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Reflection
Tina’s P.O.V.
I can’t believe I’m not asleep. I should be exhausted. Who am I kidding, I am exhausted. After the night I just shared with Bette I should be sleeping for the next two days. I can’t believe I just made love to a woman; that’s why I can’t sleep. My head is spinning, thoughts racing a mile a minute. I made love to a woman. I slept with a woman. I had ***** with a woman. Two months ago that concept would have seemed so foreign to me I would have scoffed if someone told be I’d be lying here today wrapped in Bette’s strong arms. I would have thought they were crazy if they told me I’d be in a relationship with a *****, confidant, mocha-skinned, female art director. I would have dismissed them if they said that a woman would bring me the greatest pleasure I had ever known in my life. Pleasure that spread through my body for hours on end leaving me more physically and emotionally satisfied than I ever thought possible. I would have told them they were insane and that they didn’t know what they were talking about. I would have been wrong.
Two months ago everything that I knew was turned upside down. How you may wonder? Because of an earring and a kiss. A kiss that was inevitable after a night of shameless flirting even if I didn’t realize that was what I was doing. A kiss that made me break up with my boyfriend of nine months the very next day. A kiss that opened up a whole new world of possibilities I had somehow overlooked for the last twenty seven years of my life. A kiss from Bette Porter. It wasn’t one of the many toe-curling, mind-altering kisses I’ve shared with her over these past two months. No, it was delicate and soft, maybe the softest thing I have ever felt. There was no pressure or expectation, just an offer to explore something new and exciting. An offer I readily accepted.
When I opened the door for our first date, all the breath left my body. She was so stunning; I had never been this attracted to a man before, let alone a woman. The white suit she wore made her skin glow and her unbuttoned shirt dipped dangerously low revealing the just a hint of her *****. I wanted to touch them that first night, run my fingers and tongue over them. I had blushed at the thought, feeling a delicious clench in my abdomen. But the look in her eyes is what sent me over the top. It wasn’t just lust, although that did shine through as she unabashedly scanned my body from head to toe, there was something more. It look as if she wanted to claim me, make me hers and for me to make her mine as well. I don’t know how long we stood there before she finally spoke.
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(45 votes, average: 3.69 out of 5)
Simplicity is best when it comes to showing the one you love just how much they mean to you. This was a beautiful beginning and I do hope you post again very soon.
This was an entoxicating buildup to what I hope is a very loving first time for them both. Tina’s fist time w/ a woman, Bette’s first time giving herself to her partner, her lover, her T.
That was perfect. Loved it.
There is a bonus for those that wait. That was beautiful.. thanks
That was great. Thanks and please more.
wow…they are ready then …bring it on..lol..great chapter post real soon please
That was truly amazing I think, that is one of the best chapters I have read
Very moving, your writing is excellent and I’m so glad I took the time to read this! Now I have to go back and read your other work. Thank you!
OMG! That was possibly the most romantic thing I’ve encountered in quite some time! I loved that insight into Tina’s thoughts on Bette and the emotions leading up to their first time…WOW! I loved it! Thank you for sharing!
Great job! Thanks for writing.
I’m a new reader of yours but already a die-hard fan. Absolutely gorgeous prose. Thanks for sharing.
Damn that was so fucking beautiful story and so amazing about these 2, love them. What a lovely story, love it. Can’t wait to see the next one, post soon please. Thanks!
What a gift this is. I so love your story.
Great job! I love I just love the way you are able to capture the characters. I have not seen a storyline like this one in awhile. Please continue…I want to see what happens. Two thumbs up for you!
holy hot dayum. wow . i mean shit. that was just excellent. now i can go to bed and think on that piece of heaven. thanks.
Very sweet, as well as hot. Thanks for sharing this.
beautiful… please post soon.
hot digity dayum, your words are simply breathtaking….
wow..you’re great! felt so real. :) post soon!
now that was beautiful… loved every word… and i can’t wait for the next chapter
OMG..this is beautiful. thank you. please post soon
this is truly a beautiful story. please come back soon. thanks.
OMFG BEAUTIFUL.
Post soon!!! I’m loving this.
WHOA! Wonderful story I LOve it Please continue post soon Thanks!
Simply beautiful…
That was truly one of the much touching Bette & Tina’s first time I ever read in this site and I’m feeling pretty moved – especially reading your wonderful last lines. That’s so right indeed : true love is more luminous than hundred candles and sweetest than rose petals ! When there’s such a tenderness surrounding a first time, poetry is everywhere…
And candlelights shine in eyes and hearts.
Thank you for this marvellous piece of pure beauty. I simply adored it !
… and cannot wait for the next update, of course…