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    Pyromance 4

    Story written on July 5, 2007 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=66132
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    Twisted secret lives, the way you bat your eyes…..

     

     

    We walked past this skateboarder park I knew. There was a party going on. I knew some people and we got in for free. Nice music playing our laid back attire went over ok. Not really any famous people here to worry about, didn’t have the media or anything to get caught up in. We got some beer in big plastic cups. A lot of my skater friends all saying hey and giving me the hey she’s hot look. Carmen seemed a little uncomfortable so I found us a nice place to talk. A tree house. We climbed up one hand on the wooden steps the other on our beer.  Nice carpet lay on the floor. The music taking up the silence.

     

     

     

     

    “Don’t worry no one is gonna say anything here……”

     

     

     

    “I don’t care….about that stuff….”

     

     

     

    “”Really?”

     

     

    “Yeah…Shane really……can I ask you something?”

     

     

    “Do I like women?”

     

     

     

    “Yes……..”

     

     

     

    “Yeah……I love them. And yes I like to fuck them as well….”

     

     

     

    “I didn’t mean to get too personal about it…”

     

     

    “No its ok…….”

     

     

     

    “Are you with anyone…..right now?”

     

     

     

    “No…..but I was……with an older woman….its over…its been over for a while.”

     

     

     

    “Was it serious?”

     

     

    “God Carmen…you are asking a lot personal questions.”

     

     

     

    “I am sorry. So was it?”

     

     

     

    “I think that it was. I think that what I saw in her and what she saw in me where not the same thing.”

     

     

     

    “Is she prettier than me?”

     

     

     

    “No…..no one is.”

     

     

     

    Smile. Bright. I wasn’t sure where that was heading. She didn’t actually acknowledge my comment but she smiled and if it weren’t so dark I think she might have blushed just a bit. We drank our beer with Massive Attack playing in the background. I wanted to ask her a question.

     

     

     

    “So what’s with you and Bruce?”

     

     

     

    “Me and Bruce…….god…..me and Bruce….we where high School sweethearts….we where gonna get married…..and then I lost our baby….and the love is gone….I mean the physical love….its gone…you know…..but we have this thing…..he knows me so well….he has his life and I have mine……”

     

     

     

     

    “Complication.”

     

     

     

    “Yes it is.”

     

     

     

    “So how about it Carmen…..real deal honesty time…..what’s going on….with us?”

     

     

     

    “What’s going on? What’s going on is that from the moment I laid eyes on you I wanted you. And….I thank the invisible threads that are connecting us…pushing us closer to each other…after that I don’t know anything….”

     

     

     

    She crawled over to me taking the beer cup from my hand and she did that thing again when she kissed me. And once again for the second time that day…..I felt like I was in space…….

     

     

     

     

     

    To be continued……

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

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    6. Ah, man pleaz come on and update like now!!! You’re leaving us hangin’ jus a lil bit toooooooooo long, lol. Whelp, you already know I’m in love with thiz chicka so . . . Yeah, like alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS ;-p . . . Stank . . . Da’ one and only chicka =D

    7. So happy to see some Shane/Carmen fic. I like Bette and Tina but I’m ODing on all the BT fic at the mo, I welcome the change. Plus, Shane is my fav character by far and I like to see her play starring roles in fic, with or without Carmen, but with is better. Thanks for writing!

    9. ***** Oh, look at me. I’m a rebel, because I gave this story a rating anyway! Bwa-ha-ha! Anyway, I thought it was cool how Shane told Carmen that she asked a lot of personal questions, then Carmen apologized only to ask the same question again. I know it sounds lame, but I just love all the little gems in the story. From the things the characters say, to simply mentioning random things like Kevin Arnold or the “time to make the donuts.” It’s the details that really give all your stories a certain personality. I fricken love it. You know what? I’m gonna go nutty here and give it SIX fricken stars. ****** (Yeah, that’s right, I did that.) ;) Keep up the awesome work and don’t let the haters who hide behind ratings get your goat. Not worth it.

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