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Phobia (Chapter 6)
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“You were talking about why Lara left,” My eyes darted back and forth, remembering the last thing I said before getting sidetracked. “You said something along the lines of being emotionally unavailable.”
“Oh. Yeah, that.” I exhaled in resignation and felt Al’s gaze fix intently on my face. “Well, there’s not much more to say. I really can’t even blame her for leaving. I was never there for her and the more she made attempts to get closer to me, the more I pushed her away.” I brought my knees up to my chest, absentmindedly fidgeting my hands together. “It just hurt more than I expected when I found out she’d been cheating on me all along.”
She blinked. “Wait, Lara was cheating on you?”
I nodded with shame. “Yeah.”
“How could, I mean that’s-” This was the first time I’d witnessed Alice being speechless. “Are you sure?”
“Almost positive.” I shrugged. “Like I said I’m not shocked or mad. It just hurts.”
She was still having a hard time wrapping her head around the news. “No offence, but I always thought you’d be the cheater.”
That hurt so much more. “When you and I were together, did you think I was cheating on you?” It was a question burning in the back of my mind for a long time.
“I was crazy back then.” She tried to pass it off as a joke as she let out a single laugh. “I’m still struggling with my sanity.”
“Did you?” I sounded harsher than intended.
She flinched and stalled for time. “I- Well, it kinda, I mean don’t get me wrong,”
“Please just tell me the truth.”
After I interrupted her stammering, she gave in and confessed. “Yes, I did.” Thought so. “Still do.”
My chest was constricting in pain. “Well, I wasn’t.” She sighed and shook her head. “Whether or not you believe me.”
Obviously, she didn’t want to discuss our history. “Look, I’m trying to help you and be a shoulder to cry on, but I can’t do that if you start talking about us. It’s taken me a long time to move on and I don’t want to remember it anymore.” I was curious about how much pain it takes before a heart is actually broken.
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Ok what is it with all the danish writer’s putting themselves down lately?! I’m telling you this is an awesome story and I love how you write it from 4 perspectives, its original and totally enthralling! Don’t doubt that. I really hope you don’t give up on this because I really will come over to your place and do some best friend talking to you! :P And awww for your so sweet comment, sadly yessum I have been rejected *sniffs* however thats a whole other story…or 5. Again awesome post and thanks! PPS :) xx
oooo and alice has dropped the bomb shell to dana…. wonder waht dana will do now.great chapter. love this story. love how it focuses on both sharmen and danish. i love it really do… can’t wait to read more – if more is by tomorrow;) post more soon..lol
Wow, I’ve finally caught up on all your updates, this is a fantastic fic and I love the different perspectives. And that things are not all simple between these ladies. I like that you had Lara have her own life and leave Dana, who was being an ass. And that Dana and Alice can still talk, no matter how hard it may be for them to get to that place. Excellent work, looking forward to reading more;) Please post soon!
I can’t wait to see how Dana reacts to Alice’s news
Alright, now i left you a message to further address you because if i wrote it all here we’ll it would take up a bit of space lol ANYHOW back to the story. Which has left me without any gracious words to say because you’ve heard them all and they all very much apply to this story but however i will try my best, it was FREAKINGAWESOMELOVELYFANTASTICBRILLIANTFUNNY yes that’s a word look it up… ok or it might just be 6 words…together. lol you’re good, you’re really good i really expected it to be DANA of course danish fool me it was UTA, which i was surprised and thought it was awesome. It really did want to make me cry (which by the way isn’t a bad thing, you write it so well, it’s actually a compliment, if ya made me cry lol) but yeah, me crying at the part with Dana in the bathroom, and then Alice and her having a lil chat, it was great. Now with Uta somewhat in the picture i wonder how that’s going to play out which i know you’ll fill us in on. Shane and Carmen, oh so cute and holy CRAP she still has the ring on? can’t wait for that part. Helena freaking out about little things was funny. Poor Helena she needs s1 in her life asap. and finally to end this which ended up being long anyhow you could never hurt me, it’s actually WAY the opposite so hush! and obviously PPS, yes it is a rather dire request :) x0x0x
hope you post more soon x
I only just found this story. I love it!! Any chance for a new chapter? Please??
ok awsome update but ahhhh the happy sharmen was torture , it was super funny but still those two are dancing around the inevitable again, please let them finaly figure it out i mean carmen still ahs the ring come on….shane wake up and go get her . thanx again you totaly came through , way to go, favorite author ever…
OMFG why u quick it??? i love it keep going pleaseeeeeeeeeeee…..pleaseeeee you’re killing me
And what happens next?…… Guess we’ll never find out :(