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Peculiar Hesitation
Alice sat at The Planet, a peculiar hesitation in her curiosity. She sipped her morning coffee watching Dana eat her cranberry muffin. She marveled at how her girlfriend could look so cute doing the most mundane things. Other than her silent appreciation, it was a day like any other day for Alice. Coffee, work, and good friends.
Dana flashed her a brilliant smile and Alice pointed to her teeth, indicating something was obstructing the view of those pearly whites and thus distracting her. Dana in her slight embarrassment buried her face in her napkin to pick her teeth. Did I get it? she mouthed, hoping no one else noticed what transpired.
Alice nodded indicating that once again Danas smile would be perfect for the next time it was revealed. She flipped the newspaper page while taking another sip from her coffee.
Shane, Jenny, Bette, and Tina were absorbed in their own conversation, seemingly unaware of Alices and Danas presence, otherwise they simply took it for granted. Dane grew fidgety at the lack of conversation directed her way and stood up, a touch of nervous energy flowing from her. As she moved towards Alice and placed a hand on her shoulder there was an extra bounce in her step and hurriedness in her voice. Alice, come with me. Guys, excuse us for a little while. Bette motioned that it was ok to leave. Dana grabbed Alice by the arm and dragged her to the rest room. She forcibly kissed Alice, sending her crashing noisily into the stall door. Weve had many good times in the bathroom, she chuckled while reaching into her pocket.
Alice agreed wholeheartedly, her moans of pleasure confirming that. She continued making useless efforts to undress Dane. Her arms flailing at Danas pants. She tired of reaching for the buttons and instead stared absentmindedly at her lover who was bouncing on the balls of her feet in the middle of the floor.
Dana lowered herself to the ground, resting one knee on the cold tile temporarily forgetting that she was in a public bathroom and touching anything was gross. Then again it was the Planet and at least there were conscientious efforts by the staff to keep this bathroom immaculate. She teased Alice, playfully lifting up her shirt, exposing the porcelain skin of Alices stomach and then kissing it.
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(38 votes, average: 3.82 out of 5)
I love this story. I cant wait to see what happens.
This is so fun! Can’t wait for the next one…
Great start – i love it – and have to agree with sulky – there is something intriguing and yet off about jenny wiritng a tory on alice – but really a great story – loved the bathroom proposal.
i love this! not just cuz its alice and dana but cuz its pure genius. great story. keep ’em comin’. there aint enough stories about dana and alice on here
Why do I like the prospect of Jenny writing a story about Alice? I don’t know why, I’ve seen the kind of things she writes, and it creeps me out, but still…
So, I’m getting married in two months, so I’m SUCH a sucker for anything to do with weddings and engagements and all th at, so when Dana asked Alice to marry her, I did a little squeal and a cheer followed by a “Yay!” So obviously, you know how much I liked that, because it was so sweet.
But I think the best parts of this story are the little things, like the food caught in the teeth; the mouthed rather than spoken conversations; the subtle facial and body cues that alert what each other to what the the other is feeling. It really establishes the relationship and does a fine job of denoting the passage of time, because it takes a while to build up something like that, even if they were best friends. I’m looking forward to more updates!
I like this and I hope there is more to some so please post soon.
I loved this story! Great job. Keep going, if you please. *sweet smile*