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Phobia (Chapter 3)
“See what you did?” I said to Shane even though I knew it was as much my fault as it was hers.
“So, suddenly everything that goes wrong is my problem?”
Arguing wasn’t getting us anywhere so I pushed past her with little resistance. “Forget it.”
I had gotten out of Alice’s apartment door and halfway down the staircase before Shane emerged at the top of the steps, yelling down to me as I was about to exit through the main door. “Carmen!” Against my better judgment, I glanced back up at her. “I’m so fucking sorry!”
I almost wanted to believe her if I hadn’t already heard those words so many times before. “It’s too little too late, Shane.” Emotional distress was written all over her face, but rather than let my own grief show, I left; Just like she had left me too many times to count.
Dana-
Fifteen minutes after Alice had called me, she showed up on my doorstep an obvious wreck. And although it had been forever since we had last hung out or even talked, the air between us was restful and it was as though I had my best friend back, or ex-girlfriend for that matter.
“Promise me, that if you and Lara ever have kids, you won’t fight in front of them.” She requested, dead-panned.
After all, it was a bit of an odd request. “Well, you’re talking big leaps, but sure. I promise.” She was greatly relived yet I was thoroughly confused as to why she acting like this. “Can you tell me what’s going on now?” I stepped back to let her inside but she gave an exasperated sigh and sat down on the porch steps.
“Shane came over to my apartment and-”
“Wait, Shane’s back?” I interjected, sitting down next to her.
She rolled her eyes and started again. “Yes, she’s back. Can I continue?” I quit talking, feeling like I was being scolded, but she softened. “I’m sorry; it’s not your fault. Anyways, Shane came over to my apartment and almost as soon as she got there, Carmen showed up and let herself in with her spare key, then-”
“Excuse me for interrupting again, but why does Carmen have a key to your apartment?”
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hey thanx for warning me… ya i loved this post a little worried about carmen but maybe her in trouble is just what it takes to get sharmen back together. ya ya ya i know i am a happy sharmen lover for life sorry. maybe soon? ayway keep it up its great.
hahaha De_leish_ous i thought i was the only one doing that.. i highlight all the alice words in a page and just skip all the other storylines hehe well nice update 2geeky.. u left us wonder what alice was going to say and i hope carmen is ok. oh and i am so glad the alice/carmen bond is pretty good i love it…
Excellent update.. as always.. can’t wait to find out what kind of trouble carmen has gotten herself into… lol great shane and dana scene by the way love danas ‘im not taken any of your shit’ additude.. as for shane, she needs to get her shit togeather and take responsibility for her actions.. just a thought.. anyways please post soon.. like now cuz i need more..:P
Keep going plzzzzz!!
Oh an update very soon!! Wanna find out what happened to Carmen!! Love the story so far!!
I was surprised that Alice called Dana. She must have really had nowhere else to go. lol Update soon so we can find out what’s going on with Carmen.
lol
OK I am still reading!
Normally if I’m honest I just skip through stories about all the characters until I get to Alice/Dana but this one has me reading everything! Awesome post 2geeky, I just want to know more and more about everything so ya gotta post soon! xx
yay! can you tell my happy mood? can you? lol i hope you can, do i gotta say it? ok, ok i will- I LOVED IT! i really like how you get into the characters head and show us what they are thinking etc you write them 2 well! Poor Al! just want to hug her lol and yep, i agree U R A TEASE! i wanna know what Alice was going to tell Dana! lol is it?… I need you? i want you to leave Lara or I’m leaving? lol give me something babe!- and also aside from leaving me wanting you’ve left me worried what could of happened to Carmen? dun dun dun! lol Well i can’t wait! plz post soon! u r… well i must invent a new word because great and fantastic just wont do :) x0x0