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    Rain

    Story written on August 18, 2011 by Tibetter24.
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    The rain had been pounding mercilessly against the windows. It made a hard pitter-patter sound, then slid down the glass leaving a trail of wetness.

    The alcohol had made her body much weaker and she was already unconscious from the lack of air. Tina swam as fast as she could towards her wife, wrapping her arms Bette’s waist and pushing off the floor to the surface. Bette was llimp in her arms as she surfaced and kicked her feet wildly, trying to get to the edge of the pool.

    The rain was beating hard against her head, and Bette’s weight was pulling her down.

    Tina let out a groan and gripped Bette tighter, “we’ll both drown before I let you go Bette Porter!”

     Tina swam desperately, her head going under a few times from Bette’s weight. Tina pushed her head up with a gasp, trying to move Bette to the edge of the pool.

    “Mommy!”

    Tina let out a cry at the sound of Angelica’s voice. She couldn’t watch this. She couldn’t watch both of her mothers die!

    “Angelica, get away from the pool!” Tina managed to scream before slipping under the water again.

    Tina pushed up again just as Angelica ran across the yard to Shane and Max’s house.

    “Bette!” Tina cried, “wake up!” She sunk under the water again, pushing Bette’s body up, to try to keep Bette’s face above the water.

    Tina felt the water moving around her and felt an arm wrapping around her waist. Tina was pulled up to the surface where she let out a gasp.

    “Tina!” Shane cried grabbing onto Bette, “swim! Swim!”

    Tina immediately kicked her legs, pushing Bette towards the edge of the pool as Shane pulled. “Guys! Right here!” Max yelled from the ledge extending her hand.

    Shane grabbed his hand and pulled forward, working together to drag Bette up onto the ledge. Tina immediately climbed up afterwards.

    “Momma B!” Angelica cried running toward Bette only to be stopped by Max.

    “Take her inside!” Tina cried rushing to Bette’s side.

    Max immediately picked her up and ran inside as Tina started chest compressions on Bette. Shane crawled to the other side of Bette and grabbed her hand. Tina leaned down and pressed her lips onto Bette’s blowing air into her body.

    “Come on Bette,” Shane whimpered.

    Tina sat up with a gasp and did more compressions, “come on Bette! Come on!”

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    10. What an imagination and I love it. And yes it was brilliant and beautiful and so many more adjectives that I can’t think of at the moment. Loved it. Wish there could be more chapters. Thanks.

    11. HEY TB24, That was totally awesome. A real edge of the seat ride as Tina struggled with a dead weight Bette in the pool. And then out of the water all the hurt and passion they share exploded like a firework on the 4th of July. Frightening Angie like that was so out of character however Bette had sunk to the depths again. Tina was her life-line. Then Tina took ownership of her part and apologised for not having faith in her sou-mate. Brava!!! Encore!!! Just fricking fantastic! Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

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