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“Alice, I need to ask you something.”
Alice started to pull Dana’s gown off her and didn’t care if she ripped it.
“What?”
“What you said at the dinner, was it true?”
“Was what true?”
Alice had managed to take off Dana’s gown. She pressed her lips against the brunette’s then ran her tongue down Dana’s neck to start nibbling at her collarbone. Suddenly she stopped her attack and walked off down the hall. A confused Dana followed and found Alice waiting for her in the bedroom. She had her back to the door and was taking off her own gown, giving Dana a perfect view of her toned body; she threw the dress onto the floor and stood before Dana only in a pair of black heels. Dana licked her lips and started to move forward, Alice held out her hand to stop Dana in her tracks, the brunette halted and just stared at Alice waiting for the next move.
Alice ran her own hand down her chest between her breasts and slowly down her toned stomach, she reached her hips and stopped.
“So do you want to talk Dana?”
Dana gulped and shook her head. Any questions she had could wait; all she wanted now was to feel Alice’s slick juices all over her fingers and to taste the sweetness that Alice had to offer.
“Are you sure? I’ll do anything you want. What do you want Dana?”
“I want you to touch yourself.”
“I am touching myself.”
“I want you to run your fingers along your thighs, and then start to stroke yourself. Make yourself wet baby.”
Alice started to do everything Dana had asked her to. Her fingers started to stroke through the soft hair between her legs and she ran her middle finger from her wet centre to her throbbing clit, she bit her lip as she continued to slowly stroke herself.
“I’m so wet. I have been all night. I was sat next to you at the dinner table thinking about you being inside me. Making me come. I wanted you so much.”
Dana’s legs nearly gave way when she heard this. Even though she was enjoying the show, it was too much to bear; she had to feel Alice’s excitement for herself. She crossed the little distance that was between them and dropped to the floor, she parted Alice’s legs slightly, reached up with her tongue and took one long lick. Of all the fine food and drink she had savoured that night Alice was definitely the sweetest thing she had ever tasted, she had to have more. She licked again and again; pushing Alice backwards so she was on the bed Dana continued her assault, pushing her tongue deep inside Alice’s hottest and most sensitive part.
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(32 votes, average: 3.66 out of 5)
What a surprise and this chapter is awesome! It rocked!!! Loved it when A charmed everyone and got all those deals. I am glad that D saw through Eric and straightened him out immediately. I love the idea of A working under disguised. That would be so perfect. I can totally believe that it was true because of her witty conversation with Eric. D went along with A and said.”always being out of town… to wait for my girl,” lmao. The sex scene was over the top, HOT!!! A’s last comment convinced me that she could not be just an ordinary prostitute. Can’t wait to find out more. This story gets better and better with each chapter. Thank you so much felix86 for your speedy update.
I wasn’t expecting a new chapter so soon! Yay!! Way to go, Alice, for working the room so well! I am worried Eric will be a problem down the line. Wait. I read further and Eric is a complete dick. Dana showed a heck of a lot of restraint. I would have had sex and then asked my questions. Wait. Good Dana! The ending was amazingly hot. I do look forward to their talk to find out more about what Alice is hiding. Excellent update!! Thanks so much, felix86!!
Alice is smart and a great talker, Eric is a big ass. Why do men think they are better,smarter than women?????thanks
hot hot hot… great story PPS
I’ve been a bit out of the loop with this story, but just caught up. Love it! I can imagine Alice charming everybody at that party. I’m very curious to know what’s the real deal with her. It would be great if Alice indeed were a underover journalist, but I think she really has had a rough life and she’s trying to pay her dues. Looking forward to the next chapter!
I hate you and I love u at the same time. Well ok i dont hate u but im not pleased with leaving us hanging like this!! lol.Althou u left us with ur smoldering HOT HOT sex so i spose ur forgiven a little lol. Brilliant post and cant wait for ur next one. PPS :) X X
Wow i was excited to see a new post so soon, LOVED IT. I really enjoy how well Alice can work a crowd and show that she too can look out for Dana and not just Dana looking out for Alice. Alice never lost her B&D while Eric was trying to hound her, i respect that but i hope that its true-we’ll see. The end-well HOTneSS! woot. I shouldnt have read it at work though, LMAO. Thank you so much felix86 this was awesome.
OMG!!! I am so pleased to see you! Just when I decided to quit reading fanfics…. You addict me again! I think Alice is an undercover, too. Or she may be a hellav unlucky woman, who is a hooker with all that skills and knowledge…. But WOW that sex was totally mind blowing. Dana I think you’ve picked up the bigest fish in the sea!
Oh my god, you are spoiling us with another post so soon – but not enough – so more please – luv this story – you write tremendous intimate scenes with such abandoment, thank you.
alright felix, that was hella-sexy…nice story line. hmmmm, so what’s up with Alice? Can’t wait to find out.