached the bedroom door. “You can sleep on the sofa.” She quietly closed the door behind her, like she was closing the door on us.
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Woah hot and intense, I love this story so much, it’s incredibly well written I was even talking to the screen when Dana saw Ethan, I hope Dana and Alice can sit down and have a chat about everything that’s still between them. Post soon though because I have a feeling this is going to be fantastic.
How confused is Dana? Does she know what she wants – other than sex with Alice? They can’t exactly blame it on alcohol because they were relatively sober when they hooked up. I hope Alice is okay. Ethan does seem to be a jerk. Maybe he’ll be too wasted to remember what he saw or do anything to her. Lara seems like she isn’t going to put up with Dana’s crap.
I really want to see what happens next betwen Alice, Dana and Lara. You are 1 of my top three fanfic writers! PPS
wow, this is so excellent, I’m really enjoying your fic so far. I’m glad you’ve portrayed Lara with a spine. What are Dana and Alice thinking (or are they?)??Maybe some serious talking coming up? I hope so…can’t wait to see where you go with this;) PPS!
Another beautifully portrayed chapter! Hope you can post soon!
I’m really liking this version of Lara…reminds me of the girl I liked so much in Season 1, that was nowhere to be seen in Season 3. It’s a bad situation for everyone, and I can’t help being incredibly sad for Alice. Somehow I have a sinking feeling about Ethan…please don’t let him hurt her too badly. And please give Dana the slightest bit of decency as a human being. Really though, this chapter was almost too good, can’t wait until you continue.
Drama!! Great chapter, loved it! Please post again soon xx
that was amazing..i really enjoyed this chapter, but it was really fucked up that ethan ruined their lil’ fuck fest!! lol but how will things work out for the Alice/Dana and Dana/Alice?? PPS