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Phobia (Chapter 3)
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“Everybody has a key to my apartment.” She was right. All of our friends did have a key to her place, and I was always paranoid about her safety. “However, like I was saying, Carmen showed up and before I knew it, they just started going at it.” She rested her head in her hands, yet I still heard what she said next. “And this might not make sense but it reminded so much of when my parents used to fight before they got a divorce.”
Things were becoming clearer and when I saw how much pain this dilemma was causing her, instinct took over as I tried to comfort her by placing a hand on her shoulder but she stood up abruptly and paced back and forth in front of me. “Alice, I’m really sorry that this is happening.”
“I just wish there was something I could do.” She didn’t hear my apology.
“Sometimes you can’t be there for everybody; The same way everybody can’t be there for you.”
Her mood was shifting but I couldn’t discern whether she was angry or depressed. “What the hell happened to everybody?”
This conversation was making me dejected. “Happy times don’t last forever.” Great, I had crushed her further with my remark. “But we can still hope.”
“Yeah, right.” There’s the sarcasm again. “Hope.” She scanned the surroundings before giving me something she hadn’t given me for a long time- a smile. “Thanks for listening to my rant even though I probably just ruined your night.”
“Actually you just made my night by paying me a visit. I’ve missed you.” I was being serious but the grin on my face wouldn’t fade and her response only made it expand.
“I’ve missed you too.” However, the confessions came to a halt when her expression quickly changed to worry. “Oh fuck.”
Maybe I had said too much. “What?”
“I left Shane and Carmen alone with no supervision; I need to get back to my place.”
“Al,” She looked back before stopping to listen. “They’re adults. They know what there doing.”
She wasn’t convinced. “I have some very sharp knives in my kitchen.”
“Yeah, I’m coming with you.”
Shane-
“You’re still alive.” Dana observed after racing inside the apartment with Alice trailing behind. “Where’s Carm-” she slowly realized what I was holding in my hands. “What are you doing?”
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hey thanx for warning me… ya i loved this post a little worried about carmen but maybe her in trouble is just what it takes to get sharmen back together. ya ya ya i know i am a happy sharmen lover for life sorry. maybe soon? ayway keep it up its great.
hahaha De_leish_ous i thought i was the only one doing that.. i highlight all the alice words in a page and just skip all the other storylines hehe well nice update 2geeky.. u left us wonder what alice was going to say and i hope carmen is ok. oh and i am so glad the alice/carmen bond is pretty good i love it…
Excellent update.. as always.. can’t wait to find out what kind of trouble carmen has gotten herself into… lol great shane and dana scene by the way love danas ‘im not taken any of your shit’ additude.. as for shane, she needs to get her shit togeather and take responsibility for her actions.. just a thought.. anyways please post soon.. like now cuz i need more..:P
Keep going plzzzzz!!
Oh an update very soon!! Wanna find out what happened to Carmen!! Love the story so far!!
I was surprised that Alice called Dana. She must have really had nowhere else to go. lol Update soon so we can find out what’s going on with Carmen.
lol
OK I am still reading!
Normally if I’m honest I just skip through stories about all the characters until I get to Alice/Dana but this one has me reading everything! Awesome post 2geeky, I just want to know more and more about everything so ya gotta post soon! xx
yay! can you tell my happy mood? can you? lol i hope you can, do i gotta say it? ok, ok i will- I LOVED IT! i really like how you get into the characters head and show us what they are thinking etc you write them 2 well! Poor Al! just want to hug her lol and yep, i agree U R A TEASE! i wanna know what Alice was going to tell Dana! lol is it?… I need you? i want you to leave Lara or I’m leaving? lol give me something babe!- and also aside from leaving me wanting you’ve left me worried what could of happened to Carmen? dun dun dun! lol Well i can’t wait! plz post soon! u r… well i must invent a new word because great and fantastic just wont do :) x0x0