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Rain
“Please wake up,” Shane cried.
Tina leaned down and blew air into Bette again. Bette started coughing violently and Tina immediately pushed her to the side making her cough out water.
“Bette! Bette!” Tina said desperately.
“Bette, are you alright!” Shane said.
Bette coughed and looked up at Tina and Shane, groaning at the pain in her throat.
“What the fuck were you doing?” Tina screamed slapping her arm hard.
“Ow!” Bette cried.
“Tina!” Shane chided.
“You don’t ever fucking do that again! You hear me!” Tina yelled gripping Bette’s shirt and pulling her up.
“What the hell is going on?” Shane said.
Tina didn’t answer, she just crashed her lips onto Bette’s with fury. Bette groaned in surprise and Tina climbed on top of her.
“Jesus!” Shane said backing away.
“Mmm, take Angie to your house!” Tina growled not moving her lips away.
Shane let out a small yelp at the harsh tone and scrambled into the house.
“What the hell?” Max asked as Shane ran in.
“Let’s go to the house now! We’re taking Angie!” Shane said.
“Where’s momma B!” Angelica cried.
“It’s alright Angie,” Shane soothed, “we just have to leave her alone right now. She’ll see you in the morning okay?”
Angelica looked insecure but nodded slowly. Shane motioned towards the door and Max quickly followed with Angelica in his arms.
Tina heard the front door closing and pulled Bette up to her feet. Her face was contorted in anger as she pushed Bette back towards the house.
“Tina, I’m so sorry,” Bette said weakly.
“You think you’re not good enough for me?” Tina snapped angrily shoving Bette into the house. There was only one other time Tina was this angry, but she couldn’t control her rage, she almost lost her wife as well as her own life! Who knows what would have happened if Shane and Max wouldn’t have come to help.
“I’m sorry, I’m sorry,” Bette said backing up against the wall of the hallway.
“No!” Tina said pushing Bette into the wall by her shoulders, “I’m sorry!”
Bette looked completely shocked as she uttered, “what?”
“I’m sorry for not believing you,” Tina said breaking into shaky sobs, “I’m sorry for not asking you to be a mother to our second child. I’m sorry. I’m the one who doesn’t deserve you!”
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I enjoyed that so much! I am just joining the ranks of your admirers ….hope it would rain here though….it is so hot today! Thanks T24
Thank you for this beautiful story.P.S.It was very hot today ,and now its raining .PPS
words where are you? wow
That was beautiful and love it, thanks!
brilliant. i loved it. perfection. thank you :)
What a beautiful story. Thank you.
Wow,scary in the beginning, but it went brilliantly afterward. thank u ;D
Beautiful story. You are really improving as a writer everyday!
The best one-chapter story ever. I have tears in my eyes, so intense. Thank you, thank you, than you…
What an imagination and I love it. And yes it was brilliant and beautiful and so many more adjectives that I can’t think of at the moment. Loved it. Wish there could be more chapters. Thanks.
HEY TB24, That was totally awesome. A real edge of the seat ride as Tina struggled with a dead weight Bette in the pool. And then out of the water all the hurt and passion they share exploded like a firework on the 4th of July. Frightening Angie like that was so out of character however Bette had sunk to the depths again. Tina was her life-line. Then Tina took ownership of her part and apologised for not having faith in her sou-mate. Brava!!! Encore!!! Just fricking fantastic! Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
i like it
Really brillant, intense story!
Absolutely beautiful :)
Lovely