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QUE SERA SERA- Chapter 23
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“Well, because it just happened.” Bette answered.
“What? Bloody hell! Just now???” Helena asked in astonishment.
Bette nodded gently, glancing quickly over at Helena before looking at the road again.
“Oh my God! Bette! I can’t believe this…just now? But you didn’t say anything!” Helena widened her eyes again and shook her head.
“I know…I didn’t want to scare you.” Bette answered. “After you left, I walked over to the car and found it waiting for me. I didn’t lock the car while we were talking? That’s the only time I think he could have got in to do it…”
“He? You keep saying ‘he’…” Helena asked in confusion.
“He or she…I haven’t got a clue…the window wasn’t broken so it had to have been while we were talking…I took it out carefully…I don’t think the guy’s stupid enough to leave fingerprints but you just never know sometimes right?
Helena nodded, deep in thought and in shock as Bette continued.
“When I saw the knife, all I could think of was: a knife that size? positioned where it was? and being alone in the car park? I definitely wasn’t sticking around to find out who it belonged to! Can you blame me though?
Helena looked over at Bette and shook her head.
“I couldn’t get into the car quick enough! I was all ready to leg it like a coward before you turned up and saved me!”
“Saved you? You’re kidding right? This is crazy!” Helena said taking it all in and crinkling her brow again in worry.
The steady purring of the Saab’s engine filled the silence as both women sat in deep in thought.
“I’m really sorry Bette…” Helena said gently.
“For what?” Bette smiled over.
“I guess I feel responsible…”
“For what?” Bette asked very gently, glancing over at her to smile.
“Well maybe the stalker doesn’t want me around you? I’d hate to think that someone would try to hurt you because of me.” Helena asked subdued.
Bette glanced over at her again and her heart was sore.
“Well, we don’t know that for sure…we’re just taking precautions right?” she said gently and smiled over at Helena.
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That was great!!! You have got me so hooked on this story. Nice Cliffy.Thank you PPS
Ooh, drama!!!! Keep up the good work babes. Cant wait to find out Tina response xxx
I don’t think its Tina, that would be too obvious. Although I do think she’s got to be the top suspect.Great post and post soon.
Bum..Bum…Bum…….the plot thickens!!I love the officer’s response to Bette shouting that she was Helena’s lesbian lover. Perfect way to take the edge off the story. Tina better leave my Belena alone, or else Helena might not be responsible for her actions. And how the HELL did Tina get into Helena’s house???
Nesh, I’ve been reading about human behavior and decided to apply it to FF reading. We (FF readers) usually choose small tortures in small increments (cliffhangers once a week) over larger tortures with bigger delays in between ([cliffy + 1 wk wait] every…week? O_o That doesn’t make sense >: Did I confuse you now? haaaaa…ehhh me too) But anyway..you seem insistent on forcing the latter on us (the worst of the 2) Hmm though it’s also true that people are willing to wait longer for a bigger reward. :) As for story analysis, erm, I just like being told things, so I leave that to the others (and I kind of suck at it *cough*) Was Tina standing in the dark with a flashlight under her face? pwahaha creepy ‘__’ Wow…I really don’t want to write my paper if I spent this much time writing a comment. mrr….
Nesha grl absolutly lved yur chappy this week. it was da bomb i agree wit every1 else it was intruging you hav to post again soon we all want to know who the stalker is please :-) And officer romeo was wrote very good too :-) dont leave us hanging too long post soon!
I totally missed that this was Helena’s house. What the hell is stalker Tina doing there??
Ok, Nesha…Berry, berry cool! So happy that they reported the incidents…to dumb and dumber (LOL Clar)…what is up with typing challenged cops and do they really still use typewriters? Its ’06 for goodness sakes. Now, what the ‘L’ is Tina doing there?
Why is Tina there? What does she have like radar or something to detect when Bette is about to bed Helena. Great, this will definitely put a damper on what Bette and Helena had started (dang it!). Back to this stalker business….I’m intrigued. Who could it be? I’m guessing it’s a guy, but whom??? Please post soon Nesha, I just love your story.
Oh i can’t believe you stopped there, what the bloody hell is tina doing in helena’s house?! The nerve of the woman! You have really got me hooked here girl, can’t wait for the next post, thank you!
NICE!!! loved it! especially how you kept dropping intriguing lil bits on ‘he’ and ‘she’ about the stalker. Hints, maybe? I bet you’ve thought this all out! Really anjoyed this, you kept the intrigue and brought in some romance and easy humour! Great stuff, thanks :)
I’m with vvitvh on this one. “He” is dropped several times so my spider senses are telling him it’s a man that’s doing the stalking. Or you could just be saying ‘he’ to throw us off the scent. Might the stalker be Tina? BTW – for a woman that is no longer with Bette, what gives her the right to just come in the damned house? She was there before Bette and Helena. Ok, PPS!!
nice and intriguing twist you give us here. But WTF is that bitch doing in the house as she no longer lives there? Does she really think she can get rid with everything? Please post soon I want to know who this he/she stalker is, thx
Great chapter Nesh, it really brought back some memories of police stations that I’ve visited. There are so much dumbasses overthere, you just can’t believe it. I know you are a tease but this time you sure spoiled us with it, him/her I’m anxious to know. And last but not least I just love your cliffhanger…I’m curious what Tina has to say now. Thanks for posting.
Thanks for the gret chapter Nesha.Nice cliffhanger ;)
Well, Nesha, I suspected the stalker was Tina right from the start, but I’m pretty sure you just want to give us a false lead here, you naughty girl… LOL ! It’s been awhile since we have last seen Tina, though, and we know she was at the Planet when Bette found the knife in her car… She might even be suffering from multiple personality disorder, who knows ? Anyway, that police officer was indeed pretty funny. At first, I thought that he was pissed because Bette and Helena had interrupted him and his colleague’s dumb and dumber’s contest. LOL ! I’m so looking forward to reading your next chapter as Tina is going to have a lot to explain. I just hope she’s not going to try and blow Bette’s chances with Helena. That would be so pathetic and unfair of her at this point. But don’t they say “everything’s fair in love and war” ? Oh, well, don’t keep us waiting too long, please, I really want to know if Tina’s going to turn into Norman Bates’ mother or if she’s going to try and rationalize the situation.
Tina being the stalker is too easy. Maybe it’s Winnie…or Dylan. Or maybe it’s still Helena. Or maybe I just really don’t know and will wait for the next post…lol.
I’m very intrigued now… I wanna know who it is! Perhaps it’s Tina. I hope Helena and Tina get into a cat fight. *grins evilly* There’s nothing more entertaining than seeing two women fight.
it would be cool if the stalker is tina so that she can go to jail and be out of the picture, right? he or she…hmmm, who could i be…impatiently waiting for your next post because this one was definitely intriguing.
is tina the stalker??? damn……this is good……i like it…..please continue soon….
co i think because you dropped the He thing so much that it is actually a she…..Tina maybe???LOL. You have me hanging by a thread here so i think you should post 2 chapters by tomorrow LOL