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Phobia (Chapter 6)
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“Do you think we were a mistake?”
“Dane,” Her distaste was more than evident. “Let it go.”
Maybe it was better for her not to answer but I at least threw in my two cents. “I don’t.”
“We should really be going downstairs by now.” She almost stood to leave as I caved, hoping she’d stay.
“Okay, I’m done. I won’t bring it up again.”
She glanced between me and the door and although I was sure she would go, she changed her mind to stay, but only after establishing some room in between us as she rested her shoulder on the door, staring at me. “Well, I have another question for you.” I swiveled my head sideways to give her an expectant look. “Why did you come here to cry? I mean, was it because you didn’t want to be alone during the holidays, or because something reminded you of Lara, or what?”
I had to smile because my answer was the oddest one yet. “No, it was because of Tina and Henry.”
“I’m sorry, I think I heard you wrong.” Her brow furrowed in confusion.
“When I got here, everything went well and I actually forgot about Lara for a whole five minutes until I saw Henry and Tina cuddling on the couch,” Another image that would give me chills from thinking about it. “and it just made me so fucking sad because it was a cold reminder that I don’t have anyone.”
“Oh, well to the first part of your explanation, ew. That’s just wrong.” Her disgust faded into sympathy as she shifted her position. “And to the second part, you have friends. You’ve got Shane, you’ve got Jenny, Carmen, even Max.” The corner of her mouth twitched into a slight smile. “You’ve got me.”
I’d say that my night had improved by a great deal if I didn’t realize that she was strictly referring to friendship. She stated said it herself- she’d moved on. It bit hard that I couldn’t do the same. “Thanks.”
It took a moment for either of us to say anything before she stood up straight and placed her hand on the doorknob. “I guess we should head down.”
“Yeah.” My muscles were stiff and sore when I stood but before she opened the door, my intrigue perked up. “Oh, one other thing, I’ve been answering your questions for the past hour so I have a question of my own.”
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Ok what is it with all the danish writer’s putting themselves down lately?! I’m telling you this is an awesome story and I love how you write it from 4 perspectives, its original and totally enthralling! Don’t doubt that. I really hope you don’t give up on this because I really will come over to your place and do some best friend talking to you! :P And awww for your so sweet comment, sadly yessum I have been rejected *sniffs* however thats a whole other story…or 5. Again awesome post and thanks! PPS :) xx
oooo and alice has dropped the bomb shell to dana…. wonder waht dana will do now.great chapter. love this story. love how it focuses on both sharmen and danish. i love it really do… can’t wait to read more – if more is by tomorrow;) post more soon..lol
Wow, I’ve finally caught up on all your updates, this is a fantastic fic and I love the different perspectives. And that things are not all simple between these ladies. I like that you had Lara have her own life and leave Dana, who was being an ass. And that Dana and Alice can still talk, no matter how hard it may be for them to get to that place. Excellent work, looking forward to reading more;) Please post soon!
I can’t wait to see how Dana reacts to Alice’s news
Alright, now i left you a message to further address you because if i wrote it all here we’ll it would take up a bit of space lol ANYHOW back to the story. Which has left me without any gracious words to say because you’ve heard them all and they all very much apply to this story but however i will try my best, it was FREAKINGAWESOMELOVELYFANTASTICBRILLIANTFUNNY yes that’s a word look it up… ok or it might just be 6 words…together. lol you’re good, you’re really good i really expected it to be DANA of course danish fool me it was UTA, which i was surprised and thought it was awesome. It really did want to make me cry (which by the way isn’t a bad thing, you write it so well, it’s actually a compliment, if ya made me cry lol) but yeah, me crying at the part with Dana in the bathroom, and then Alice and her having a lil chat, it was great. Now with Uta somewhat in the picture i wonder how that’s going to play out which i know you’ll fill us in on. Shane and Carmen, oh so cute and holy CRAP she still has the ring on? can’t wait for that part. Helena freaking out about little things was funny. Poor Helena she needs s1 in her life asap. and finally to end this which ended up being long anyhow you could never hurt me, it’s actually WAY the opposite so hush! and obviously PPS, yes it is a rather dire request :) x0x0x
hope you post more soon x
I only just found this story. I love it!! Any chance for a new chapter? Please??
ok awsome update but ahhhh the happy sharmen was torture , it was super funny but still those two are dancing around the inevitable again, please let them finaly figure it out i mean carmen still ahs the ring come on….shane wake up and go get her . thanx again you totaly came through , way to go, favorite author ever…
OMFG why u quick it??? i love it keep going pleaseeeeeeeeeeee…..pleaseeeee you’re killing me
And what happens next?…… Guess we’ll never find out :(