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Reflection
I slid my hand into her hair urging her to continue her journey south. I wanted, no needed to feel her mouth on my chest. I needed it other places too, but my breast would do for now. Her hands parted my legs as she made her way down my body and she wasted no time taking my nipple in her mouth. I gasped out my pleasure and pushed her head harder against my chest. I wanted her to devour me, to take me completely inside of her. She sucked hard on my breast giving me exactly what I wanted but it never seemed to be enough. I arched off the bed hoping futilely that I could increase the contact, but we were already pressed impossibly close. She moved to my other breast, running her cheek along my skin, it felt so soft. She licked my areola, puckering the flesh, making my nipple hard. I wanted her to suck that one too, to give it the same glorious attention that she had the other, but she moved to sensitive skin at the bottom of my breast instead. She opened her mouth wide and scrapped her teeth across me, I let out a moan so guttural I think I scared us both.
“T, baby, did I hurt you?”
“God Bette, no, don’t stop, it feels amazing.”
I would have taken the time to comment on the self satisfactory look on her face, but my body was demanding she go back to what she was doing. I guided her head back to my chest and she nipped at me again making me tremble with desire. Her hand took over for her mouth and she took a hold for my nipple, pinching and twisting, causing a new wave of liquid to run down my thighs. I could never remember being this wet before. No one had made me feel this way and she could do it with just a whisper and a smile. She pressed her face briefly into my stomach, leaving a kiss beside my belly button. That small gesture made my heart burst with love; it just seemed so tender and intimate. She nosed the hair at my bikini line and I heard her taking deep breaths, every exhale sending a stream of warm air over my overheated lips.
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(50 votes, average: 4.02 out of 5)
damn HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!
powerful only word my brain can find at the momment
Only I can say Is Whoa!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOT
You have certainly brought these NC-17’s to a new level…I can hear your audience panting for the next, can you? The beauty is that you have a great story going along with this…thanks!
It’s quite obvious that the past hour I spent trying to become centered and grounded was certainly a waste of my time. I am now so out of balance and uprooted that I can barely breathe. In fact, like bluesf said, I’m panting. It’s like I’ve just run a few miles but I haven’t, I’ve been right here. Well, that’s not totally accurate. You indeed took me somewhere & now I need a cigarette. Okay, I don’t smoke but I need something…Damn.
Wonderful detail and imagery. Loved it. You still in school? Chuck it!! Just kidding (again).
Damn that was so fucking hot and awesome, love it. Damn what an amazing chapter, let see what’s next. Thanks!
PHEW! ok in slowly recovering…lol i have to tell you you are one talented writter that was awesome, tho after your last few chapters i knew it would be! delighted your continuing with a few more ill go to bed smiling tonight…lol thanks
OMFG!!! This is so hot, my monitor is steaming…I’ll send you the bill for the new one!!!!!
quite satisfying. Thank you.
OMG, like how am I suppose to get anything done now. Damn Porter your reputation is so well derserved. Can’t wait for Tina to recriprocate, but I think I better read that one at home. Just toooooooooooooooooooooooooo HOT.
OMG!!! I can’t move from my chair ’cause my jaw is lying in the way!!! that was incredible!!! thanks!
Wow! You’ve got an amazing talent. I’ll say it again..WOW!!!
holy mother of god..that was unbelievable hot!! damn ayns!!
CURIOUS & MOONSHADOW – holy mother of god is right.
ayns – my legs are clenched so tightly together that i dont think ill be able to move even if i wanted to. god dayum.
DAMN! After reading this, I am so turned on, my girl would be in trouble….
So glad you decided to make this an endless amount of chapters, “Cold Shower” Award Contender it is then!
OMG… yeah tina.. go get her… hmmmmmm… so glad your continuing…
W.O.W. You made me giggle and blush like some virgin instead of a 27 year old woman who has had sex before….
You don’t have to worry about us reading anything you write…we will be here anxiously awaiting a new chapter..and now I will get up and splash cold water on myself. that was hot.
(Note to self)..stop reading the “naughty” chapters at work. That was HOT HOT HOT!!!
I need to drop my husband and get me a woman like Bette…lol. That was realy HOT!
Oh my God…that was awesome and I loved the detail that you provided. I was actually on-line reading this when I was watching my tape of season 2 and Tina popped on the screen giving me an even better visual of how she looks! Wow – glad I didn’t read it at work!
OMFG!!! Woman you are killing us!!! More soon….goodness!! How am i suppose to get any work done?
Where to begin? I found this site in May 04 and have read dozens and dozens of NC17’s and enjoyed most of them (hard not to enjoy a NC17, lol).
However, what I appreciate most about your NC17’s and your writing in general, is that it’s not about the act of sex, it’s about the acts of love, longing and that shared place of intimacy that is reserved for two.
Thank you for your time and creativity. You are gifted. This chapter was truly incredible, it will rank as one of my all time favorites. Again Ayns, again.
Let Tina give Bette as good as she gave, Go for it Tina. Thanks
Bloody hell, hot, hot, hot!! I’ve just called my girlie and ordered her home…. Certainly pleased that you will be continuing this line of penmanship. Cheers luv.
jks tipped me off to your story holy smokes I think I held my breath for the whole story and WOW WOW WOW was that HOT!!!!!