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    Perspectives, Bette Chapter 17

    Story written on October 30, 2005 by perfection.
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    Author Notes:

    Bette wakes up to darkness and uncertainty.

    Previously-

    “Charge to 200Clear!”  I hear the thud of the defibrillator as my body jumps.

    One of them places two fingers on her..my neck.  “Nothing.”

    “Charge to 300Clear!”  Again, my body jumps as a thud resonates from the machine.  Again, she checks my pulse, before looking at her partner a shaking her head.

    “Charge to 360.Clear!”

    *Note:  This occurred way back in chapter 12.5.  Since then, Bette has been unconscious and I haven’t had to write anything.  I also realized that I had her wake up in the previous chapter but didn’t write her perspective of it.  I’ve combined chapters 16 and 17 of Bette’s view for you here.

    Chapter 17-

    My head is pounding, pulsating, bringing me out of my sleep.  I feel cold but I’m not shivering.  I feel the beating of my heart pounding in my head and hear the faint beep of some kind of machine.  That’s not a dream I’d like to have recur.  Shifting positions I notice I’m not in my own bed.  Uh oh, what did I do this time?  Am I in someone else’s bed again?  How am I ever going to get Tina back if I keep doing this?  I must have been pretty wasted last night from the way I feel and the fact that I can’t remember a thing.

    “Bette”  The words drift into my consciousness from a distant place.  As if suspended in time and space I can’t find the energy to answer.  The voice is familiar.soothing.gently coaxing me from my last layer of slumber.  “.right here.”  The words finally break through and awaken me enough to think.

    “MmmmmmT,” I say after recognizing her voice.  Opening my eyes to take in my surroundings, I see nothing.  Everything is blackdarkempty.  Where am I?  Is it the middle of the night and I’m just waking from a nightmare?  “T?  Where am I?”

    “Baby, you’re in the hospital,” she tells me.  “It’s a long story, but I’ll explain everything.  Right now they’re getting ready to take you for some tests.  How do you feel?  Are you in any pain?”  How do I feel?  I feel terrible.  My head is pounding.  Waitin the hospital?  What am I doing in the hospital?  Oh nothat wasn’t a nightmare!  I was shotand now I’m blind.

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    1. P wow a second chapter from you see I was waiting for 5 months to pass?? has it been?? wow how time flies LOLI think you were telling me the other night to slow it down?? Look see here I am taking a minute to write a comment.I’m glad to see you writing again, this story is great and I’m enjoying reading it. Hope thing have slowed down and just remember to take some time for yourself.

    2. poor bette, back into darkness and not knowing what’s going on…so is tina really there because it’s sort of an obligation b/c your ex-wife is in the hospital, or is she really wanna be there for bette b/c she still loves her?

    5. I started reading your story months ago, today I was curious to know if you posted new chapters, and yeessss, you did it. Thank you, and now, please continue, I really enjoy your story. I hope everything is fine for you now (sorry for my english).

    7. Wonderful to have you back. Life is sometimes wonderful sometimes shitty and somehow the world keeps turning even when we really need it to stop.I’ve been thinking about those two stuck in the hospital! To be very selfish here glad that you are going to try and write more. Oh and I’ve been looking for a guide – put my name down in one of the follower slots!

    8. I know I’m late to the comment party, but I just wanted to say THANK YOU for updating. I really enjoy this story. There are so many levels and layers that you peel away by telling different angles of the same story. Please keep it going.

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