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Reflection
“Again Tina” was all that she said and started to pump her hand again. My body was still buzzing from my release, but I felt myself become aroused again, so close already to another climax. She captured me in a heated kiss, pushing her tongue and my flavor into my mouth. I had always found the thought of fluids a little gross, but tasting myself on her, knowing what she had just done to me, made it the most delicious taste on earth. She placed her leg behind her hand, adding strength to her already furious thrusts. I gripped her shoulder, trying to prepare myself for my upcoming release. It felt almost painful and yet it was the greatest feeling I had ever known.
“Open you eyes T, I want to see you when you come.” I blinked them open trying to focus, I hadn’t realized how tight I had them squeezed shut. Her sweaty face, glistening with my juices came into focus and she was the most beautiful thing I had ever seen. I wanted to tell her that, tell her she was beautiful and that I loved her and that this was the greatest moment of my life. But I couldn’t speak, I could only stare into her eyes and hope she could see it in mine. That was the moment she curled her fingers inside of me, touching a spot no one have ever touched before. Wave after wave of ecstacy rolled through my body like nothing I had ever felt before. I was squeezing her fingers so hard I was afraid I had hurt her but it was beyond my control. She kept up her thrusting, never missing a beat. I lost the battle and closed my eyes, gripping her tight and pulling her against me. My whole body felt like liquid, every muscle a puddle of quivering mass. In the seconds following, all I could think about was her. Her warm body pressed against me, her strong fingers still resting inside me, her soft voice telling me she loved me over and over again. I was filled with her, every aspect of my being and I had never felt so whole in my life.
After a couple of minutes she slowly removed her fingers causing me to gasp at the sensation. I was a little saddened by the loss, still wanting that intimate connection. She left her hand there, cupping me softly and it felt right. She leaned up on one elbow, tracing her fingertips along my hairline, gazing at me softly. I finally opened my eyes and I was overcome with emotion. I felt a tear slide down my cheek and she kissed it away, lingering for a moment. I finally spoke, not really wanting to break the reverent silence.
“I’ve never felt anything like that in my life Bette. God, I don’t know how to explain it.” I didn’t, I could never accurately explain to her how wonderful this night had been. Instead I said the only thing that could hope to convey what I was feeling. “I love you.”
“I love you too, T. And I know how you feel, being with you is…well it’s…” she was struggling with her words as I had done just a moment ago. “It’s everything I have always wanted without even realizing it. I just hope I give you even half as much pleasure as you give me each day.”
A wicked grin crossed my face and I all I could think about making her gasp and moan like she just had for me.
“Give me second to get the feeling back in my arms and legs and I plan on giving you a little pleasure of your own.”
TBC
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(50 votes, average: 4.02 out of 5)
damn HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!
powerful only word my brain can find at the momment
Only I can say Is Whoa!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOT
You have certainly brought these NC-17’s to a new level…I can hear your audience panting for the next, can you? The beauty is that you have a great story going along with this…thanks!
It’s quite obvious that the past hour I spent trying to become centered and grounded was certainly a waste of my time. I am now so out of balance and uprooted that I can barely breathe. In fact, like bluesf said, I’m panting. It’s like I’ve just run a few miles but I haven’t, I’ve been right here. Well, that’s not totally accurate. You indeed took me somewhere & now I need a cigarette. Okay, I don’t smoke but I need something…Damn.
Wonderful detail and imagery. Loved it. You still in school? Chuck it!! Just kidding (again).
Damn that was so fucking hot and awesome, love it. Damn what an amazing chapter, let see what’s next. Thanks!
PHEW! ok in slowly recovering…lol i have to tell you you are one talented writter that was awesome, tho after your last few chapters i knew it would be! delighted your continuing with a few more ill go to bed smiling tonight…lol thanks
OMFG!!! This is so hot, my monitor is steaming…I’ll send you the bill for the new one!!!!!
quite satisfying. Thank you.
OMG, like how am I suppose to get anything done now. Damn Porter your reputation is so well derserved. Can’t wait for Tina to recriprocate, but I think I better read that one at home. Just toooooooooooooooooooooooooo HOT.
OMG!!! I can’t move from my chair ’cause my jaw is lying in the way!!! that was incredible!!! thanks!
Wow! You’ve got an amazing talent. I’ll say it again..WOW!!!
holy mother of god..that was unbelievable hot!! damn ayns!!
CURIOUS & MOONSHADOW – holy mother of god is right.
ayns – my legs are clenched so tightly together that i dont think ill be able to move even if i wanted to. god dayum.
DAMN! After reading this, I am so turned on, my girl would be in trouble….
So glad you decided to make this an endless amount of chapters, “Cold Shower” Award Contender it is then!
OMG… yeah tina.. go get her… hmmmmmm… so glad your continuing…
W.O.W. You made me giggle and blush like some virgin instead of a 27 year old woman who has had sex before….
You don’t have to worry about us reading anything you write…we will be here anxiously awaiting a new chapter..and now I will get up and splash cold water on myself. that was hot.
(Note to self)..stop reading the “naughty” chapters at work. That was HOT HOT HOT!!!
I need to drop my husband and get me a woman like Bette…lol. That was realy HOT!
Oh my God…that was awesome and I loved the detail that you provided. I was actually on-line reading this when I was watching my tape of season 2 and Tina popped on the screen giving me an even better visual of how she looks! Wow – glad I didn’t read it at work!
OMFG!!! Woman you are killing us!!! More soon….goodness!! How am i suppose to get any work done?
Where to begin? I found this site in May 04 and have read dozens and dozens of NC17’s and enjoyed most of them (hard not to enjoy a NC17, lol).
However, what I appreciate most about your NC17’s and your writing in general, is that it’s not about the act of sex, it’s about the acts of love, longing and that shared place of intimacy that is reserved for two.
Thank you for your time and creativity. You are gifted. This chapter was truly incredible, it will rank as one of my all time favorites. Again Ayns, again.
Let Tina give Bette as good as she gave, Go for it Tina. Thanks
Bloody hell, hot, hot, hot!! I’ve just called my girlie and ordered her home…. Certainly pleased that you will be continuing this line of penmanship. Cheers luv.
jks tipped me off to your story holy smokes I think I held my breath for the whole story and WOW WOW WOW was that HOT!!!!!