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Phobia (Chapter 4)
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“She’s not here.” At least her family was protective although that probably wasn’t a good thing in my case.
However, I insisted. “Look, I’m not here to say what you think I am so please just let me see her.”
“I said, she’s not here.” Her glare was fixed directly on me as she firmly restated her words. “Please leave.”
My hope was lost and I turned to leave, defeated. Until a new wave of determination hit me and I quickly turned back. “Okay, I’ll leave if you promise to tell Carmen something for me.” I was in no position to make demands and her look confirmed my conviction as I pressed on. “Tell her that if and when she ever decides to forgive me, I’ll be waiting for her. But even if she can’t forgive me then I’ll always be there for her as a friend.” I didn’t know if she was softening or if she was growing annoyed; maybe it was both. “And tell her that I love her.”
No sooner had I gotten the words out of my mouth before she slammed the door in my face.
But I’d taken the first step towards fixing the mess I’ve made; All I could do now was wait.
Walking back to Al’s Mini, something nagged at me to turn around and when I did, I knew why.
Carmen had been watching everything from her window.
Alice-
“Do you think it’s too much?” I asked, standing back to observe what I’d been working on for the past two hours with Helena beside me, nodding her head in approval.
“A tad.” She moved past me in my living room where there was now a slanted, distraught Christmas tree perched in the corner. “Why did you wait so long to put up your tree?”
Trying to repair the damage I had caused was too much for me to handle as I stayed rooted to my spot watching her strip a few decorations from it in hopes of making it appear somewhat presentable. “Because I forgot.”
“I know you too well, Alice. You procrastinate as though your life depends on it.”
Defending myself was a lost cause but I still made an attempt. “Hey, I don’t procrastinate; I just reschedule.”
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ok you have no idea how much i appreciate you chaning things for me..wow amazing and your update was great… like i said its agreat story and im not saying i dont want drama but i do want them to make up and get over it and be together again cuz its all we have with the new season coming out. but you are an amazing writer and everything you wirte is great so i have total confidence in you . the whole shane going over and saying she will wait for her and she loves her perfect thank you…
Hey now, you can borrow anything from me! with updates as great as this I’m at your feet- so do with me what you’d like! lol so I guess I’ll start from the END then work my way back up to the beginning because the end is just 2 important to leave alone- so… TICKET? WHAT TICKET WHERE IS SHE GOINGGGG? lol ok there I did it now you MUST answer it pretty plz : puppy eyes : i loved al’s line “Hey, I don’t procrastinate; I just reschedule.” so funny! The sharmen moment was sweet even though it was mostly S just shane and her taking a first step and with Carmen having heard her I’m sure she’ll come around or at least try the whole friend thing which… almost only last’s for a few laughs before they jump each others bones lol SO don’t hurt me but I STILL don’t know what Alice was going to say even though I’m leaning toward i love you, or I really miss you- or it’s the obvious “I’m leaving peace out sucka” lol so come on babe throw me a bone here lol well, I’m still in the midst of creating a new word that is worthy enough of describing how great you are :) and.. I guess I better get moving on posting a new chapter! because I deff want you to post another one asap :) x0x0x
what can i say… brilliant!!.. completely brilliant!!.. love how shane is trying to fix her mistake.. and carmen watching from her window.. where do you come up with this stuff??.. and Alice moving?!?! ok, now i definatly need more..like now please.. i mean seriously im begging you here..:P oh and by the way liked the last line in carmens point of view.. it true.. nothings going to be the same.. but then again sometimes its even better..
excellent!!!! great update… i love how shane’s doing something about her mistakes!! keep it up please… that was really sweet of shane going o carmen’s plac
Aww aren’t you the sweetie leaving me a cute little message like that, this could be the beginning of a great thing 2geeky! *wink wink nudge nudge* Now am I about to get beaten up by your g/f? Heehee, anyways, LOVING this! 1. Alice leaving…explain…now! 2. what was Alice going to say to Dana? ‘Leave that ho and come be with me coz we’re destined’- I’m close right? 3. Aww Shane’s all grown up and acting like an adult, go her. 4. cough*getdanishtogether*cough :P Man I should not be leaving feedback since I have to go to work in 2hours and I havent been to bed yet, yikes! By the way thank you so much for your comments, they make my night too! See I told you this is the beginning… we could be the next danish…just think about it :P Peace out xx