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Phobia (Chapter 6)
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Her eyes were wary. “Depends on what type of question.”
“It’s nothing serious if that’s what you’re implying.” She brought a fist up to her mouth and coughed, a tall tale sign she was nervous.
“What is it?”
I had to be certain she couldn’t back out of it. “Promise?”
She swallowed. Hard. “Fine.”
“Okay, the first night Shane got back, or the last time you and I hung out, you were going to tell me something.” Panic replaced her skepticism when she registered what I was going to ask. “What was it?”
“I. Wait, that’s a serious question.”
She was defensive but I forced her hand. “You promised.”
“Damn it.” When she knew she had been cornered , I almost felt proud, but after all, her answer might not be something I wanted to hear. She took a deep breath. “I was only going to say that I missed spending time with you.”
I mentally berated myself for the wide smile threatening to break out onto my face as I tried to take some of the stress off of her conscience. “See, that wasn’t so bad was it?”
She wasn’t done talking though. “I also wanted to know if it was my fault that you left me for Lara.” Somehow, our roles had been reversed. I lacked the adequate words to vindicate my side of the story and she looked away, depressed. “But that was then. I don’t want to know now.”
“Alice, I-”
“I don’t want to know.” She repeated, opening the door no more than an inch before I reached around her and shut it firmly.
Possibly if she was staring me in the eyes, I could grasp some sort of idea of what she was thinking, yet her focus lingered on the floor causing me to duck my head down and compelling her to look at me. “I didn’t leave you for Lara.” She gently shook her head, not believing my words. “And it wasn’t your fault, it was mine because-”
“Please, just stop talking. When you say things like that it only serves to hurt me more.” She swiped at the corner of her eye, baffling me as to why she would be near tears. “I already fucked up by talking to you since it’ll take me a good month or more to forget about this.”
I still didn’t understand. “But, you said you’ve moved on.”
“If you believed me then I guess I’m a very convincing liar.”
Blank. That’s all my mind was at this point. I didn’t know if I felt elated that she wasn’t as over me as she claimed, or if I felt guilty that I’d cornered her into admitting something she was trying to put behind her, or if I felt miserable knowing that my irrational fear caused her to blame herself for our breakup. Quite possibly, it was all three emotions clashing together, preventing my mind from functioning properly. “I don’t know what to say.”
“Nothing.” She seemed distant when she spoke. “You’re not supposed to say anything. It’ll make it easier for me to leave next week.”
My eyes squinted as my breathing came to an abrupt halt. “What are you talking about?”
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Ok what is it with all the danish writer’s putting themselves down lately?! I’m telling you this is an awesome story and I love how you write it from 4 perspectives, its original and totally enthralling! Don’t doubt that. I really hope you don’t give up on this because I really will come over to your place and do some best friend talking to you! :P And awww for your so sweet comment, sadly yessum I have been rejected *sniffs* however thats a whole other story…or 5. Again awesome post and thanks! PPS :) xx
oooo and alice has dropped the bomb shell to dana…. wonder waht dana will do now.great chapter. love this story. love how it focuses on both sharmen and danish. i love it really do… can’t wait to read more – if more is by tomorrow;) post more soon..lol
Wow, I’ve finally caught up on all your updates, this is a fantastic fic and I love the different perspectives. And that things are not all simple between these ladies. I like that you had Lara have her own life and leave Dana, who was being an ass. And that Dana and Alice can still talk, no matter how hard it may be for them to get to that place. Excellent work, looking forward to reading more;) Please post soon!
I can’t wait to see how Dana reacts to Alice’s news
Alright, now i left you a message to further address you because if i wrote it all here we’ll it would take up a bit of space lol ANYHOW back to the story. Which has left me without any gracious words to say because you’ve heard them all and they all very much apply to this story but however i will try my best, it was FREAKINGAWESOMELOVELYFANTASTICBRILLIANTFUNNY yes that’s a word look it up… ok or it might just be 6 words…together. lol you’re good, you’re really good i really expected it to be DANA of course danish fool me it was UTA, which i was surprised and thought it was awesome. It really did want to make me cry (which by the way isn’t a bad thing, you write it so well, it’s actually a compliment, if ya made me cry lol) but yeah, me crying at the part with Dana in the bathroom, and then Alice and her having a lil chat, it was great. Now with Uta somewhat in the picture i wonder how that’s going to play out which i know you’ll fill us in on. Shane and Carmen, oh so cute and holy CRAP she still has the ring on? can’t wait for that part. Helena freaking out about little things was funny. Poor Helena she needs s1 in her life asap. and finally to end this which ended up being long anyhow you could never hurt me, it’s actually WAY the opposite so hush! and obviously PPS, yes it is a rather dire request :) x0x0x
hope you post more soon x
I only just found this story. I love it!! Any chance for a new chapter? Please??
ok awsome update but ahhhh the happy sharmen was torture , it was super funny but still those two are dancing around the inevitable again, please let them finaly figure it out i mean carmen still ahs the ring come on….shane wake up and go get her . thanx again you totaly came through , way to go, favorite author ever…
OMFG why u quick it??? i love it keep going pleaseeeeeeeeeeee…..pleaseeeee you’re killing me
And what happens next?…… Guess we’ll never find out :(