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    Rain

    Story written on August 18, 2011 by Tibetter24.
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    The rain had been pounding mercilessly against the windows. It made a hard pitter-patter sound, then slid down the glass leaving a trail of wetness.

    She wavered on her feet, dropping the bottle with a crash to the floor. She dropped down to her knees and looked up to the sky, wavering dangerously close to the pool. Tina opened the door with a gasp. Her heart was pounding so hard it was defeaning.

    “God, why do you keep doing this to me?” Bette cried looking up to the heavens, “what did I do to deserve this?”

    Tina’s eyes welled with tears. It felt like someone had grabbed her heart, twisted it roughly, then tore it into shreds.

    “I’m sorry God,” Bette sobbed, “I’m sorry that I was a player and a heartbreaker. I’m sorry that I was a bad daughter and sister. I’m sorry I betrayed the woman I love with a Candace fucking Jewel. I’m sorry I couldn’t support her and provide for her. I’m sorry I cheated on Jodi Lerner. I’m sorry I flirted with Kelly Wentworth. I’m sorry for everything! Please God, forgive me! For once in my life, make something go good for me. I didn’t cheat on Tina God, you know that. I swear I was only picking up glass.”

    Bette dropped her head in tears, wobbling slightly when a wave of dizziness overcame her. Tina wanted to say something but her throat was completely dried out.

    “I don’t deserve this,” Bette breathed her body shaking with agony, “you’re right God. I see the signs now. That’s why Tina won’t believe me isn’t it? She is too beautiful and amazing for me. She deserves better. I don’t deserve to have a daughter as wonderful as Angelica, and I don’t deserve to have a child of my own flesh and blood. That’s why Tina didn’t ask me to mother our second child.”

    Tina let out a quiet gasp, the tears she’d been holding in spilled out of her eyes like acid rain, they were burning her skin as they rolled down. They rolled down faster than the rain slamming against the cement floor.

    Bette let out a cry of distress to the sky, her body shaking and wobbling, “I don’t deserve to live God! Just take me away!”

    Tina let out a cry of distress when Bette let her body fall into the pool and sink down to the bottom. Tina reacted instantly, running out into the yard and diving into the pool. The rain made a terrible wave inside of the pool. Tina couldn’t see a thing she was disoriented. She looked around frantically, the chlorine burning her Hazel eyes. Tina’s vision was blurred, but she managed to see Bette’s form at the bottom of the pool, eight feet deep.

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    10. What an imagination and I love it. And yes it was brilliant and beautiful and so many more adjectives that I can’t think of at the moment. Loved it. Wish there could be more chapters. Thanks.

    11. HEY TB24, That was totally awesome. A real edge of the seat ride as Tina struggled with a dead weight Bette in the pool. And then out of the water all the hurt and passion they share exploded like a firework on the 4th of July. Frightening Angie like that was so out of character however Bette had sunk to the depths again. Tina was her life-line. Then Tina took ownership of her part and apologised for not having faith in her sou-mate. Brava!!! Encore!!! Just fricking fantastic! Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

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