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“Do you know who I am?”
“Yes, I’m not retarded we were just introduced, you’re Dana.”
“I mean have you heard of me before?”
“Do you normally give girls you pick up the third degree?”
“No, I’ve never done this before.”
“You ever taken a complete stranger to bed before?”
“Yes.”
“Then you’ve done this before, it’s just a little different.”
“I just mean…”
“Yes I know who you are Ms Fairbanks. Don’t worry you won’t find my story in the paper tomorrow; I do have integrity you know.”
“I never said you didn’t.”
The car fell back into silence. Dana mentally kicked herself, she had never meant to insult Alice, she just needed to know that she was publicly safe. After a few minutes she was itching to ask questions, she had no idea why, apart from the fact that Alice intrigued her. She kept on giving the blonde side long glances, snapping her sight back to the road whenever she felt she had been caught. In the end Alice sighed and shifted in her seat so she could face Dana.
“What?”
“Nothing.”
“This isn’t going to work if there’s something on your mind.”
“Can I ask you something?”
“Ask away, you might not get an answer though.”
“You ever been with a woman?”
Alice laughed out loud at this, Dana didn’t know what was funny but she liked the sound of Alice laughing, it was light, carefree and more importantly real.
“Yes Dana, I’ve been with a woman before. What? You worried that I can’t make you feel good?”
With that she lent right over so she was pressed against Dana’s side and whispered into her ear.
“Believe me when I say there are things I can do to you that you would never have thought possible. I’ll fuck your brains out and make you beg for more.”
She gave Dana’s ear a small lick then sat back as if nothing had happened. It took all of Dana’s concentration to not crash the car as she was so turned on. Luckily they were only a few blocks away from her home so she sped up and raced home.
On pulling into her driveway she started to get out of the car, she saw that Alice wasn’t moving.
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Wow. This is truly amazing. You better continue or I will have to track you down. And dissertations are overrated anyway. Seriously, though… Incredible start to the story. Poor Alice. I have a feeling Dana will track her down, though. I hope to see another post on this soon. Thanks, felix86!!
I can only second every word tht MaGoose has written above – Fabulous story which you must continue, as Dana has to find Alice again – please!!!
DANA HAS TO FIND HER AGAIN. CHASE AL DAMN IT. Dana should wake up. Be like where are you going.Sorry I get alittle excitied sometimes. I should be writing. I am being bad again. I am going to write. Felix I love this story. If it’s a one off i guess i can deal
Holy mother fuckin cow! Dana picking Alice up? I could never imagine that in all my years! DAMN! She is woman, make me roar! If you don’t keep this going, RIGHT NOW, then you don’t deserve to be called a Danish fan, let alone a Danish author. PLEASE POST SOON. I am begging you. Please.
HOLY SHIT!!! Oh my god… NOW that is what I call a real sexy scene!I’m so glad I got to read this one! Alice as a hooker and Dana fallen in love with Al at first sight? OMG…. I’m going nuttttsssss here. I’m actually way too much liking this. Man, it was super hot, and Dana, by George, go find Alice and make her her woman!! OKAY you HAVE GOT TO KEEP WRITING this one! But don’t make this too easy on Dana, I love antsy novel and all the drama ;) (hee hee I’m indeed evil) PPS
wow this is really great–such an interesting idea for a story, i totally love it. that, and dana is way hotter than richard gere :)
WOW this is good and hot, love it. Dana need to find Alice again. Please post more, thanks!
WOW!! I’m so intrigued by this story i’ve never read one with those circumstances. I like how there appears to be a huge backstory with Alice. Reli Reli clever interesting story being so completely hot yet romantic at the same time reli hope u continue with this or i will be upset!! lol PPS x x
OMFG!!!! AWESOME!!!DANA BETTER DAMN WELL FIND HER AGAIN! That was amazing, and def one of a kind. Cant wait to see where this could develop! Keep it up, truly an outstanding job!!! PPS!
I am with everyone else on this. Please continue. This story is fantastic!! Please let Dana go after her. Those two belong together! Please post soon
Another great story from you. I love ‘Recovery’ and can’t wait to see where you take this one. I think you’d better continue or you’ll have a whole lot of disappointed Danish fans tracking you down hahaha. Really, it was great. PPS? :) Pretty please??
I just had to comment on this amazing story; it is fantastic. I love how you started it. Dane soooo needs to wake up lol. PPS
I agree with everyone else, this is fantastic. Looks like there will be this huge army of angry Danish fans chasing after you if you don’t continue with this, lol. But I don’t think Dana should find Alice right away, a little tension and drama is good for the story. Can’t wait for more. Thank you!!!
wow!! very interesting story. i like it alot hope theres more. :)
Fantastic start Dana has to find Alice there soul mates. Do your dissertation though carnt get this far and not do a good job of that, just take a couple of breaks now and then and post for us.
that was so hottt! please please please continue!! its kind of like pretty woman but not if ya no what i mean!lol i love it and if u dont continue u will have a lot of explaining to do by the looks of it! pps
*starts breathing again* OMG, I loved it. I had never thought that I would be liking this alternate universe for these two (I mean, Alice as a prostitute).
damn girl. Continue please… cos I’m with Magoose, you don’t want us o track you down do you? lol kidding, very good start though, thanks :D
I loved it!!!!! Please continue when u get a chance!! PPS
That story was really amazing hot and it would be very lovely with a second part.
Great story. Can’t wait for Dana to run after Alice to patrol the dark alleyways waiting for any glimpse of Alice. I do have one comment, you allude to Dana as dorky but then you don’t detail anything dorky about her. That would be nice if a little of the “dorky” Dana was described. Other than that, great job.