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    Over me

    I shivered, couldn’t look at her.

    “I was sick.” I echoed pathetically. “I’m okay now.”

    Lara ran her tongue over her lips like she was deciding something important.

    “Let’s just go, Dane. Alright? Can we do that?”

    “Sure.” 

    We left. I tried to catch Alice’s eye before we did, but she wouldn’t look at me. I couldn’t think about it. I just knew what the encounter had done to me; or rather had undone. I just had to see her again.

    The next day after practice I found myself driving past her apartment block. I was feeling a desperation I hadn’t felt in months. I was driving myself crazy. Lara was withdrawing from me and I couldn’t stand the fact that it was my fault.

    I rang her bell and waited. I was hoping against hope he wouldn’t be there. There was a pause, Alice looking through the spy hole I assumed and then the door opened. Alice’s forehead was crinkled with surprise, and her tone was wary.

    “Dana…”

    “Hey.”

    She swung a hand on her hip.

    “What are you doing here?”

    I faltered. Not the response I’d been expecting. What you thought she’d beg you to come back to her? Jeez.

     

    “I was er, just passing by, you know and thought I’d say hi.”

    “Ok.” She licked her lips. “Hi.” She seemed to have no intention of inviting me in. I noticed that her hair was a little mussed and she was wearing her glasses. I’d probably interrupted her writing.

    “Hi.” I echoed, wishing I had kept on driving. “Look, Shane said-“

    “What?” She jumped in. “What’s Shane been telling you?”

    I held up my hands, losing my nerve. “Nothing.”  I turned to go.

    “You aren’t even going to tell me why you’re here?”

    Her tone was frustrated and I found myself matching it.

    “Stupidly I thought we could be friends again, Alice.”

    She looked me right in the eye.

    “Are you serious? You really want to be friends with me? After everything?”

    “Yes.” 

    I couldn’t read her reaction to that.

    “What did Shane tell you?”

    I wasn’t going to be able to get out of this. I cleared my throat.

    Comments

    1. Wow I’m already super impressed, a very great start indeed, I like danish stories that don’t always start with them being in love so keep up the good work cause your doing awesome so far :D

    2. Glad I ran across your story, this is really starting out nicely. I love the whole Lara-Dana-Alice relationship dynamic issue thing, and I enjoy reading stories involving the three of them, no matter who ends up with whom. I like here how you’re showing Dana’s underlying attraction to Alice–looks like drama ahead! Please keep it up and post soon and keep it coming! Cheers…

    3. Glad I ran across your story, this is really starting out nicely. I love the whole Lara-Dana-Alice relationship dynamic issue thing, and I enjoy reading stories involving the three of them, no matter who ends up with whom. I like here how you’re showing Dana’s underlying attraction to Alice–looks like drama ahead! Please keep it up and post soon and keep it coming! Cheers…

    4. Oooh, this is such a great start! It’s got to be difficult exploring things exlusively from Dana’s point of view, but it’s definitely refreshing. I love this and can’t wait to see where you take it.

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