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“I want to see you every second, make sure you don’t need me to stop.”
I wanted to cry at her tenderness. “I don’t want to stop Bette, not this time.”
“I just want to be sure T, I love you.”
“I know babe, I love you too.”
Then she finally kissed me making me step into her fully, our lace clad ***** rubbing. I wanted her naked at that moment, wanted our skin pressed together. As if reading my mind she moved to unclasp my bra, but not before leaning back to make eye contact ensuring that it was okay. I reassured her by unclasping hers as well. She stepped back into me, our naked chests in contact. I gasped out my surprise at what I felt.
“You feel so soft.” I had to tell her, let her know what I was feeling. Our nipples brushed occasionally sending little jolts of pleasure to my already soak panties. I pulled back to stare at her chest, those dark nipples standing tall against a mocha background. All I could think about was our first date and how even then I wanted to lick these magnificent *****. So I did just that. I kissed her sternum before nuzzling softly along the side of her breast. She smelled amazing like sweat and perfume and something I couldn’t quite identify. When I finally placed my tongue on her skin I couldn’t contain the groan that escaped me. She tasted divine. Her hands tangled into my hair guiding my head towards her nipple, silently telling me where she wanted me most. When at last her nipple was in my mouth it was her turn to release of moan of desire. The pebbly flesh grew taut against my tongue leading me to suck even harder. I loved that I could do that to her body. Just as I was getting into a rhythm she pulled me away and up towards her face. I let out a dissatisfied sigh.
“No fair, I was just getting the hang of it.” I don’t think she bought my mock pout. She did let out a little laugh however as she threw me a suspicious look.
“All in due time baby, I just want to get you out of these.” Her words were spoken directly into my mouth, our lips brushing with every syllable. She grasped my jeans once again while driving her tongue deep in my mouth. As she was lowering the material from my body, her mouth was making the decent as well. She nipped at my neck briefly before moving down to my chest. She left a wet trail from one nipple to another causing me to arch my back wanting more than just her teasing contact. When she finally blew her stream of cold air across my slightly damp skin I thought I might pass out. I’d never had anyone pay this much attention to my ***** before, usually just a quick lick and then on to the main attraction. But she was relentless, licking and blowing, finally taking my swollen flesh between her teeth, biting down hard. The pain was excruciating and I wanted more. All I could think the whole night was how I wanted more.
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That was hot. WOW really need more. You need good grades also so study and then write.
What do you mean you’ve never been in this position before? Damn,those last couple of chapters are enough to set a person on fire. Your writing is so descriptive, and so emotional that you feel like your right there witnessing it. Fantastic job, keep it up, but not at the cost of your grades and school.
Even better than your other installment, which was wonderful
Even better than your other installment, which was wonderful
You think Bette got goosebumps..you should see me!! That was absolutely amazing!!Isn’t it time for school vacation yet?
very nice – that was almost as good as my first time :) don’t wait too long to post again – that was very great
OMG..that was fucking beautiful! I hope you continue to write many chapters. OK..gotta head to the shower…cold of course.
Muy Caliente! That’s was so steamin hot. I’m gonna go and take a cold shower and when i get back i hope to find the next chapter of this great tale.
Is it hot in here or is it just me? Wow!! I enjoy the intensity and emotion that you deliver. Excellent story. Who needs school when you write like this? Ok, ok, don’t drop out but I bet you could write your way out of anything. I’m just saying… (smile)
That was awesome, amazeing, and so beautifully written ive just read it twice and loved every word you”ve written looking forward to the next chapter… wouldnt mind Bettes POV…lol Im sure youd do it justice mmmmmm
oh god… bring it on… and you could make it last for ever…
Beautiful, poetic, lovely and……….HOT as HELL! Thanks!
Damn that was so fucking hot and sexy, love it. Bring it more please, thanks!
God, you really have a gift for depicting acurate feelings and sensations through both tender and passionate touches : what a beautiful, sensitive, exquisite palette !
Your writing is truly wonderful. All my sincere congratulations !
” “You are the most stunning thing I have ever seen in my life.” Coming for an art connoisseur, that’s one of the biggest compliments you could ever hope to receive.”
That line was great, by the way, I love it !
this is so sensual and overwhelming. thanks. read you soon.
Speaking as one the past judges I think if you get this out over 5 or more chapters this will most definately be a high contender for the next “Cold Shower Award”. Excellant writing, full of sensual emotions and tenderness.
Every so often, I read a new story…I simply don’t have time to keep up with them all. But last night, I had the pleasure of reading one of yours for the first time…part 1 of this story…and I was so taken in by your writing that I went back and read all your previous chapters too. Just fantastic. You have a lovely way with words, and I hope your stories continue for many more chapters. Thanks for taking the time to write.(But don’t fail out of school…)
OMG! This is soooooo gooooood and overwhelming!! Like looking at a piece of art that is just truly beautiful that it blew me away!! Hot… it sure is very very hot!! I’ve read your first chapter like 3 times… and this… wow… I don’t know how many times I’m gonna read it. Post more and soon…
Oh my GAWD!!! Why do I insist on reading all your people’s wonderful writing at work. That was unbelievably sensual and loveing. I can’t wait for the next chapter! Superlative writing.
Totally hot. You did a great job w/that.
I agree with all comments previously written!This scene is the most sensuous one I ever read until now. Hot!
Readers often want to be “put in the room” of the action, experiencing the emotions of the characters. If a writer is extremely gifted a reader is able to feel the emotions as if they themselves were the characters. You have accomplished this difficult task. I can’t wait to be both Bette and Tina…again and again and again.
k, i just choked on my toast. mother of god that was fucking nuclear. im giving myself a moment to calm down to write.
“but sitting here before her, allowed to touch and explore, my mind went into overdrive.” where the hell do you think mine went. well actually mine went nowhere. i couldnt think. as soon as you can, thanks.
fucking sensual and HOT!!!!!!
Whoa! that was so HOT great I Love it Please continue post soon Thanks!
HOT HOT HOT!!!! Bring on the next installment!!!!
oh my u r such a beautiful writer, pls continue….
School…schmule. Although I suppose there’s a certain amount of rudeness involved in asking you to flunk out to keep writing for our enjoyment.
And this chapter was much enjoyed. Please, what you can, when you can. The readers will be here.
That was fantastic – more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!