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Over me
“Dana.” She paused, and then looked at me more closely. “Hey, are you okay?”
I nodded and pushed away from the sink determined to get away from her and at least retain some of my dignity. Unfortunately, my stomach chose that moment to lurch forebodingly and I only made it as far as the toilet bowl.
Alice followed, and I flinched as I felt her smooth back my hair while I threw up my exquisite crab ravioli. She moved away immediately and stood with her back leaning against the sinks.
“It’s not like you to drink so much.”
I coughed and stood. “Maybe I’ve changed.”
She nodded and looked down at her feet. Maybe we both have.
I wiped my mouth and moved past her to scoop water over my face. My head had already begun to pound with the promise of tomorrow’s hangover.
The silence was palpable.
Fuck, I thought. Don’t say you’ve missed me, Alice, just don’t.
She didn’t.
She was close enough that I could smell her perfume. The same as always: Alluring and sweet.
I continued to look in the mirror. The question I wanted to ask came to my lips. “How long have… you two…”
She looked away. “A couple of months.”
“Wow.” I cringed at myself. “That long.” Shit. “You seem happy, Al.”
She turned to me then. “Yeah, don’t I?” Our eyes met and searched and I saw the old Alice. I mean really saw her for the first time since we’d split. Something inside me twisted and broke.
The distance was still there between us but our eyes held and I swallowed.
“Aren’t you?”
She sighed and shrugged, my gaze drawn to the scooped neck of her top, the beginnings of her cleavage. “I-“
The door swung open with a bang and Lara entered a flush creeping over her when she saw us together.
“Dana?”
She looked from me to Alice and back again.
Alice pushed off from the sinks and brushed past Lara.
“Excuse me.” She looked back over her shoulder. “Dana’s not feeling too well, she was sick…” She trailed off and quietly exited.
Lara looked at me like what-the-fuck? Her arms crossed. “What’s going on? You’re ill?” Her voice a direct contradiction of her body language she walked towards me and touched my arm.
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(31 votes, average: 3.90 out of 5)
Wow I’m already super impressed, a very great start indeed, I like danish stories that don’t always start with them being in love so keep up the good work cause your doing awesome so far :D
That’s a really good start! I loved every single part of it! I hope everything works out between these two former lovers/foes…PPS!!!
Wow, awesome start!! Loving this perspective. Please continue and post again soon xx
where did you come from out of nowhere? wow – excellent start. i can’t wait to see where you take it.
Welcome to the board! What an awesome start. This is a powerful piece of work. I totally loved it. Please continue soon. :)
Yayyy!! Another danish story! please continue
beautiful
Wow! It was funny when Dana thought Ethan was a geek. Please don’t make it too easy for Dana.
Glad I ran across your story, this is really starting out nicely. I love the whole Lara-Dana-Alice relationship dynamic issue thing, and I enjoy reading stories involving the three of them, no matter who ends up with whom. I like here how you’re showing Dana’s underlying attraction to Alice–looks like drama ahead! Please keep it up and post soon and keep it coming! Cheers…
Glad I ran across your story, this is really starting out nicely. I love the whole Lara-Dana-Alice relationship dynamic issue thing, and I enjoy reading stories involving the three of them, no matter who ends up with whom. I like here how you’re showing Dana’s underlying attraction to Alice–looks like drama ahead! Please keep it up and post soon and keep it coming! Cheers…
Oooh, this is such a great start! It’s got to be difficult exploring things exlusively from Dana’s point of view, but it’s definitely refreshing. I love this and can’t wait to see where you take it.
Hey. This was a cool start. Keep it up! I’d love to see where it goes.
Great start, please continue. All Danish stories are welcomed with open arms!
‘I love you’ Might be a good start Dane! Lovely start! Pls do continue!
WOW,that was one hell of a to start a awesome Danish story! I hope you continue soon, thanks you again! PPS
great story. i like your twist on it and look forward to reading more.