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Pyromance 2
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I drove home first, changed into the only thing I ever looked good in, a tank top and some jeans. I tried to do something with my hair but it wasn’t cooperating which is what I settled for.
Driving over and knowing that she needed to get along with me. Her kiss, that soft feel of her lips and her tongue. I shook my head thinking about it. I couldn’t read too much into it. She was in Hollywood longer than I was. This was her seventh film, my first. She knew what she wanted, what she was looking for…at least that is what I told myself to disguise how much her kissing me like that (not part of the script that kiss) made me not think about anything else. Pulling up to the soundstage, pulling into that lot knowing my name was on the list. Knowing my name was in Variety; it helped me not think about how soft her lips where…for a little while.
I got out of my car and walked up to 25. Everyone kinda milling around outside smoking just getting ready. I met some of the cast. Ben Eager, very cool guy he was playing Scottie the leader of the bank robbers. I had a lot of scenes with him early on. Then I meet some of the others. No Carmen though. Jenny came in a half and hour later. She arrived with Mark. And an hour after they arrived Carmen arrived. No boyfriend. She saw me smoking outside alone. Every else really wanted to get out of the heat wave scorching Los Angeles that afternoon.
She just kinda slinked over to me. Leaning against the wall. She looked exactly like me. Which just means she too felt the need for jeans and a tank top. Mine was white hers black, her jeans where ripped up mine where not. I tried not to focus too much on the way everything just clung to her for dear life. She laughed then she spoke aiming that smile at me.
“So you’re the big hoodlum?”
I smiled at her I couldn’t help. She was infectious in her charm….mean yet easy going…..
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First the rating bit. I read fics and often leave a response but I often don’t rate them because I simply forget to do so. The main thing is that you know your fics are well read and extemely well recieved among readers, just look at the comments.Now on to the important stuff: this fic! This fic is shaping up to be my favourite of all your fics. As someone previously mentioned, there is always palable chemistry between S/C. I like suspense, so I hope they will dance around eachother for a while. Plus, Carmen has a b/f and I can’t wait to see in what way that he fit in all of this. UPDATE SOON!
uhhhh to ur comment up there. I dunno what kinda crazy bashing or watever pple are doin…. but ur writing is PHENOMENAL!! So nevermind haters =DI LOVE all ur fics.. ALL… this one is nice n light and cute. Different but still amazing!
sorry to hear about the haters! :(but i loved the update! i would have given it 5 starts! like i always do to your fics, they’re my fav!
Hey, I love that you write about my favourite character Shane, so as long as your stories involve her then I will be reading. I appreciate all the writers who take the time to write and post. It makes for part of our wonderful community. So thank you and as always, looking forward to your next posts.
I love it!!!!!
amazing! Keep going…fast!
love too the way you write like ohter your stories. It’s lighter than before and some partly is too slow but give me different pleasure. Thanks.
My guess is that it might be in large part tibetters with the sharmen hating. If I’m wrong – sorry tibetters, but if I’m right – I don’t get what they’re doing reading a sharmen centric fic if they’re just gonna give bad ratings for some inexplicable reason that probably has nothing to do with the quality of the fic. Your fics are all phenomenal, New Dawn Fades. They always manage to pull me right into the thick of whatever is going on in an update. I don’t know exactly how to descibe how I feel about your fics other than that there’s always such an intensity there, and it’s just unavoidable not to get caught up in it. I really like the beginning of this fic – I was hooked from the get-go, and I’m really excited about seeing how things will develope. Hope you update soon!
Sharmen, Tibette, Danish… we all have our ships. If anyone’s trying to bring anyone else down, it’s a damn shame and they probably need to get a life asap. Ratings are a fickle thing and, imho, totally pointless. The comments are the real deal. I love your stories NDF, you are talented, have a wild imagination and never fail to surprise us. Thank you for that, you rock.
I’ve noticed the same rating problems happening w/ other fics as well. Its unfortunate that your readers can’t give you the top ratings like before but its understandable & probably best that its disabled. Many above have written my thoughts on the whole “ratings hater” thing, so I won’t reiterate. No matter what au story you write there’s always that undeniable attraction between them. Carmen doesn’t appear to be showing Shane her diva side, maybe because she see’s that Shane hasn’t been corrupted by Hollywood. Luvin’ this fic. Your chaps. always seems to end too quickly.
still amazing still msking me gag and most of all i still love youlol… love where you goin withh it but… question… does shane have long or short hair…? its just its hard to imagin her like the beach girl on and off
I don’t care about ships. maybe a little..but I think it would be better to do care what you like than what you hate.