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Ranch Ch 8
Oh my god she was so relieved there was pulse but it was very weak and barely noticeable.
Tina looked around her again to see if she could spot anyone there, anyone who could probably help her, but she couldnt see anyone. She then knew that she was alone and that she had to do something, anything to help this helpless person. She looked and opened the mouth to see if there were any objects inside it so that she could clear it out and start the breathing process. Tinas hands were shaking so badly and she still couldnt control her own breathing. She was really petrified but she had to pull herself together to deal with what was in front of her. She must hurry if she is going to save this woman’s life. It was obvious to Tina then that someone wanted this woman dead. They dumped her in the river and hoped that she would die or thought that she was dead already. It appears that the woman managed somehow to crawl out of the water and ended up on the river bank.
Tina started to talk to the person hoping that she could get an answer. She moved closer to the woman’s mouth and put her ear as close as possible so that she could hear her.
Tina: Hello, can you hear me? Dont be scared. What is your name? My name is Tina and I am going to help you.
There was no reply; Tina only heard the womans faint whine and moaning.
Tina: Please talk to me if you could. I am going to help you. Dont be scared. Where does it hurt?
The woman’s face was all roughed up and her eyes were black and bruised and barely open. She looked and felt all limp which indicated probable broken bones but Tina couldnt be sure. The woman’s pulse was fading away and she couldnt wait for an answer. She must start to help with whatever means she could. Tina cleared the woman’s face and covered her mouth with hers and started right away breathing for her. She only knew how to CPR on animals but there couldn’t be much difference, Tina thought. So she didnt waste any more time and started to put the theory into practice and do what she’d done many times to her new born lambs and goats.
Oh boy this one is going to be tough Tina thought, and looked around her again hoping she’d find someone to help her. She was all alone with this wounded woman. Tina covered the woman’s mouth again and started to breath for her. Few minutes passed and the woman wasn’t responding.
Tina: Breathe goddammitt. Breathe, oh please breathe. Oh God. For God’s sake, please breathe for me honey. Come on, come on.
Tina was getting frustrated.
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Well, it looks like Bette has finally arrived at the ranch.
Shane, My map is crazy.Could it be Bette? thanks
Okay, you got me back!!!! I am hope this is Bette.POST SOON!
Honeypot, you are the mistress of suspense, mystery and intrigue!!! Luckily for me, so far you have revealed a least one of the mystery people… so hopefully you will not keep us hanging on for too long. But this is good stuff, so keep it coming.
i agree with id18…….looks as though bette has finally reached the ranch!!!!!!
Alright, I am freezing from the cold river. Who is the mystery woman and how did she get where she is? Post soon.
a-HA … i’ve located N-S-E-W on my map, now i just hafta figure out where the proverbial spot-marking X is … i’m looking forward to the next chappie. thanks!
It could be sania (was that her name?) ‘s mother… Could that be bette? Damn… It’s hard to understand but well… that keeps us coming back for more ;)