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pick up 7
“Here you go ladies, now don’t say I don’t feed you.”
Alice grabbed one, tore it in half and started to eat; the other two women just looked at each other, half way through a mouthful Alice broke the silence.
“Jesus one of you say something, it won’t kill you.”
“Errm hi, I’m Dana.”
“Shane.”
Alice looked between the two and shrugged.
“Okay that went well. Shane this is Dana, don’t worry she knows.”
Shane just nodded and drank her coffee, she noticed that Alice had finished her food and her hands were free, she instantly went to grab one, holding onto it she smiled at the blonde a little and settled back in her chair. Dana was about to protest about the hand holding but she noticed an almost peace wash over the other woman, it was as if the contact with Alice was calming Shane down.
“Okay, so she knows, guess she can stay then. How’s your nose?”
“Oh you know, I’ll get over it.”
“How much he want?”
“A lot.”
Shane nodded at this; she was running her thumb lightly over Alice’s hand.
“How much we got?”
“Not even half.”
“Shit.”
“Yeah tell me about it.”
“How long we got?”
“Well you see that’s were the problem is.”
“Why?”
“I errm…”
“Alice what you do?”
“I told him this was the last time. He laughed, punched me for my cheek and to teach me a lesson he’s only given a week.”
“What!?”
“I’m sorry.”
“No, I told you, you never have to be sorry for anything.”
Shane held onto Alice’s hand, sighing and looked at Dana with a smile.
“Well that’s Alice for you, never predictable.”
“And you love me for it. Don’t worry we’ll figure something out.”
Alice got up from the table; she bent to kiss Dana on the cheek and walked off to the bathroom. Dana looked at Shane and saw that she was following Alice with her eyes through the café.
“You’re in love with her aren’t you?”
Shane looked at Dana and smiled.
“You can’t know Alice and not be in love with her. I adore her in everyway.”
“So you love her?”
“I did. I used to hope that one day she’d look at me differently, take me in her arms for something more than comfort. It never happened and I accepted it. You know, I’ve got no idea why I’m telling you this.”
“I promise I won’t tell.”
Shane laughed at this, she was wary of Dana at first but somehow she felt like she could open up to the brunette.
“We love each other, just not like that.”
Dana sighed and smiled at Shane, all the jealousy and anger she had felt towards the other woman washed away, she’d been handed a tough deal and it took someone as wonderful as Alice to see beyond the hard exterior and help her out. Just then Alice wandered back to the table and sat with a grin.
“So how are my girls?”
Dana and Shane looked at each other with a smile.
“We’re fine Al. Haven’t been fighting over you if that’s what you think.”
“What? Not even a little ‘stay away from my girl’? Shane I’m disappointed in you.”
“Well what can I say; I’m ready to share you. Thing is Al what are we gonna do? We haven’t got enough cash and we’re shit out of time.”
Dana had been thinking about this for awhile now, she lent over the table and looked at the other women.
“You see, there I have an idea.”
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Welcome back, felix. I was thinking about your stories the other day and here you are. Excellent update as usual. Can’t wait to see what Dana’s idea is. Loving the story… Post soon!!!
YAY :D Reli pleased to see u bak :)I have to echo a lot of what MaGoose has sed u did the meetin and Dana’s feelings with the whole thing perfectly. Im curious to see if Alice will let Dana pay, we know she has the money but tht doesnt mean Alice will let her. Anyway great Chapter loved this and cant wait for more wen u ahve time thnk u :) PPSxx
Wow…Really…I have to say that this is the best FanFiction I’ve ever read!! Please keep it up, love love love this story! Thanks for the great chapter! :)
So excited to see you back!! We are really being blessed with lots of Danish goodness this weekend. Excellent update, felix86! I love how Alice is allowing Dana further into her life. It is telling that Dana can see when Alice is somewhere she feels safe and somewhere she does not. They really do have a deep connection. The Shane/Dana meeting was done perfectly. Dana’s anger and jealousy at first and then the acceptance that Shane is juts a very close friend. I am very curious as to Dana’s plan. I know she has the money to pay, but, I doubt Alice would let her — and the guy would just want more money. I hope your schedule permits and you post again soon! Thanks for the great chapter!!
felix86, I honestly have to say that I miss this wonderful story and thank you for continuing. And I must thank MaGoose for commenting before me on this one and the other 3 posts this weekend, saying mostly how I feel. Really pleased to see D & S were off to a good start. What a wonderful friendship between A & S too! Excellent job. So D planned to help them out? Can’t wait to find out more. Again, thank you.
Glad to see you back Felix. love the story. Keep it up