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Ranch Ch 8
About an hour later Tina felt a lot better and she decided to head back to the ranch and have an early start on the staples. She got up and looked around her for
Tina:
She started to walk down the other side of the hill whistling and calling his name. Few minutes later she found him standing by the river. He was shaking his head and making funny noised that Tina wasnt used to hearing. She has never seen him do that before. She rushed down to him still calling his name.
Tina:
But the horse was definitely not right. He was acting really strange and Tina has never seen him do that before.
Tina: What is the matter
Tina started to stroke the top of his head and his face. She was worried about him now.
Tina: What is it? What is the matter? You were fine a minute ago, what had happened? Are you hurt? What is it?
Tina was really getting scared about him now, she couldnt bare see him hurt. She bent down to check his legs for any signs of injury fearing that he mightve been stung by a snake or something. She checked his legs one by one and couldnt find anything wrong with him.
Tina:
Tina knows that the horse can’t speak but she just wanted a sign from him anything to let her know what was wrong. She was still bent down when her eyes strayed to the river bank and heart almost stopped. She couldnt believe her eyes. Her heart was beating so fast she thought she was going to faint. She let go of
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Well, it looks like Bette has finally arrived at the ranch.
Shane, My map is crazy.Could it be Bette? thanks
Okay, you got me back!!!! I am hope this is Bette.POST SOON!
Honeypot, you are the mistress of suspense, mystery and intrigue!!! Luckily for me, so far you have revealed a least one of the mystery people… so hopefully you will not keep us hanging on for too long. But this is good stuff, so keep it coming.
i agree with id18…….looks as though bette has finally reached the ranch!!!!!!
Alright, I am freezing from the cold river. Who is the mystery woman and how did she get where she is? Post soon.
a-HA … i’ve located N-S-E-W on my map, now i just hafta figure out where the proverbial spot-marking X is … i’m looking forward to the next chappie. thanks!
It could be sania (was that her name?) ‘s mother… Could that be bette? Damn… It’s hard to understand but well… that keeps us coming back for more ;)