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Phobia (Chapter 4)
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There was no way I’d be falling asleep anytime soon despite the time; I had too much racing around in my head.
So, I closed the door shut with a click and walked back into the kitchen to think alone. But unbeknownst to me, after I had closed the bedroom door, her eyes fluttered open and she had been feigning sleep.
Shane-
Morning announced it’s presence with a massive hangover that was so bad I wasn’t sure if I would ever recover from it. But after chewing stick after stick of cinnamon gum and downing plenty of double shots, I was in stable condition.
“Good morning.” Alice walked into the living room to find me hunched over on the couch with my hands resting on the palms of my hands. “Did you sleep well?”
I almost felt like throwing something at her when I heard the sardonic laughter that followed her question; I wasn’t in the mood for jokes. “I slept fine; But now that you’re up, I need the keys to your car.”
Her smile died in an instant upon consuming my words. “Why do you need my car?”
“Because I don’t wanna take a cab to Carmen’s place.”
Yeah, she was confused. “Carmen’s?”
“Yep.” I spent the entire morning debating whether or not to actually go through with my plan, but I knew it had to be done. “So where’s your keys?”
She was nonplussed as she slid her keys off the lamp side table and placed them into the palm of my hand, weary eyed about the situation. “What are you going to do?”
“You’ll see.” My reply probably didn’t help her worried state, but before I fled the apartment, I glanced back at her and saw the dark circles under her eyes. Evidently, I wasn’t the only one who had trouble sleeping; yet I ignored the urge to tease her about it like she had done to me and soon, I found myself driving over to Carmen’s home.
My hands were sweaty and my thoughts were begging me to turn back as I raised my hand to knock on the front door of the house and I stepped back waiting for someone to answer. When one of Carmen’s sisters opened the door, I lost my vocals and paused for words. “I need to speak with Carmen.”
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ok you have no idea how much i appreciate you chaning things for me..wow amazing and your update was great… like i said its agreat story and im not saying i dont want drama but i do want them to make up and get over it and be together again cuz its all we have with the new season coming out. but you are an amazing writer and everything you wirte is great so i have total confidence in you . the whole shane going over and saying she will wait for her and she loves her perfect thank you…
Hey now, you can borrow anything from me! with updates as great as this I’m at your feet- so do with me what you’d like! lol so I guess I’ll start from the END then work my way back up to the beginning because the end is just 2 important to leave alone- so… TICKET? WHAT TICKET WHERE IS SHE GOINGGGG? lol ok there I did it now you MUST answer it pretty plz : puppy eyes : i loved al’s line “Hey, I don’t procrastinate; I just reschedule.” so funny! The sharmen moment was sweet even though it was mostly S just shane and her taking a first step and with Carmen having heard her I’m sure she’ll come around or at least try the whole friend thing which… almost only last’s for a few laughs before they jump each others bones lol SO don’t hurt me but I STILL don’t know what Alice was going to say even though I’m leaning toward i love you, or I really miss you- or it’s the obvious “I’m leaving peace out sucka” lol so come on babe throw me a bone here lol well, I’m still in the midst of creating a new word that is worthy enough of describing how great you are :) and.. I guess I better get moving on posting a new chapter! because I deff want you to post another one asap :) x0x0x
what can i say… brilliant!!.. completely brilliant!!.. love how shane is trying to fix her mistake.. and carmen watching from her window.. where do you come up with this stuff??.. and Alice moving?!?! ok, now i definatly need more..like now please.. i mean seriously im begging you here..:P oh and by the way liked the last line in carmens point of view.. it true.. nothings going to be the same.. but then again sometimes its even better..
excellent!!!! great update… i love how shane’s doing something about her mistakes!! keep it up please… that was really sweet of shane going o carmen’s plac
Aww aren’t you the sweetie leaving me a cute little message like that, this could be the beginning of a great thing 2geeky! *wink wink nudge nudge* Now am I about to get beaten up by your g/f? Heehee, anyways, LOVING this! 1. Alice leaving…explain…now! 2. what was Alice going to say to Dana? ‘Leave that ho and come be with me coz we’re destined’- I’m close right? 3. Aww Shane’s all grown up and acting like an adult, go her. 4. cough*getdanishtogether*cough :P Man I should not be leaving feedback since I have to go to work in 2hours and I havent been to bed yet, yikes! By the way thank you so much for your comments, they make my night too! See I told you this is the beginning… we could be the next danish…just think about it :P Peace out xx