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Dana put her hand between them and was surprised when she felt Alice’s soaking underwear; she quickly removed the lace and threw them to the floor. She then let her fingers dance softly between Alice’s soft folds, Alice gasped, which was all Dana needed to plunge her fingers into her hot, wet opening. The two women continued to dual with their tongues as Alice started to ride Dana’s fingers, pushing down to maximise the contact. Dana pulled away from the kiss and looked at Alice and thought she had never seen anyone look so sexy, Alice had a thin sheen of sweat covering her milky, toned body and her eyes were filled with lust. The blonde looked at Dana then, without warning, she pushed her fingers into Dana, she was still dripping from earlier and she just bit her lip and pushed down onto Alice’s strong fingers. Both women were inside each other and loved the feeling of being fucked at the same time; they instantly started to speed up the rhythm that they had fallen into. Dana’s breath started to quicken as she felt the build up of her second orgasm leaning over Alice she whispered.
“I’m coming.”
“I know. I can feel you.”
“Come with me. Please. Together.”
With that Alice captured Dana’s lips with hers as she let her barriers down as she felt her orgasm rip through her body and flow down Dana’s hand. On feeling this Dana joined her then collapsed on top of Alice shaking from the aftershock of the intense feeling she had just experienced.
After what seemed like hours Dana rolled off Alice and smiled at the blonde, she reached over to kiss her and was thrilled when Alice didn’t shy away. They kissed at leisure for a few minutes, then Dana pulled away only to wrap her arms protectively around the blonde.
“Please stay.”
“I wouldn’t want to be anywhere else.”
Dana shifted slightly so she could pull the duvet over the both of them, then she kissed Alice on the shoulder, pulled her in tighter and fell asleep. Alice relished the feel of being in Dana’s arms, of being protected and cared for; she snuggled down and started to drift off. Suddenly she snapped awake, there was no way someone like her could have a happily ever after with somebody like Dana and she knew she wouldn’t be able to face the awkwardness of the morning. No, she had to leave now, she had to keep this as the perfect, beautiful night that it was and not have it ruined by a guilty morning. She got out of the bed very gently and quietly put her clothes back on, she looked at the sleeping Dana and instantly felt bad for leaving the beautiful, sweet brunette, but she knew she was right. She kissed Dana softly on the lips then made her way out of the house into the night; if Dana really wanted her then she would find her again, Alice knew she would be forever waiting and hoping that one day she’d see Dana again.
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Wow. This is truly amazing. You better continue or I will have to track you down. And dissertations are overrated anyway. Seriously, though… Incredible start to the story. Poor Alice. I have a feeling Dana will track her down, though. I hope to see another post on this soon. Thanks, felix86!!
I can only second every word tht MaGoose has written above – Fabulous story which you must continue, as Dana has to find Alice again – please!!!
DANA HAS TO FIND HER AGAIN. CHASE AL DAMN IT. Dana should wake up. Be like where are you going.Sorry I get alittle excitied sometimes. I should be writing. I am being bad again. I am going to write. Felix I love this story. If it’s a one off i guess i can deal
Holy mother fuckin cow! Dana picking Alice up? I could never imagine that in all my years! DAMN! She is woman, make me roar! If you don’t keep this going, RIGHT NOW, then you don’t deserve to be called a Danish fan, let alone a Danish author. PLEASE POST SOON. I am begging you. Please.
HOLY SHIT!!! Oh my god… NOW that is what I call a real sexy scene!I’m so glad I got to read this one! Alice as a hooker and Dana fallen in love with Al at first sight? OMG…. I’m going nuttttsssss here. I’m actually way too much liking this. Man, it was super hot, and Dana, by George, go find Alice and make her her woman!! OKAY you HAVE GOT TO KEEP WRITING this one! But don’t make this too easy on Dana, I love antsy novel and all the drama ;) (hee hee I’m indeed evil) PPS
wow this is really great–such an interesting idea for a story, i totally love it. that, and dana is way hotter than richard gere :)
WOW this is good and hot, love it. Dana need to find Alice again. Please post more, thanks!
WOW!! I’m so intrigued by this story i’ve never read one with those circumstances. I like how there appears to be a huge backstory with Alice. Reli Reli clever interesting story being so completely hot yet romantic at the same time reli hope u continue with this or i will be upset!! lol PPS x x
OMFG!!!! AWESOME!!!DANA BETTER DAMN WELL FIND HER AGAIN! That was amazing, and def one of a kind. Cant wait to see where this could develop! Keep it up, truly an outstanding job!!! PPS!
I am with everyone else on this. Please continue. This story is fantastic!! Please let Dana go after her. Those two belong together! Please post soon
Another great story from you. I love ‘Recovery’ and can’t wait to see where you take this one. I think you’d better continue or you’ll have a whole lot of disappointed Danish fans tracking you down hahaha. Really, it was great. PPS? :) Pretty please??
I just had to comment on this amazing story; it is fantastic. I love how you started it. Dane soooo needs to wake up lol. PPS
I agree with everyone else, this is fantastic. Looks like there will be this huge army of angry Danish fans chasing after you if you don’t continue with this, lol. But I don’t think Dana should find Alice right away, a little tension and drama is good for the story. Can’t wait for more. Thank you!!!
wow!! very interesting story. i like it alot hope theres more. :)
Fantastic start Dana has to find Alice there soul mates. Do your dissertation though carnt get this far and not do a good job of that, just take a couple of breaks now and then and post for us.
that was so hottt! please please please continue!! its kind of like pretty woman but not if ya no what i mean!lol i love it and if u dont continue u will have a lot of explaining to do by the looks of it! pps
*starts breathing again* OMG, I loved it. I had never thought that I would be liking this alternate universe for these two (I mean, Alice as a prostitute).
damn girl. Continue please… cos I’m with Magoose, you don’t want us o track you down do you? lol kidding, very good start though, thanks :D
I loved it!!!!! Please continue when u get a chance!! PPS
That story was really amazing hot and it would be very lovely with a second part.
Great story. Can’t wait for Dana to run after Alice to patrol the dark alleyways waiting for any glimpse of Alice. I do have one comment, you allude to Dana as dorky but then you don’t detail anything dorky about her. That would be nice if a little of the “dorky” Dana was described. Other than that, great job.