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Pyromance 4
“So Shane honey…..gimmie the scoop what is the movie about?”
“The movie…yeah…um its called Pyromance.”
“Wow interesting title.”
“Yeah….um …I play a bank robber.”
“Oh my how exciting…..Gabe, Shane is playing a bank robber….”
“Alright kiddo.” He said as he passed the pies down.
“……So what about you Carmen?”
“Well Carla can I call you Carla?”
“Of course honey.”
“Well I play a stripper by night and a bank teller by day…and I am in the bank when Shane and her gang hold us hostage….”
“Well that certainly sounds exciting….but I read in the paper that the movie is very violent and has some sexuality…they aren’t making you girls get naked in this movie are they?”
My step mother always had a way of getting to the bottom of things. Shane…..are these your matches….Shane what happened to your little brother…Shane are you gonna get naked in a movie…..
“Well Carla, Shane and I are getting naked in the movie….together….its a love story between Shane’s character and mine….”
“I see…..”
My father looked at me and then at Carmen and he seemed to figure things out pretty quick. I could always count on him for that. It seemed like a light turned on and everything he didn’t understand about me….well now he did.
“Well Shane…..Carmen….I trust that you both know what you are doing…and I just hope you don’t let them exploit you girls…you know how the movies are…..” Dad said while eating his pie.
I had my Kevin Arnold moment right there. I knew my father knew everything about me. I knew he understood why I would want this part. And it was sort of unspoken…..at least till later…..but right there at that moment I knew I loved my dad more than I ever really thought I did. Dad kinda took Carla’s hand in his and the matter of what the movie was about was finished. All in all dinner went well and I told dad to go on home and that I would get a cab. He paid and they took off. I wanted to talk to Carmen. So we took a walk.
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Wow! Good that they got to talk. Finally! I love your fic so PPS.
aww you left us hanging! damn i love it! :)
Adore the way you showed Carmen’s carefulness, curiosity for Shane by Shane’s POV. think that it’s harder than by Carmen’s POV.
Completely honest w/ how they are feeling, that was sweet. Carmen’s pouty behavior in the car was too funny – so her.
Its been 5 days! I miss it…. i need it. Love it thanks!
Ah, man pleaz come on and update like now!!! You’re leaving us hangin’ jus a lil bit toooooooooo long, lol. Whelp, you already know I’m in love with thiz chicka so . . . Yeah, like alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS ;-p . . . Stank . . . Da’ one and only chicka =D
So happy to see some Shane/Carmen fic. I like Bette and Tina but I’m ODing on all the BT fic at the mo, I welcome the change. Plus, Shane is my fav character by far and I like to see her play starring roles in fic, with or without Carmen, but with is better. Thanks for writing!
I just found and caught up with this story. Good stuff! Please continue soon.
***** Oh, look at me. I’m a rebel, because I gave this story a rating anyway! Bwa-ha-ha! Anyway, I thought it was cool how Shane told Carmen that she asked a lot of personal questions, then Carmen apologized only to ask the same question again. I know it sounds lame, but I just love all the little gems in the story. From the things the characters say, to simply mentioning random things like Kevin Arnold or the “time to make the donuts.” It’s the details that really give all your stories a certain personality. I fricken love it. You know what? I’m gonna go nutty here and give it SIX fricken stars. ****** (Yeah, that’s right, I did that.) ;) Keep up the awesome work and don’t let the haters who hide behind ratings get your goat. Not worth it.
aah i love the fact that carmen always wanted shane !! thanks for posting, this story is awesome.
This is the perfect fic for this time of year…”the feel good hit of the summer”. Two thumbs up and five stars.
not that cliffhanger is waayyy too cruel!! i love this story
great as always! I was suprised about the parents but they were really cool!!!
I really love this. You’re doing a great job as usual!Thanks