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    Paradise lost & found

    Story written on February 18, 2008 by sabina.
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    5.06 A longer look at the kitchen scene

     

    I bring my hands down to your ass and then flip us over. I swallow your tiny sound of surprise and thrust my tongue inside your mouth. Your hand lifts my top and I oblige your not so subtle hint, sit back and take it off.

    I feel your right hand sliding up my thigh with purpose and I rapidly grab it.

    “Wait… Don’t.”

    God, I can’t take it. One touch from you and I’ll explode. I’m so wet and swollen. And this right now is about you. What I want, what I need is to touch you. To make you come with my name still fresh on your lips.

     

    I hold your wrists in my hands and you settle down in a gentle surrender that makes my heart melt and my clit throb. I lean down to kiss you again, belly to belly, breasts to breasts sliding together, dragging, and teasing. Your tongue rises up to meet mine as you push up against me, like a panther, all contained power rippling just under the surface.

    I lift my head and meet your eyes and I can feel the burning fire all the way down to my centre.

     

    “Spread your legs.”

    “Are you talking dirty to me?”

    You sound amused and you tease me for a moment, not letting me kiss you, until you relent and crush our lips together fiercely. I feel you doing my biding and spreading your legs under me and I lift up. I just need to touch you, I can’t wait any longer. I slide my hand inside your pants, your damp curls tickling my fingers as I move lower and sink into hot welcoming wetness. God you are drenched.

     

    “You are so wet.”

    Wonder colours my voice. I had almost forgotten how good you could feel.

    “Tina.” You throw your head back, clutching at my arm and moan breathlessly and it’s the most beautiful thing I have ever heard.

    But I want more, I want it all, I want to watch you come undone under my hands, under my lips and tongue.

     

    “I just want to fuck you.”

    I hear you whimper and you strain your neck to meet me as I let my body sink and kiss you. I thrust my tongue inside your mouth as I thrust my fingers inside you. I’d crawl inside you if I could.

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    3. Wow! That was an amazing depiction of an exceptionally hot scene. My favorite line: Your eyes are asking me what your head doesn’t let you voice. I love your work so please post something again soon.

    5. Great line from this wonderful snapshot of their lives: “You say it like you feel lost, like you are caught in a story you didn’t write and you don’t like the place you find yourself at.” Exactly. I feel their sense of urgency….that they would explode at a single touch.

    9. Really enjoyed this chapter from Tina’s point of view. It was so HOT, just like Tina this season. Now, we need to read Bette’s point of view. Please? This was great, please write more soon for us. Thanks again for sharing this with us.

    17. I just want to thank anyone who took the time to read Paradise Lost & Found, the views count was a very pleasant surprise :D and I wanted to thank especially everyone who took the time to leave a reply. You guys rock, thank you so much. Feedback makes it all worth while :D So I thought I should just write some quick (or not so quick *cough* everyone feel free to skip this part) replies and here they are: Kendra35: Ah, I live to make people I meet speechless *evil* as long as they regain the ability to speak afterwards otherwise who’d be there to talk to me? *shock* Lol. Now seriously thank you for your words. I think you made my head swell. In a good way that is… and I’m just going to shut up now, lol. Bailey: Thanks :D Well, you got your wish, I just decided to write part 2 – Bette’s POV. I hope you like this one too.SydneyWade: Thank you :D Yeah, it was such a hot scene that it made me want to see more of it and there seemed to be so much subtext left to explore that I just had the urge to fill in the missing pieces. I’m glad you liked it. And that is one of my favourite lines from what I wrote too. kbergin47: Thank you :D Ermm… well, I kind of did take a shower after writing it, lol.azmama: Thanks :D That is another one of my favourite lines from this story. I confess I was torn between chuckling and being serious while writing it because I thought since the theme for this season is being meta that was me trying my hand at being a wee bit tongue in cheek about the writing of the show *blush* I am glad that you could feel their sense of urgency while reading this, that was what I was trying to convey. They were denying their feelings for so long and now finally it has reached a breaking point and they just can’t help themselves and I wanted to capture that. allyemmerson: Thank you :D Oh, wow, a award winning author read my wee story *bows* *blush*AmandaMG: Thanks :D It’s good to be here. And again with the wow at a award winning author reading my story *bows* ecstasythrumusic: Thank you :D It was a pleasure to try my hand at a L Word fic. Though I really couldn’t help myself, this season is taking me to a whole new level of obsessive *blush* I feel that Tina went to Bette with a plan to see where they stood with each other and then she just threw caution and rational thinking out the window, lol. I think the whole cheating situation is weighting heavily on her mind hence the mentioning of Jodie’s name in almost every conversation but at the same time Bette is the love of her life and she is drawn to her.Dainty: Thank you :D I so agree with you, Tina is smoking hot this season. Ok, I always thought she was hot all through the seasons but this one has seen her taking her hotness to a whole new level :D So you got an answer to your wishes and I did wrote Bette POV, I hope it’s not a ‘be careful what you wish for’ situation and you like it. pattifloatn: Thanks :D I had never tried my hand at writing a first person POV and I had never written a L word fic so I was a bit worried about how it would turn out. I wanted to do Tina’s justice, both she and Bette are such complex characters and they find themselves in a messy situation that is pretty much open to interpretation. It was fun and scary to write. I’m glad you liked it.Ic2138: Thank you :D I watched it a lot *cough* one could even argue that writing Bette’s POV was just an excuse to watch it a few more times, lol. I’m glad you liked the additions.BetteAndTinaForever: Thank you for reading :D And since I have this chance here, thank you for all the spoilers you dug up for us *bows* And another award winning author reading my story, tks *bows again* You made my weeks :Dntnrml61: Thank you :Djb621: Thank you :D Yep, more coming up.yws: Thanks :D Lol. Have fun *wink*slayergirlkal: Thank you :D Speechless is quite high praise :D Good speechless I mean, lol.Rau: Thanks :D Mmm… you know the 2nd scene was so amazing on the screen and so well done and it feels so complete that it’s quite hard to try and add anything to it. But I’ll never say never :D

    18. Wow, that was spectacular! A thoughtful and beautiful interpretation of that scene. You are a very talented writer. I sure hope you stick around and treat us with more of your stories.

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