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pick up 5
“I know enough. Look at her, she was in this room for five minutes and she had already got half of the potential sponsors to sign on the dotted line. What had you done apart from ring up a bar tab? She’s perfect in every way and people love her. I’m giving you a chance Eric, shape up.”
With that Dana left a shocked Eric on the edge of the room and went to go join her girl who was currently talking to one of the older guests. As she got closer she could hear the playful tone to Alice’s voice and the laughter that came from the blonde melted her heart, she wrapped her arm around her waist and kissed her exposed shoulder. Just then the manager of the hotel announced that dinner was about to be served. Dana led Alice into the dinning room and sat her down next to her. The dinner was the usual boring affair, if Dana was honest she had no idea why they actually had the meal, usually all of the business was done whilst the drinks were circulating beforehand. They had just finished dessert and Alice had spent most of the meal softly stroking Dana’s thigh, successfully working her up into a frenzy, when Eric decided that it was the best time to question Alice on her personal life. He thought that if she had a few glasses of wine in her then she was more likely to make a fool of herself and after the way Dana had spoken to him earlier he couldn’t think of anything that he’d like more than to see Alice’s mantle of perfection slip.
“So Alice, what do you do?”
“I’m a journalist.”
“Really? What paper do you work for?”
“Oh I don’t tie myself down to one. I’m a freelance.”
Dana could see what Eric was trying to do and was preparing herself to jump to Alice’s rescue if needed, but Alice’s gentle stroking never altered and her tone of voice was so light and easy that it made Dana see that she could handle her own.
“Have I read anything of yours?”
“How should I know? I write under an alias for protection.”
“What does a writer need protection for?”
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(32 votes, average: 3.66 out of 5)
What a surprise and this chapter is awesome! It rocked!!! Loved it when A charmed everyone and got all those deals. I am glad that D saw through Eric and straightened him out immediately. I love the idea of A working under disguised. That would be so perfect. I can totally believe that it was true because of her witty conversation with Eric. D went along with A and said.”always being out of town… to wait for my girl,” lmao. The sex scene was over the top, HOT!!! A’s last comment convinced me that she could not be just an ordinary prostitute. Can’t wait to find out more. This story gets better and better with each chapter. Thank you so much felix86 for your speedy update.
I wasn’t expecting a new chapter so soon! Yay!! Way to go, Alice, for working the room so well! I am worried Eric will be a problem down the line. Wait. I read further and Eric is a complete dick. Dana showed a heck of a lot of restraint. I would have had sex and then asked my questions. Wait. Good Dana! The ending was amazingly hot. I do look forward to their talk to find out more about what Alice is hiding. Excellent update!! Thanks so much, felix86!!
Alice is smart and a great talker, Eric is a big ass. Why do men think they are better,smarter than women?????thanks
hot hot hot… great story PPS
I’ve been a bit out of the loop with this story, but just caught up. Love it! I can imagine Alice charming everybody at that party. I’m very curious to know what’s the real deal with her. It would be great if Alice indeed were a underover journalist, but I think she really has had a rough life and she’s trying to pay her dues. Looking forward to the next chapter!
I hate you and I love u at the same time. Well ok i dont hate u but im not pleased with leaving us hanging like this!! lol.Althou u left us with ur smoldering HOT HOT sex so i spose ur forgiven a little lol. Brilliant post and cant wait for ur next one. PPS :) X X
Wow i was excited to see a new post so soon, LOVED IT. I really enjoy how well Alice can work a crowd and show that she too can look out for Dana and not just Dana looking out for Alice. Alice never lost her B&D while Eric was trying to hound her, i respect that but i hope that its true-we’ll see. The end-well HOTneSS! woot. I shouldnt have read it at work though, LMAO. Thank you so much felix86 this was awesome.
OMG!!! I am so pleased to see you! Just when I decided to quit reading fanfics…. You addict me again! I think Alice is an undercover, too. Or she may be a hellav unlucky woman, who is a hooker with all that skills and knowledge…. But WOW that sex was totally mind blowing. Dana I think you’ve picked up the bigest fish in the sea!
Oh my god, you are spoiling us with another post so soon – but not enough – so more please – luv this story – you write tremendous intimate scenes with such abandoment, thank you.
alright felix, that was hella-sexy…nice story line. hmmmm, so what’s up with Alice? Can’t wait to find out.