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Phobia (Chapter 4)
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“Okay.” She snickered at my comment and continued disrobing the tree. When she was all done, it was something less than pleasant, but it wasn’t as awful as it had been before. “So, I heard Shane was back.”
I wasn’t surprised that everyone else already knew; word gets around pretty fast in our circle of dysfunctional friends. “Yeah, she is.”
“Is she going to live with you?”
Re-entering the room with two mugs in hand, she graciously accepted her hot tea while I took a sip of my coffee. “I guess so. Besides someone has to take over the lease when I move out.”
It was too late to take back what I’d said as she almost choked on her drink. “You’re moving?”
“No, no. Of course not; I just meant that if I can ever find a more affordable apartment closer to work then she could take over the lease on this place.” She was noticeably relieved, as was I, but I was also mad at myself for almost spilling the truth. “So, how are you holding up?”
Rather than get depressed like she usually did when someone asked her that, she passed it off easily. “I couldn’t be better.”
“Really?”
She smiled in confirmation before turning her attention back to the tree. “Are you having any success with getting over Dana?”
With the way everybody saw right through me when it came to her and Lara, I always thought maybe I was transparent; yet my answer never changed. “I’m definitely over her.”
Another lie.
“You know I don’t believe that, but for now I’ll pretend that I do.”
“Awe, thank. I knew you trusted me.” I rolled my eyes in sarcasm before staring at the tree again; maybe if I looked at it long enough it would start to look healthier.
“Do you have any scissors?”
I was confused and slightly nervous. “Why do you need scissors? I mean, it may not look like the greatest tree in the world but that doesn’t mean you have to kill it.”
She wasn’t amused. “You left the tags on the ornaments so I’m going to cut them off; Just like my mom cut me off from her money.” It was hard to tell if she was making a joke out of it.
With a breath of relief, I pointed to the drawer of the small dresser which the desk lamp was resting on. She walked away to get the scissors as I continued talking. “This tree is hopeless; even Jenny could’ve done a better job than me and she has the worst taste in fashion.” I was expecting for her to either laugh or scold me for not being nice, but when I didn’t hear anything I turned back to look at Helena, who was deeply puzzled and holding something in her hands that wasn’t scissors.
“What is this?”
When I realized what she was holding, the coffee dropped out of my hands and my heart rate peaked at new levels.
Great, she had found my plane ticket.
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ok you have no idea how much i appreciate you chaning things for me..wow amazing and your update was great… like i said its agreat story and im not saying i dont want drama but i do want them to make up and get over it and be together again cuz its all we have with the new season coming out. but you are an amazing writer and everything you wirte is great so i have total confidence in you . the whole shane going over and saying she will wait for her and she loves her perfect thank you…
Hey now, you can borrow anything from me! with updates as great as this I’m at your feet- so do with me what you’d like! lol so I guess I’ll start from the END then work my way back up to the beginning because the end is just 2 important to leave alone- so… TICKET? WHAT TICKET WHERE IS SHE GOINGGGG? lol ok there I did it now you MUST answer it pretty plz : puppy eyes : i loved al’s line “Hey, I don’t procrastinate; I just reschedule.” so funny! The sharmen moment was sweet even though it was mostly S just shane and her taking a first step and with Carmen having heard her I’m sure she’ll come around or at least try the whole friend thing which… almost only last’s for a few laughs before they jump each others bones lol SO don’t hurt me but I STILL don’t know what Alice was going to say even though I’m leaning toward i love you, or I really miss you- or it’s the obvious “I’m leaving peace out sucka” lol so come on babe throw me a bone here lol well, I’m still in the midst of creating a new word that is worthy enough of describing how great you are :) and.. I guess I better get moving on posting a new chapter! because I deff want you to post another one asap :) x0x0x
what can i say… brilliant!!.. completely brilliant!!.. love how shane is trying to fix her mistake.. and carmen watching from her window.. where do you come up with this stuff??.. and Alice moving?!?! ok, now i definatly need more..like now please.. i mean seriously im begging you here..:P oh and by the way liked the last line in carmens point of view.. it true.. nothings going to be the same.. but then again sometimes its even better..
excellent!!!! great update… i love how shane’s doing something about her mistakes!! keep it up please… that was really sweet of shane going o carmen’s plac
Aww aren’t you the sweetie leaving me a cute little message like that, this could be the beginning of a great thing 2geeky! *wink wink nudge nudge* Now am I about to get beaten up by your g/f? Heehee, anyways, LOVING this! 1. Alice leaving…explain…now! 2. what was Alice going to say to Dana? ‘Leave that ho and come be with me coz we’re destined’- I’m close right? 3. Aww Shane’s all grown up and acting like an adult, go her. 4. cough*getdanishtogether*cough :P Man I should not be leaving feedback since I have to go to work in 2hours and I havent been to bed yet, yikes! By the way thank you so much for your comments, they make my night too! See I told you this is the beginning… we could be the next danish…just think about it :P Peace out xx