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    Rebuilding 5

    Story written on June 6, 2006 by BealsBaby.
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    Shane visits Carmen

    You’ve been my soulmate and then some

    I remembered you the moment I met you

    With you I knew god’s face was handsome

    With you I saw fun and expansion

    This loss is numbing me

    It pierces my chest

    And I can’t stop dropping everything

    Without realising it, she was crying. All this time she’d been pretending that it was just Angelica she was sad at losing, but the truth was she missed Tina as well. Lifting the photo to her lips, she planted a soft kiss on Tina’s face.

    “I love you T” she whispered.

    I thought we’d be sexy together

    Thought we’d be evolving together

    I thought we’d have children together

    I thought we’d be family together

    But I was sadly mistaken

    Replacing the photo on the shelf, Bette picked up the picture next to it. It had been taken in the hospital not long after Angelica’s birth. Tina lay on the bed with Angelica in her arms, and Bette stood protectively over them, with a soft hand laid on each of them.

    “My family” Bette said out loud.

    If I had a bill for all the philosophies I shared

    If I had a penny for all the possibilities I presented

    If I had a dime for every hand thrown up in the air

    My wealth would render this no less severe

    Bette sank to her knees clutching the photo that represented everything that she’d lost. She’d had a family, and now she had nothing. Nothing to console herself with, nothing to make up for her loss. Just a photograph of happy times.

    I thought we’d be genius together

    I thought we’d be healing together

    I thought we’d be growing together

    Thought we’d be adventurous together

    But I was sadly mistaken

    Thought we’d be exploring together

    Thought we’d be inspired together

    I thought we’d be flying together

    Thought we’d be on fire together

    But I was sadly mistaken

     

     

    Keeping one of her hands on Shane’s cheek, Carmen ran the other down to her chin. She pressed her lips against Shane’s again. Shane responded by running her hands through Carmen’s hair and pulling her head closer. Unable to restrain herself, Carmen took Shane’s bottom lip between hers and ran her tongue along it, asking for entry to her mouth. Shane wasn’t about to deny this, and opened her mouth to welcome the warmth of Carmen’s tongue. They kissed hungrily, restarting the fire that had been out for so long.

    “Is this what you want?” Shane breathed, temporarily breaking from the kiss.

    “Just kiss me”

    Carmen grabbed Shane and pulled her back into the kiss. She ran her hands down Shane’s back, playing with the bottom of her shirt.

    “I missed kissing you” Carmen whispered.

    “I missed kissing you too baby”

    Taking the lead, Carmen walked Shane towards the sofa, continuing to kiss her with her hands stroking her lower back underneath her shirt.

    “Baby?” Shane asked.

    Instead of answering Carmen pushed Shane down on the sofa and straddled her. Leaning down, she kissed Shane in what may well have been desperation. Her hands ran clumsily down the front of Shane’s body, blindly trying to get some relief.

    “Baby?” Shane asked again.

    “Yeah?” Carmen paused in what she was doing.

    “You’re still crying”

    Shane sat up and gently wiped the tears from Carmen’s face, only to have them replaced by more. Pulling Carmen into an embrace, she stroked her head gently and tried to soothe her.

    “Just lie with me baby ok?”

    Carmen nodded and let her body relax against Shane’s.

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    1. I love this story . . . I don’t know why all you authors have the abilty to make me cry, lmao. I feel really bad for Bette. I’m glad Shane and Carmen are taking things one step at a time . . . it’s so cute them just lying in each others arms, that’s so fuckin’ cute!! Wonderful job, please continue! Now if you will excuse me, I have to go buy some more tissue, lol . . . LYLAS

    4. So much emotion. Your writing is great. I usually skip over Sharmen stuff in stories, but I love yours. I’m in physical pain for Bette. Tina… I don’t know. I want to see Bette move on, but somehow the Tibetter in my just can’t let go.

    5. the songs are great, and i’m glad that at least carmen gives it another chance unlike tina and my heart is breaking for bette, i hope real tina will come back

    6. These are very emotional chapters! Really well done. My heart breaks for Bette, and for Shane and Carmen. And, I am trying to feel heartache for Tina as well, but until I find out why she is being such a snake, I will wait! Thanks!!!

    8. Holy shit you just made me cry! Glad everythings ok with shane and carmen, but poor Bette! My heart is breaking for her! anyway post as soon as you can! thanx

    9. I think we will be looking a long time for the Tina we knew and loved. It just wasn’t Bette affair,it was a lot of thing. Henry will never be proud of Angie and will try to make Tina the same way, Ashamed of her mix heiratage Glad that Carmen is going to try to give Shane another chance. When Tina understands that one mistake does place you on the floor and for everyone to wipe their feet on.Then she might come back. Lets see if Bette get new bedroon furniture and redo the bed room. thanks

    10. OK, not fair, you’re making me cry at work! Very nice chapter. Poor Bette. I’d like to slap Tina. Bette baby, you can over by me, I’ll make you feel better like Carmen is with Shane.

    12. Hey there BealsBaby, You are certainly post them fast and loose. And want fabulous chapters they are. It is heartbreaking to see Bette and Tina at each other’s throats as Shane and Carmen slowly and delicately move back into each other’s arms. This was a piece of poetry as the mistakes of the past were dealt with and a new brighter day began. If only Bette and Tina could recapture some of their past desire and understanding. Either that or a 2 x 4 smacked on their heads. Oh what will tomorrow bring. Please post more so I can dive into your wonderful waters and enjoy your wicked words washing over me. More please, real soon. Your Loyal Fan.

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