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    Paradise lost & found

    Story written on February 18, 2008 by sabina.
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    5.06 A longer look at the kitchen scene

    You rake your nails down my back not too gently while you suck on my tongue. I hear a distant moan and I’m pretty sure it came from me. I start a slow thrusting rhythm with my fingers, rotating them to rub as much of your walls as possible.

     

     I feel your calves on my butt, your legs sliding open for as far as they will go. I pull my mouth away from yours to kiss your neck. Your hands move up my back to rest on my head holding me close to you as I move down your neck, kissing, sucking and biting gently. I can feel your hips pushing against me and I speed up the thrusting motion of my hand but still I stay away from your swollen clit. You whimper as I continue my trek down to kiss your breasts.

    I can tell you are close and not in the mood to be teased and I’m definitively not in the mood to tease. We have been waiting for too long already. I pull the cup of your bra down on one side to reveal your engorged nipple. I extend my tongue and lick it in one flat stroke, a prelude of things to come. I feel my mouth watering as your hands tighten convulsively in my hair and you back arches in a desperate offering. I take your nipple in my mouth and suck on it, hard.

    “T…” you choke on my name and I feel your muscles clamping down on my fingers as you come. I keep the thrusting motion of my fingers in you prolonging your orgasm and then I slow down as I feel you start to relax.

     

    I lift myself so I can watch you and then without any warning I press my thumb down on your neglected swollen throbbing nub and rub you hard and rub you fast and you come again, hard.

    Head thrown back, eyes closed tight, mouth open in a silent scream, neck muscles standing out, one breast bared to the air stiff nipple shining in wet perfection, a fine glow of sweat covering you, you are the picture of perfection and I almost feel like crying in happiness at being allowed to witness it again.

     

    You come down from your orgasm and I am there to catch you with gentle lips and tender hands. I kiss you softly and smooth your hair back from your forehead.

     

    I’m sure reality will come crashing down on us pretty soon but right now we have this. That deeply satisfied glazed look on your eyes that tells me you remember no other name but mine. This hot, wet and aching connection that is so inevitable like the sunrise.

     

    THE END

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    3. Wow! That was an amazing depiction of an exceptionally hot scene. My favorite line: Your eyes are asking me what your head doesn’t let you voice. I love your work so please post something again soon.

    5. Great line from this wonderful snapshot of their lives: “You say it like you feel lost, like you are caught in a story you didn’t write and you don’t like the place you find yourself at.” Exactly. I feel their sense of urgency….that they would explode at a single touch.

    9. Really enjoyed this chapter from Tina’s point of view. It was so HOT, just like Tina this season. Now, we need to read Bette’s point of view. Please? This was great, please write more soon for us. Thanks again for sharing this with us.

    17. I just want to thank anyone who took the time to read Paradise Lost & Found, the views count was a very pleasant surprise :D and I wanted to thank especially everyone who took the time to leave a reply. You guys rock, thank you so much. Feedback makes it all worth while :D So I thought I should just write some quick (or not so quick *cough* everyone feel free to skip this part) replies and here they are: Kendra35: Ah, I live to make people I meet speechless *evil* as long as they regain the ability to speak afterwards otherwise who’d be there to talk to me? *shock* Lol. Now seriously thank you for your words. I think you made my head swell. In a good way that is… and I’m just going to shut up now, lol. Bailey: Thanks :D Well, you got your wish, I just decided to write part 2 – Bette’s POV. I hope you like this one too.SydneyWade: Thank you :D Yeah, it was such a hot scene that it made me want to see more of it and there seemed to be so much subtext left to explore that I just had the urge to fill in the missing pieces. I’m glad you liked it. And that is one of my favourite lines from what I wrote too. kbergin47: Thank you :D Ermm… well, I kind of did take a shower after writing it, lol.azmama: Thanks :D That is another one of my favourite lines from this story. I confess I was torn between chuckling and being serious while writing it because I thought since the theme for this season is being meta that was me trying my hand at being a wee bit tongue in cheek about the writing of the show *blush* I am glad that you could feel their sense of urgency while reading this, that was what I was trying to convey. They were denying their feelings for so long and now finally it has reached a breaking point and they just can’t help themselves and I wanted to capture that. allyemmerson: Thank you :D Oh, wow, a award winning author read my wee story *bows* *blush*AmandaMG: Thanks :D It’s good to be here. And again with the wow at a award winning author reading my story *bows* ecstasythrumusic: Thank you :D It was a pleasure to try my hand at a L Word fic. Though I really couldn’t help myself, this season is taking me to a whole new level of obsessive *blush* I feel that Tina went to Bette with a plan to see where they stood with each other and then she just threw caution and rational thinking out the window, lol. I think the whole cheating situation is weighting heavily on her mind hence the mentioning of Jodie’s name in almost every conversation but at the same time Bette is the love of her life and she is drawn to her.Dainty: Thank you :D I so agree with you, Tina is smoking hot this season. Ok, I always thought she was hot all through the seasons but this one has seen her taking her hotness to a whole new level :D So you got an answer to your wishes and I did wrote Bette POV, I hope it’s not a ‘be careful what you wish for’ situation and you like it. pattifloatn: Thanks :D I had never tried my hand at writing a first person POV and I had never written a L word fic so I was a bit worried about how it would turn out. I wanted to do Tina’s justice, both she and Bette are such complex characters and they find themselves in a messy situation that is pretty much open to interpretation. It was fun and scary to write. I’m glad you liked it.Ic2138: Thank you :D I watched it a lot *cough* one could even argue that writing Bette’s POV was just an excuse to watch it a few more times, lol. I’m glad you liked the additions.BetteAndTinaForever: Thank you for reading :D And since I have this chance here, thank you for all the spoilers you dug up for us *bows* And another award winning author reading my story, tks *bows again* You made my weeks :Dntnrml61: Thank you :Djb621: Thank you :D Yep, more coming up.yws: Thanks :D Lol. Have fun *wink*slayergirlkal: Thank you :D Speechless is quite high praise :D Good speechless I mean, lol.Rau: Thanks :D Mmm… you know the 2nd scene was so amazing on the screen and so well done and it feels so complete that it’s quite hard to try and add anything to it. But I’ll never say never :D

    18. Wow, that was spectacular! A thoughtful and beautiful interpretation of that scene. You are a very talented writer. I sure hope you stick around and treat us with more of your stories.

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