Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of NC-17. Age verification is required to proceed.
pick up 5
“I don’t care about the money Eric, I just want to play.”
“Yeah right. Half of the deals were set up by your friend here. I thought I was losing one of the guys, but she came in and saved the day.”
He turned to look at Alice and was as greased and smarmy as he could be. He admitted that Alice was stunning and he wouldn’t have minded having a go if he had met her elsewhere, but the fact that she was with Dana meant that she wasn’t interested and he didn’t like the way she could handle herself when it came down to business.
“I don’t think I’ve had the pleasure. I’m Eric.”
Alice took his hand and shook it with all the politeness and smiles that she could muster, but inside she was spitting. She hadn’t meant to get involved with Dana’s management, but when she had overheard a deal that Eric was letting slip through his fingers did she realise that he wasn’t after Dana’s best interest, he was to busy trying to set up the next big event that he could attend. Alice in effect was a businesswoman and she knew how to get the most out of her ‘clients’, after all the help and care that Dana had showed her, she thought that it was only fair if she gave something back.
“I’m Alice. It’s very nice to meet you. If you’ll excuse me for a moment? Dana I’ll be right back.”
She reached over and kissed the brunette on the lips and left a grinning Dana and a very annoyed Eric staring after her.
“Okay Fairbanks, what’s the deal?”
“I don’t know what you’re on about.”
“This Alice, she isn’t what you usually go for. What’s going on?”
“I think you’re jealous. Alice is smart and sexy and she’s better than you at your job. I’d be careful if I were you.”
“So is this new tart my replacement?”
“Don’t ever call her that. No she’s not your replacement but I trust her totally and wouldn’t hesitate to offer her the job if she asked. So if I were you I’d get my head out of my ass and start working for my pay for once.”
“How can you trust her? What do you know about her?”
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.



(32 votes, average: 3.66 out of 5)
What a surprise and this chapter is awesome! It rocked!!! Loved it when A charmed everyone and got all those deals. I am glad that D saw through Eric and straightened him out immediately. I love the idea of A working under disguised. That would be so perfect. I can totally believe that it was true because of her witty conversation with Eric. D went along with A and said.”always being out of town… to wait for my girl,” lmao. The sex scene was over the top, HOT!!! A’s last comment convinced me that she could not be just an ordinary prostitute. Can’t wait to find out more. This story gets better and better with each chapter. Thank you so much felix86 for your speedy update.
I wasn’t expecting a new chapter so soon! Yay!! Way to go, Alice, for working the room so well! I am worried Eric will be a problem down the line. Wait. I read further and Eric is a complete dick. Dana showed a heck of a lot of restraint. I would have had sex and then asked my questions. Wait. Good Dana! The ending was amazingly hot. I do look forward to their talk to find out more about what Alice is hiding. Excellent update!! Thanks so much, felix86!!
Alice is smart and a great talker, Eric is a big ass. Why do men think they are better,smarter than women?????thanks
hot hot hot… great story PPS
I’ve been a bit out of the loop with this story, but just caught up. Love it! I can imagine Alice charming everybody at that party. I’m very curious to know what’s the real deal with her. It would be great if Alice indeed were a underover journalist, but I think she really has had a rough life and she’s trying to pay her dues. Looking forward to the next chapter!
I hate you and I love u at the same time. Well ok i dont hate u but im not pleased with leaving us hanging like this!! lol.Althou u left us with ur smoldering HOT HOT sex so i spose ur forgiven a little lol. Brilliant post and cant wait for ur next one. PPS :) X X
Wow i was excited to see a new post so soon, LOVED IT. I really enjoy how well Alice can work a crowd and show that she too can look out for Dana and not just Dana looking out for Alice. Alice never lost her B&D while Eric was trying to hound her, i respect that but i hope that its true-we’ll see. The end-well HOTneSS! woot. I shouldnt have read it at work though, LMAO. Thank you so much felix86 this was awesome.
OMG!!! I am so pleased to see you! Just when I decided to quit reading fanfics…. You addict me again! I think Alice is an undercover, too. Or she may be a hellav unlucky woman, who is a hooker with all that skills and knowledge…. But WOW that sex was totally mind blowing. Dana I think you’ve picked up the bigest fish in the sea!
Oh my god, you are spoiling us with another post so soon – but not enough – so more please – luv this story – you write tremendous intimate scenes with such abandoment, thank you.
alright felix, that was hella-sexy…nice story line. hmmmm, so what’s up with Alice? Can’t wait to find out.