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Pyromance 4
Pyromance 4
I watcher her. Sleeping soundly like a kid. She was beautiful there was no doubt in mind about that. Not hard to see really, kinda lost, kinda needing to be found. I couldn’t stand to be on my own. But I wanted her gone. She was making me all fuzzy, I wasn’t secure with that. It was stupid to ask why, I had I gotten myself into this. So I didn’t. I went back to the rock everyone awake laughing off their highs. Benny was making a scene that was his way. I pulled Bruce to the side. It seemed like seeing me triggered the fact that Carmen was not around.
He looked a little antsy.
“Bruce.”
“Hey Shane you seen Carm around?”
“She’s at my place…..she got sick and everyone was knocked out so I took her to my trailer.”
“Is she ok?”
He was genuinely worried. It made it hard to dislike him.
“Yeah she’s good…sleeping….you should get her…and head on back to L.A.”
“Thank you…for a minute there….I thought I was still under……you got a ride?”
“Yeah I am cool…I’ll ride with Benny….or someone don’t worry about me.”
“No….you came with us the least we can do is bring you back….plus Carm would like it….she is big fan of yours….never missed an episode….come on…lets wake up sleeping beauty…..”
We walked back and she is up. She looks confused as to why she is my trailer. She smiles when she sees Bruce. They hug and kiss and it’s sweet. When they are done kissing she wipes her mouth. I try to keep from feeling jealous but it really didn’t work. I suddenly felt the need to be somewhere else.
“Ah Carm…I was worried…thank goodness Shane found you.”
“Yeah….Shane was very good to me.” We stood there in my trailer just looking at each other. Bruce’s head going from me to Carmen…to me. Carmen cleared her throat to get his attention…it worked.
“Shane you are the coolest….I really can’t thank you enough.” He said kind of absently.
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Wow! Good that they got to talk. Finally! I love your fic so PPS.
aww you left us hanging! damn i love it! :)
Adore the way you showed Carmen’s carefulness, curiosity for Shane by Shane’s POV. think that it’s harder than by Carmen’s POV.
Completely honest w/ how they are feeling, that was sweet. Carmen’s pouty behavior in the car was too funny – so her.
Its been 5 days! I miss it…. i need it. Love it thanks!
Ah, man pleaz come on and update like now!!! You’re leaving us hangin’ jus a lil bit toooooooooo long, lol. Whelp, you already know I’m in love with thiz chicka so . . . Yeah, like alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS ;-p . . . Stank . . . Da’ one and only chicka =D
So happy to see some Shane/Carmen fic. I like Bette and Tina but I’m ODing on all the BT fic at the mo, I welcome the change. Plus, Shane is my fav character by far and I like to see her play starring roles in fic, with or without Carmen, but with is better. Thanks for writing!
I just found and caught up with this story. Good stuff! Please continue soon.
***** Oh, look at me. I’m a rebel, because I gave this story a rating anyway! Bwa-ha-ha! Anyway, I thought it was cool how Shane told Carmen that she asked a lot of personal questions, then Carmen apologized only to ask the same question again. I know it sounds lame, but I just love all the little gems in the story. From the things the characters say, to simply mentioning random things like Kevin Arnold or the “time to make the donuts.” It’s the details that really give all your stories a certain personality. I fricken love it. You know what? I’m gonna go nutty here and give it SIX fricken stars. ****** (Yeah, that’s right, I did that.) ;) Keep up the awesome work and don’t let the haters who hide behind ratings get your goat. Not worth it.
aah i love the fact that carmen always wanted shane !! thanks for posting, this story is awesome.
This is the perfect fic for this time of year…”the feel good hit of the summer”. Two thumbs up and five stars.
not that cliffhanger is waayyy too cruel!! i love this story
great as always! I was suprised about the parents but they were really cool!!!
I really love this. You’re doing a great job as usual!Thanks