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Those same nails gripped tightly at my hair with my first experimental touch. I was overwhelmed by what I felt. She was soft and wet and hot all at the same time. I let my fingers slip farther into her moist heat, so caught up in the sensations we were creating. When I finally nudged the slight protrusion of hard flesh she gasped and her thighs began to shake. I’d never felt anything so sensuous in my life. ***** had always been hard and direct, but this was warm and inviting, almost intoxicating. When I pulled my hand back I was amazed by the amount of liquid on my fingers. I stared at them, spreading them apart, watching strands of her excitement link them together. Without so much as a thought I placed them in my mouth. I nearly fainted. She was so tangy and earthy, like nothing I’d ever tasted before, I wanted more. As I was about to lean in to taste directly from the source, I felt myself pushed back and a warm body descend upon me. Apparently my little show was too much for her.
Our first full body embrace was overwhelming. I didn’t know what to concentrate on. Her tongue was in my mouth licking her own sweet taste from my own. Our *****, our stomachs, our wet, aching centers were all moving together, writhing together. She ground her hips into me and spread my legs with her own, I could feel our wetness mixing together, causing our slippery lips to move effortlessly together. I felt her hand snake down between our sweaty bodies. She pulled back to look into my eyes and her intensity was almost frightening. She held my gaze while her hand work at our centers, spreading us wide so our ***** would come together.
I almost came at that first contact. We moved against each other, pushing for release. I arched my back and she placed her hand on the small of my back, holding me tight to her. I pushed my head back into the pillow, exposing my neck that she immediately attacked. I could feel myself getting close, my legs were shaky from the exertion and I felt lightheaded from the sensations spreading through my body. She bit down hard on the tendons connecting my neck and shoulder and I felt myself let go. Light danced behind my closed eyelids, as I shook and spasmed. I was gasping for air trying to ground myself. I could feel her come as well, tensing in my arms, her short erratic breaths peppering my neck. When I finally came down and relaxed onto the bed, my body felt heavy, like I couldn’t move if I wanted to. I was comforted by her weight on top of me, like she was shielding me from an outside force. I felt her stroke my cheek wanting me to open my eyes.
“Wow, that was…I’ve never come that fast or hard before” I hadn’t. Not like that. We had barely just begun and I was gone.
“That was just the beginning T.”
TBC
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That was hot. WOW really need more. You need good grades also so study and then write.
What do you mean you’ve never been in this position before? Damn,those last couple of chapters are enough to set a person on fire. Your writing is so descriptive, and so emotional that you feel like your right there witnessing it. Fantastic job, keep it up, but not at the cost of your grades and school.
Even better than your other installment, which was wonderful
Even better than your other installment, which was wonderful
You think Bette got goosebumps..you should see me!! That was absolutely amazing!!Isn’t it time for school vacation yet?
very nice – that was almost as good as my first time :) don’t wait too long to post again – that was very great
OMG..that was fucking beautiful! I hope you continue to write many chapters. OK..gotta head to the shower…cold of course.
Muy Caliente! That’s was so steamin hot. I’m gonna go and take a cold shower and when i get back i hope to find the next chapter of this great tale.
Is it hot in here or is it just me? Wow!! I enjoy the intensity and emotion that you deliver. Excellent story. Who needs school when you write like this? Ok, ok, don’t drop out but I bet you could write your way out of anything. I’m just saying… (smile)
That was awesome, amazeing, and so beautifully written ive just read it twice and loved every word you”ve written looking forward to the next chapter… wouldnt mind Bettes POV…lol Im sure youd do it justice mmmmmm
oh god… bring it on… and you could make it last for ever…
Beautiful, poetic, lovely and……….HOT as HELL! Thanks!
Damn that was so fucking hot and sexy, love it. Bring it more please, thanks!
God, you really have a gift for depicting acurate feelings and sensations through both tender and passionate touches : what a beautiful, sensitive, exquisite palette !
Your writing is truly wonderful. All my sincere congratulations !
” “You are the most stunning thing I have ever seen in my life.” Coming for an art connoisseur, that’s one of the biggest compliments you could ever hope to receive.”
That line was great, by the way, I love it !
this is so sensual and overwhelming. thanks. read you soon.
Speaking as one the past judges I think if you get this out over 5 or more chapters this will most definately be a high contender for the next “Cold Shower Award”. Excellant writing, full of sensual emotions and tenderness.
Every so often, I read a new story…I simply don’t have time to keep up with them all. But last night, I had the pleasure of reading one of yours for the first time…part 1 of this story…and I was so taken in by your writing that I went back and read all your previous chapters too. Just fantastic. You have a lovely way with words, and I hope your stories continue for many more chapters. Thanks for taking the time to write.(But don’t fail out of school…)
OMG! This is soooooo gooooood and overwhelming!! Like looking at a piece of art that is just truly beautiful that it blew me away!! Hot… it sure is very very hot!! I’ve read your first chapter like 3 times… and this… wow… I don’t know how many times I’m gonna read it. Post more and soon…
Oh my GAWD!!! Why do I insist on reading all your people’s wonderful writing at work. That was unbelievably sensual and loveing. I can’t wait for the next chapter! Superlative writing.
Totally hot. You did a great job w/that.
I agree with all comments previously written!This scene is the most sensuous one I ever read until now. Hot!
Readers often want to be “put in the room” of the action, experiencing the emotions of the characters. If a writer is extremely gifted a reader is able to feel the emotions as if they themselves were the characters. You have accomplished this difficult task. I can’t wait to be both Bette and Tina…again and again and again.
k, i just choked on my toast. mother of god that was fucking nuclear. im giving myself a moment to calm down to write.
“but sitting here before her, allowed to touch and explore, my mind went into overdrive.” where the hell do you think mine went. well actually mine went nowhere. i couldnt think. as soon as you can, thanks.
fucking sensual and HOT!!!!!!
Whoa! that was so HOT great I Love it Please continue post soon Thanks!
HOT HOT HOT!!!! Bring on the next installment!!!!
oh my u r such a beautiful writer, pls continue….
School…schmule. Although I suppose there’s a certain amount of rudeness involved in asking you to flunk out to keep writing for our enjoyment.
And this chapter was much enjoyed. Please, what you can, when you can. The readers will be here.
That was fantastic – more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!