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pick up 7
They walked into The Planet, Dana had heard of the café that turned into one of the hottest clubs at night but she had never ventured through its doors. They were greeted by a bubbly woman who hugged Alice.
“Girl where you been?”
“Hey Kit, yeah sorry, I’ve been around but keeping it low.”
“No sweat pretty girl, you just know how worried I get. Shane’s just gone to the bathroom.”
“Cool can I grab a coffee then? Dana you want something?”
“Girl I was wondering if this lovely lady had a name.”
Alice grinned at Kit then looked at Dana. Throughout the short conversation Dana had been watching the two women, whoever Kit was she seemed to care a lot for Alice and the blonde was completely calm and not glancing around when she walked into the café.
“Sorry, forgot my manners. Kit this is Dana, Dana this is Kit she owns the place.”
“Girl I know who she is. I may not be a girl on girl participant but that don’t mean I’m clueless when it comes to the world famous.”
Dana blushed a little at the compliment, yeah she was a damn good tennis player, but she never classed herself as world famous. Alice noticed Dana’s shyness and entwined her fingers with the brunette’s giving them a little squeeze.
“Kit, stop embarrassing my girl.”
“Why don’t you two sit and I’ll send over coffee and breakfast.”
With that Kit walked away leaving the two woman to find a table. When they sat Dana noticed a slim, dark haired woman saunter over to the table. When she got to them she lay her hand on Alice’s shoulder, the blonde jumped a little but when she saw who it was she got up and pulled the over woman into a hug. They stayed like that for a few minutes and when they pulled apart the dark haired woman still kept her hands on Alice’s shoulders, she moved some hair out of the blonde’s face and gently ran her finger down her slightly swollen nose, leaning in she kissed the tip of the tender nose.
“He got you again?”
Dana watched the exchange with clenched teeth, so, this was Shane. This was the woman that Alice had risked everything for. She was slim with messy styled hair and was wearing jeans and a white shirt. The voice that spoke was low and husky and the eyes seemed to look deep into Alice, understanding everything the blonde went through. Dana didn’t know how to react to the obvious intimate and unsaid conversation that was being channelled through the two women; she was just about to leave when Alice pulled away from Shane, sat down and reached over to hold onto Dana’s hand. Shane sat and glanced at Dana she opened her mouth to say something but was interrupted by Kit who brought over three large coffees and a plate of pastries.
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Welcome back, felix. I was thinking about your stories the other day and here you are. Excellent update as usual. Can’t wait to see what Dana’s idea is. Loving the story… Post soon!!!
YAY :D Reli pleased to see u bak :)I have to echo a lot of what MaGoose has sed u did the meetin and Dana’s feelings with the whole thing perfectly. Im curious to see if Alice will let Dana pay, we know she has the money but tht doesnt mean Alice will let her. Anyway great Chapter loved this and cant wait for more wen u ahve time thnk u :) PPSxx
Wow…Really…I have to say that this is the best FanFiction I’ve ever read!! Please keep it up, love love love this story! Thanks for the great chapter! :)
So excited to see you back!! We are really being blessed with lots of Danish goodness this weekend. Excellent update, felix86! I love how Alice is allowing Dana further into her life. It is telling that Dana can see when Alice is somewhere she feels safe and somewhere she does not. They really do have a deep connection. The Shane/Dana meeting was done perfectly. Dana’s anger and jealousy at first and then the acceptance that Shane is juts a very close friend. I am very curious as to Dana’s plan. I know she has the money to pay, but, I doubt Alice would let her — and the guy would just want more money. I hope your schedule permits and you post again soon! Thanks for the great chapter!!
felix86, I honestly have to say that I miss this wonderful story and thank you for continuing. And I must thank MaGoose for commenting before me on this one and the other 3 posts this weekend, saying mostly how I feel. Really pleased to see D & S were off to a good start. What a wonderful friendship between A & S too! Excellent job. So D planned to help them out? Can’t wait to find out more. Again, thank you.
Glad to see you back Felix. love the story. Keep it up