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Pyromance 2
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“I guess yeah. You must be the damsel in distress?”
“Only everyday of my life. Still haven’t solved that smoking problem have you?”
“Oh this…yeah I guess not.”
“Its ok…..it suits you…..lost in your own little world huh?”
“Not really…just thinking….”
She weighed that for a second then smiled and turned to walk inside. I chanced a quick glance at her as she walked away. Stunning…..yeah that was the word. Everything on her sent from the gods. Beautiful, sexy, and I wanted to feel the firmness of thighs around my waist, my hands thick in her hair clinging to her like a life raft or something….
I heard her boot scrape on the pavement and looked away before she caught me gawking at her.
“Hey Shane…I have been meaning to ask you, did you do your own surfing on the Beach?”
“Yeah most of it….”
“That is…very cool…………see you inside….”
“Yeah…..”
Ask me whatever you want sweetheart…..
I’ll answer….
I thought it…but I did not say it.
God.
The way she talked to me. Like we where already there…in the movie…..I know that a deep part of me really wanted to know her. Know her faults and wishes….her body. This woman for the next 6 to 8 months was going to be the love of my life. Not just in the movie but in everything…..
I walked inside.
Jenny the director was in the middle of making a big speech. Everyone seemed interested except for Carmen who was busy with her cell phone. It was the only seat not taken sitting next to her…so I took it. She didn’t look up from what she was doing.
“So congrats everyone once again. Some of you I know very well as you have worked on other features with me, as for everyone else I am looking forward to working with you. Now…with that said this picture was put together really fast and we all know that we need to get the ball rolling. Those of you, you know who you are….those of you who need to your special training you all leave tomorrow so don’t have too much fun at Carmen’s…”
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First the rating bit. I read fics and often leave a response but I often don’t rate them because I simply forget to do so. The main thing is that you know your fics are well read and extemely well recieved among readers, just look at the comments.Now on to the important stuff: this fic! This fic is shaping up to be my favourite of all your fics. As someone previously mentioned, there is always palable chemistry between S/C. I like suspense, so I hope they will dance around eachother for a while. Plus, Carmen has a b/f and I can’t wait to see in what way that he fit in all of this. UPDATE SOON!
uhhhh to ur comment up there. I dunno what kinda crazy bashing or watever pple are doin…. but ur writing is PHENOMENAL!! So nevermind haters =DI LOVE all ur fics.. ALL… this one is nice n light and cute. Different but still amazing!
sorry to hear about the haters! :(but i loved the update! i would have given it 5 starts! like i always do to your fics, they’re my fav!
Hey, I love that you write about my favourite character Shane, so as long as your stories involve her then I will be reading. I appreciate all the writers who take the time to write and post. It makes for part of our wonderful community. So thank you and as always, looking forward to your next posts.
I love it!!!!!
amazing! Keep going…fast!
love too the way you write like ohter your stories. It’s lighter than before and some partly is too slow but give me different pleasure. Thanks.
My guess is that it might be in large part tibetters with the sharmen hating. If I’m wrong – sorry tibetters, but if I’m right – I don’t get what they’re doing reading a sharmen centric fic if they’re just gonna give bad ratings for some inexplicable reason that probably has nothing to do with the quality of the fic. Your fics are all phenomenal, New Dawn Fades. They always manage to pull me right into the thick of whatever is going on in an update. I don’t know exactly how to descibe how I feel about your fics other than that there’s always such an intensity there, and it’s just unavoidable not to get caught up in it. I really like the beginning of this fic – I was hooked from the get-go, and I’m really excited about seeing how things will develope. Hope you update soon!
Sharmen, Tibette, Danish… we all have our ships. If anyone’s trying to bring anyone else down, it’s a damn shame and they probably need to get a life asap. Ratings are a fickle thing and, imho, totally pointless. The comments are the real deal. I love your stories NDF, you are talented, have a wild imagination and never fail to surprise us. Thank you for that, you rock.
I’ve noticed the same rating problems happening w/ other fics as well. Its unfortunate that your readers can’t give you the top ratings like before but its understandable & probably best that its disabled. Many above have written my thoughts on the whole “ratings hater” thing, so I won’t reiterate. No matter what au story you write there’s always that undeniable attraction between them. Carmen doesn’t appear to be showing Shane her diva side, maybe because she see’s that Shane hasn’t been corrupted by Hollywood. Luvin’ this fic. Your chaps. always seems to end too quickly.
still amazing still msking me gag and most of all i still love youlol… love where you goin withh it but… question… does shane have long or short hair…? its just its hard to imagin her like the beach girl on and off
I don’t care about ships. maybe a little..but I think it would be better to do care what you like than what you hate.