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Peculiar Hesitation – Chapter 9
T, youre an eternal optimist.
Dana looked out in the stands after her win, her hand blocking the sun from her eyes. She finally spotted the trio and saw them get up and proceed to walk away. She cursed to herself and ran over to the bleachers, jumping up and grabbing the railing. She struggled to pull herself up, not caring that some spectators were shooting her dirty glances while she swung her leg over the railing. She called out for Alice to stop. She ran up the stairs two at a time and finally reached her friends, her breathing ragged. Hey.
Alice stared at the ground, deliberately avoiding Danas gaze. Bette patted Danas arm, Good job, were real proud of you, Dana. That was a fantastic match.
Thanks, she responded, her thoughts focused only on Alice.
Tina took Bettes hand, Dana, Im so proud of you. Bette and I are going to find some food. Well find you two.
Dana nodded by course of habit and tapped Alices shoulder, Hey.
Alice snuck a peek at Dana and then returned to staring at the ground. Hey. Good game.
You werent going to stay were you? When Alice didnt move or speak, Dana continued, I dont think I expected you to. Um, do you thinkuhare you ok? You look tense.
Jack called. I should get back.
Whos Jack?
Hes just a guy. Were supposed to go out later.
Oh. Of course, you moved on. Dana turned to walk away.
Dont walk away from me, Dana. You just upped and left me with not a single word. What am I supposed to do?
Is it serious?
I dont know. I mean, I like him, but were not like an item or anything like that.
Oh. Um. Well I should showernow. Talk later?
Alice nodded and disappeared into the crowd.
Dana bumped into Tina by the bar. Hi.
Tina smiled, Hi, you want something? My treat.
Just a water, thanks. Is Alice still here?
I think she found a ride back to L.A. or at least thats what she told Bette.
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(42 votes, average: 3.26 out of 5)
mmm, I’m begining to understand Dana lol, keep going.
interesting…i like it…poor dana and poor alice!!
Wow, what’s going on with Alice, adn when will she find out the truth about why Dana was so late????
oh I hope that they can work this out they so belong together I can’t wait to see what happens I love it please post soon
*ANGST* i love it!