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    Reflection

    Story written on October 3, 2005 by ayns.
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    Tina reflecting on their first time together. Chapter 3

    “God Tina, I love the way you smell. I could breath you in forever.” I should have been blushing and probably would have been if I could have registered a coherent thought, but her words just pushed me closer to edge. She skimmed past the place I need her at the most and bit the tender flesh of my inner thigh. I felt her lapping at the wetness that had seeped down my leg. She groaned deep in her throat, moving back up my thigh.

    “You taste even better than you smell.”And then she was upon me. Her first soft lick sent my hips bucking off the bed. She placed her hand on my stomach holding me down. She ran the tip of her tongue up and down my lips barely touching me, driving me wild. She spread me open with her thumbs and the cool air caused me to shiver. She added to the torture by blowing against me. My head flopped back and forth on the pillow and my toes curled expressing my overwhelming need. She let her tongue travel along my inner lips and up towards my pulsing ***** before she circled it lightly. Her tongue slipped under the edge of my hood and it felt like she had touched a live wire. I pushed up again trying to increase the contact, but she pulled back, teasing me, denying me the relief I so desperately needed. My head was pushed back hard into the pillow and my heels were digging painfully into the mattress. My whole body felt like a coiled spring just waiting to let go.

    “Please Bette, I need to feel you, I don’t know how much more I can take.” I pled my case, desperately hoping she would hurry up. My words came out in short bursts as my erratic breathing was making all speech nearly impossible. She finally took pity on me.

    Every other oral experience I had ever had seemed so wrong compared to the way I felt in that moment. She knew every place to touch me, how to make me moan and buck and how to make me scream out her name. I didn’t know ***** could be that way, that fulfilling. She licked my once, starting at my opening, gathering my liquid desire before taking my ***** between her lips. She sucked me hard and slid one finger into my sopping wetness. All I could do was moan and ask for more. More fingers, more sucking, more everything. She added as second and then quickly a third finger, pumping a little harder. She grazed my ***** with her teeth and I felt the first small spasm of my approaching *****. She pulled her fingers out and I groaned at the loss, but my groan was quickly quieted when she stiffened her tongue and drove it deep inside me. She grabbed my ***** and pulled my closer, lapping inside of me, making me writhe against her. Her nose was grinding my ***** against my pubic bone and I couldn’t hold out any longer. I screamed her name as I came, holding her head, not letting her move from her worship. I could feel the wetness flowing out of me, the pleasure seeping through my body making me rigid. She rubbed my *****, prolonging my pleasure, drawing out every last cry from my spent body. When I finally let her come up for air she immediately replaced her tongue with three fingers and moved up to face me.

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    4. You have certainly brought these NC-17’s to a new level…I can hear your audience panting for the next, can you? The beauty is that you have a great story going along with this…thanks!

    5. It’s quite obvious that the past hour I spent trying to become centered and grounded was certainly a waste of my time. I am now so out of balance and uprooted that I can barely breathe. In fact, like bluesf said, I’m panting. It’s like I’ve just run a few miles but I haven’t, I’ve been right here. Well, that’s not totally accurate. You indeed took me somewhere & now I need a cigarette. Okay, I don’t smoke but I need something…Damn.

      Wonderful detail and imagery. Loved it. You still in school? Chuck it!! Just kidding (again).

    7. PHEW! ok in slowly recovering…lol i have to tell you you are one talented writter that was awesome, tho after your last few chapters i knew it would be! delighted your continuing with a few more ill go to bed smiling tonight…lol thanks

    10. OMG, like how am I suppose to get anything done now. Damn Porter your reputation is so well derserved. Can’t wait for Tina to recriprocate, but I think I better read that one at home. Just toooooooooooooooooooooooooo HOT.

    14. CURIOUS & MOONSHADOW – holy mother of god is right.

      ayns – my legs are clenched so tightly together that i dont think ill be able to move even if i wanted to. god dayum.

    19. You don’t have to worry about us reading anything you write…we will be here anxiously awaiting a new chapter..and now I will get up and splash cold water on myself. that was hot.

    22. Oh my God…that was awesome and I loved the detail that you provided. I was actually on-line reading this when I was watching my tape of season 2 and Tina popped on the screen giving me an even better visual of how she looks! Wow – glad I didn’t read it at work!

    24. Where to begin? I found this site in May 04 and have read dozens and dozens of NC17’s and enjoyed most of them (hard not to enjoy a NC17, lol).

      However, what I appreciate most about your NC17’s and your writing in general, is that it’s not about the act of sex, it’s about the acts of love, longing and that shared place of intimacy that is reserved for two.

      Thank you for your time and creativity. You are gifted. This chapter was truly incredible, it will rank as one of my all time favorites. Again Ayns, again.

    26. Bloody hell, hot, hot, hot!! I’ve just called my girlie and ordered her home…. Certainly pleased that you will be continuing this line of penmanship. Cheers luv.

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