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    Provocations Linger- chapter 16

    Story written on August 1, 2009 by Zuzu's Petals.
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    Our story takes us to Fire Island where a very hot Tina has a few questions for Bette and Helena. But does she ask any?

    Mistake. The energy that surged between them just from the eye contact was painful. Tina swallowed and looked away after only a few moments. Her ex did no such thing, stepping even closer into Tina, so that the blonde was pressed against the elevator wall and Bette was pressed against her.

    The tight dress and slightly loosened robe did not assist efforts to remain calm.  

    “Bette,” Tina moaned, half in protest, half in arousal.

    Bette ignored her, not wanting to reason with Tina about their actions. Not wanting to acknowledge the way their hips ground into each other in an almost imperceptible rhythm. Or the nipples she could feel pressing against her chest, already hard. Experience told her how tender they must be, as she faintly rubbed her own against them. She ignored her own name when Tina whispered it again.

    Instead her mouth made a slow progression along Tina’s throat, nipping and caressing her neck with hot breath and soft lips as she forged a favorite path to her mouth. Requesting access she whispered ‘T’ as she kissed her.

    Tina’s groan reflected her need as she kissed the brunette back fiercely. “Fuck, Bette,” she sighed.

    An alarm bell sounded once inside the elevator shaft, echoing loudly inside the small chamber. Tina and Bette both jumped at the sound, separating at once. The elevator began a smooth decent to the lobby, by passing Tina’s floor.

    The occupants were too shocked to consider much as the elevator quickly reached the lobby. The doors opened after coming to a stop where a maintenance man awaited them.

    “Is everything okay with the elevator now?” He asked discreetly. Tina turned a bright red as she nodded affirmatively. “It seems to be fine. Thank you.”

    Bette was as far out of sight as was possible, refusing to open her eyes or to acknowledge the repairman. She kept them shut until the doors had closed again.

    Finally the curator opened one eye to find Tina watching her with something less than complete admiration.

    “You were a big help,” she noted. She turned her attention to counting the floors as they lit up one by one over the door. They were rapidly approaching her floor.

    As the elevator settled, she pressed the button to the Penthouse for Bette before stepping out. She turned around and gave her ex a very faint smile.

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    3. Let me deduce here: If Bette arrived back at the Penthouse minus her lipstick, wouldn’t that mean that Tina is wearing said lipstick somewhere on her person? Hummmm…….You didn’t mention that Tina made a mirror pitstop before she joined Tessa and Sam. Oops!

    5. I was thinking along the same lines as techgal…wouldn’t Sam notice something up with Tina’s lipstick? Had to giggle a little bit your notes regarding gee gee. BTW…miss that girl and her story. Thanks for the update!

    8. you know i always picture that bette and helena could have been great friends if it wasn’t for the timing of the Tina factor…nice to see how it plays out

    11. I love Bette and Helena’s relationship. It will be interesting explaining to the others, Helena will have Bette as her escort. Now, we all know Tina can not avoid Bette because her heart reaches out for the dark brooding brunet.

    14. I liked the elevator scene. Good kiss by Bette. Tina is in trouble. I see Sam confronting Bette sometime in the evening. What will Tina say???? I cannot wait till your next post.

    16. Oh my. Such a lot happening in such a brief time. That discussion Bette and Tina are going to have regarding what happened in the elevator though, looks set be a long one. The evening is going to be very interesting, I think. Love the story, Zuzu, thanks for the post. Cheers!

    18. What is it with Tibette and elevators…..Fucking Hot!! *phew fans self**thud* Zuzu, you have quite a talent in storytelling of making me feel like I am right there in the scene. I love this story. PPVS thanks! :)

    19. Damn, what a kiss!!! Yeah, like the others, I thought I remembered some neck nibbling before that kiss…although I think I’d have trouble remebering my name after a kiss like that, I do hope that T caught a glance in a mirror before making her way back to her room?! Now let’s get this party started….PPVS :)

    22. Great chapter Zuzu! Tibette and elevators :-) If Tina and Bette decide to start something again, I hope Tina ends it with Sam first – I like her. I like this Helena too – I hope Tina gets the chance to set her up with Tessa.

    23. Hey Zuzu…another winner! Loved Bette going after Tina and love this Helena. I think their may be some fire works on Fire Island in the next update or two.

    24. God, I love this story. That elevator ride was really something and I don’t think Tina will recover from it anytime soon. They won’t be able to stay away from each other, especially dressing similarly is fantastic. Great and similar minds and all that. Can hardly wait to see what happens next. As for Sam, she knows how Tina feels about Bette and vice versa, she is no fool but is acting like one if she thinks she will get Tina fully. Not gonna happen. “Our girls” can not resist each other. Thanks so much for posting. PPS

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