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Pretty Women, episode 5
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Tina had trouble breathing when she saw Bette’s full breasts captured in a creamcolored bra, and couldnt fight the sudden urge to press herself agains the brown-haired beauty. And, hurrily letting the top slide down her body, she did what her body and soul were crying out for, and felt her skin make contact with Bettes…
It was as if one sigh exited two mouths when that happened, as if that touch was something they had longed for for their whole lives… The fabric of their bra’s, Bette’s cream one and Tina’s black one caused a friction that made the women gasp with desire.
Their eyes met yet again, and Tina had never found it so hard to obey ‘the rule’… Not to kiss this gorgeous woman seemed a sin to itself… What was it in Bette that confused her so? And what was it that made her heart pound faster with every touch? The pretty woman had not felt this kind of desire in a very long time, but when she saw those chocolatebrown eyes take in every piece of her, she felt everything emotion she had ever pushed away, wash over her with an unbelievable force… She gasped as the brunette leaned into her, and felt Bettes long soft fingers slide over her back…
She had to
Touch…
Feel…
Cherish…
For Tina felt she only had one chance, one night, to have this wonderfull feeling again.. This feeling as if everything in her life would turn out fine… This feeling as if there was someone who cared for her for who she was… She closed her eyes, breathing in sharply, and captured Bette’s arms, letting her hands slide to the brunettes wrists… Fascinated she looked at the other woman, getting up on her feet…
Bette had not ever let someone else lead her, yet now it felt like the most natural thing to do… She tried not to think about why tina was being so kind and gentle with her… Tried to push away the fact that she paid the other woman for her services… But somehow it slipped in her mind and Tina felt her tense up in her arms…
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yum yum yum ! beyond yowsa!
wonderful, i hope you will post now more often, i miss your stories, so get abck here and continue with our lovely girls
JUST KISS!lol! we know you want to ..But I love the slow build, I don’t think I seen Pretty woman lol! or maybe I have but can’t remember.
Where have you been? Its about time for you to continue with this story and the others. Come post soon you hear :)
holy lord this is amazing
Yehaaa I’m doing my happy dance here M, you did indeed keep your promise and fast, thanks. I can see you’re still a BIG tease LOL, but the tension you’ve created between our girls is just amazing and full of magic, I love it. The only problem with this post is….now I want more :o)) and it’s ok if it’s not NC-17 (did I just say that!!!! LOL. A big hug back to you.
Imagine the happy dance I just did seeing your update! Now come on, don’t be shy…go ahead and give us that NC-17!!! Make it HOT!!!
Oh man, YOU ARE SUCH A TEASE!!!!!!! Is that how you treat your long waited fans! I really missed your stories. Please let them kiss! Great chapter, please post more often. :)
Where is the dance floor? I wan’t to happy dance to.Where have you been i was going through post withdrawl syndrom lol (that must be a dieses right?).please post again soon. =)
I hope that you post another chapter to this very soon…I am enjoying it.
update the other story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow! you did it! i thought that you will take more time in post but here is a wonderful chapter, what a way to let me hook! you are a big teaser! but i think that you enjoy so much make us suffer waiting for the NC17 chapter. thanks for the post! take care!
who’s Lu?you were so right when you said you were a tease…lolbut it’s okay….your’e still my friend :)
Ohh you are soo bad for leaving us like this….jesus. Glad to see your post again – I missed it and I love this story and I want more so please continue. Soon I hope, post soon
I Loved it Capt. Mom =)And I’m first…=)
Ok… I kno it seems silly to leave a comment to your own story LOL But I forgot to thank my friend Lu for her contibution in this story by a word she taught me… Thank you for the mesmerizing word Lu!
Can’t read it right now as I have to go to lunch. Glad to see you posting again! *does a happy dance* Ow my back.
Still lovin every word. So glad to have you back. Post again soon.
You totally just “blue-balled” your entire fanbase. That gets a thumb jab in the ribs from me. HEHEHEHEHE ;)
Very nice post JLBT. Love this story and can’t wait til you post again!
finally babe you posted:) i thought you canned this story..i missed this one sho muchcertainly a very good read …Vwhy the nc17 fobia? oh cummon be nice to us and post a hottie 17
I just found this story and I love it…Pretty Woman is one of my all time favorite movies and I love your spin on it. Now that I have found this story…please post soon.
Fuck, you come back, heat us all up….and leave again. You’re not playing this nice luv, please post the next one really soon.
Great chapter look forward to the next one soon, along with just friends love that as well
What? You can’t stop here… Let them kiss, heehee.
Ok JLBT, its been a long time my friend and good to see you back. You know when the moment of B&T get excited and hot and I say to myself oh this is what Im (we) talking about and waiting for and Im getting so excited here and then bOOm the next thing I know is you leave us hanging just like that, not nice my friend lol, you such a tease and hope you will post soon, thanks!
AAAARRRGGGHHHHH!!! this was the 1st story since 8:45am ish this moning and it was a shcok to see it there and fun to read, but was sad to only get 2 pages and to b teased with promises of an NC17……WHEN OH WHEN WILL IT B POSTED????!!!!!!!!
Ahhh.. you’re back.. I was just thinking and missing your stories dearly :D Oh wow.. this is HOT!! You’re such a big tease you know that? Please continue soooooooooon~~~
!!!!! I was on the verge of my sit waiting for the kiss!!!! I have to admit it, the whole moment was sensual, don’t know how you do it but I know your readers never get bored.
WoW…I’ve just read all your chapters of Pretty Woman…and I just love your writing style babes! I can’t believe I havent read your stuff before! I must remember to say thank you to Dani for getting you to PM me!!! You’ve got a fan for life now! :) Can’t wait for the kiss! Ok, I’m off now to start your other fic! Thanks.
Hey it’s Nanannananana…. love this story!!! Keep it comming!!!!!!