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Over me
“Ah, she mentioned you might be kind of missing me. As a friend.” I added quickly.
She folded her arms and gave me that look, the one that was a mixture of defiance and vulnerability. I loved it.
“Fuck.”
I suddenly felt brave.
“Can I come in so we can talk?”
Her jaw clenched. “We can talk here. I don’t even want to talk… God, what am I doing?!” She started to shut the door on me then and I stopped it with my foot.
“Alice!”
She wouldn’t meet my gaze.
“I can’t do this, ok? I can’t. Please just go.”
I couldn’t leave it like this. I grabbed her shoulders, which were tense under my hands and made her look at me.
“No… Alice, please. Please?”
She pulled away and stepped back into the apartment then, eyes down. I don’t know whether she wanted to get away from me or if she was just giving in.
I entered and so many memories came flooding back I had to stop to catch my breath.
“What do you want from me, Dana?” Her voice was small and defeated.
Everything, I thought but didn’t answer. Instead I took a step towards her and tentatively reached out and pulled her into my arms. She resisted for a second then uttering a shuddering sigh she let me hold her. I felt my heart thumping in my chest and after a moment her arms snaked around me. I was so lost in the wonderful sensation of her, her scent and the softness of her hair against my neck that it took me a while to realise that she was crying, her breathing halting and her back trembling. I drew away from her and lifted her chin. Her deep brown eyes were full of pain. Tenderly, I smoothed the tears away from her cheeks, even as they continued to fall.
“I’m so sorry.” I whispered my lips against her forehead. Her hands were now hanging by her sides and I took them in mine and kissed her knuckles. “I’m sorry.” Without any plan I brushed my lips over hers, so gently that I was surprised at the force of the electricity the contact sent rushing through me. Our eyes met and locked. I couldn’t help kissing her again, just as gently and felt a fire begin in my lower belly when she kissed me back, our tongues slowly meeting as our eyes closed. One of us moaned.
Then without warning she wrenched herself away from me, and I took a stumbling step back when I saw the anger blazing in her eyes.
“Fuck you, Dana!” She slapped my face, hard. I could feel the hurt coming off her in waves. “Do you know what it’s taken for me to get to this point, to be sane, to be in a new relationship? You have no fucking idea!”
I stared at her open-mouthed, trying to make sense of this, to get past the kiss we had just shared. I grabbed Alice’s hands as she flung her fists against me, a million words spinning through my mind but none emerging that could hope to fix this.
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(31 votes, average: 3.90 out of 5)
Wow I’m already super impressed, a very great start indeed, I like danish stories that don’t always start with them being in love so keep up the good work cause your doing awesome so far :D
That’s a really good start! I loved every single part of it! I hope everything works out between these two former lovers/foes…PPS!!!
Wow, awesome start!! Loving this perspective. Please continue and post again soon xx
where did you come from out of nowhere? wow – excellent start. i can’t wait to see where you take it.
Welcome to the board! What an awesome start. This is a powerful piece of work. I totally loved it. Please continue soon. :)
Yayyy!! Another danish story! please continue
beautiful
Wow! It was funny when Dana thought Ethan was a geek. Please don’t make it too easy for Dana.
Glad I ran across your story, this is really starting out nicely. I love the whole Lara-Dana-Alice relationship dynamic issue thing, and I enjoy reading stories involving the three of them, no matter who ends up with whom. I like here how you’re showing Dana’s underlying attraction to Alice–looks like drama ahead! Please keep it up and post soon and keep it coming! Cheers…
Glad I ran across your story, this is really starting out nicely. I love the whole Lara-Dana-Alice relationship dynamic issue thing, and I enjoy reading stories involving the three of them, no matter who ends up with whom. I like here how you’re showing Dana’s underlying attraction to Alice–looks like drama ahead! Please keep it up and post soon and keep it coming! Cheers…
Oooh, this is such a great start! It’s got to be difficult exploring things exlusively from Dana’s point of view, but it’s definitely refreshing. I love this and can’t wait to see where you take it.
Hey. This was a cool start. Keep it up! I’d love to see where it goes.
Great start, please continue. All Danish stories are welcomed with open arms!
‘I love you’ Might be a good start Dane! Lovely start! Pls do continue!
WOW,that was one hell of a to start a awesome Danish story! I hope you continue soon, thanks you again! PPS
great story. i like your twist on it and look forward to reading more.