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“Tina? Are you okay? I’m sorry, I never should have..” She moved to get off me, but I pulled her back down interrupting her before she somehow made this her fault.
“No, it’s my fault. I do want this, I want it so bad you have to believe me.”
“I do, but Tina I don’t want you to do anything until you are ready.”
“I thought I was, I really did. It’s just that…well…”
“What? You can tell me, it’s okay.”
“What if I can’t please you.” Her face softened a little and I could feel the empathy radiating off of her.
“Oh baby, you give me so much pleasure all the time, just being with you brings me more pleasure than you’ll ever know. As for this, I know you’ll know what to do and I can help you, guild you through.”
“But you’ve been with so many women, how can I ever compare.” She looked a little sad just then and I was reminded of the conversation we had had just a few nights before. I felt bad for bringing up her past.
“You mean so much more to me than all of those women combined. I would never compare you to them, they will never live up to you.”
“Bette…”, I hesitated for only a moment, “I love you.”
I gazed up at her watching so many emotions play across that beautiful face. Surprise, happiness, and of course love. I knew in that moment I had said the right thing.
“I love you too, so much T. And we will wait until you are ready, ok? We will wait until you are one hundred percent sure.”
“I’m sorry about tonight.”
“This is the greatest night of my life T, never be sorry for this night.”
I feel asleep that night wrapped in her arms and I had never felt more secure in my life. She loved me, as much as I loved her and that both thrilled me and terrified me to death. It was a little over a week later until we would act on that love.
We were at her house lying on the couch. I was resting comfortably between her legs, my head on her chest. She was reading to me, her soft dulcet tones both relaxing and arousing me all at once. She had reached my favorite part of ‘The Nanny Diaries’ when suddenly she sneezed causing both our bodies to bounce around. The surprise coupled with the fact that it was possibly the loudest sneeze I had ever heard sent me into a fit of giggles.
“Oh, so that’s funny is it?” I loved the playfulness in her voice.
I could barely speak through fits of laughter but managed a sentence. “I’m just surprised you didn’t throw us both of the couch.”
She let out a playful growl and she attacked my sides.
“BETTE, no, no tickling!” I jumped up tearing into the kitchen with her trailing closely behind me; her sweet melodic laughter adding to my own. We made our way back around to the living room before she tackled my onto the couch straddling my hips and tickling me to death.
“Bette, please stop, please!” I couldn’t catch my breath and my words came out in little bursts.
“Say you’re sorry!” she singsonged at me, enjoying her dominating position.
“I’m sorry, please, STOP!”
And she did. She sat back on her heels, arms crossed triumphantly across her chest.
“That’ll teach you to laugh at me.”
She looked to wild and ***** on top of me, gloating in the minor victory of our tickle fight. And that’s when I knew, deep in my bones, that I was ready. I sat up quickly and grabbed her face. My mouth was on hers before she realized what was happening. When she caught up, she kissed me back with fervor, the energy from our little fight transferring to our kiss. I pulled back and looked into her eyes.
“Make love to me.”
“Are you sure?”
“I promise you, I’m sure.”
She led me to her bedroom, squeezing my hand a little making sure to calm my nerves. There were not candles or rose petals and yet it was exactly how it was supposed to be. It was the moment that I would give myself to my soul mate.
TBC
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Simplicity is best when it comes to showing the one you love just how much they mean to you. This was a beautiful beginning and I do hope you post again very soon.
This was an entoxicating buildup to what I hope is a very loving first time for them both. Tina’s fist time w/ a woman, Bette’s first time giving herself to her partner, her lover, her T.
That was perfect. Loved it.
There is a bonus for those that wait. That was beautiful.. thanks
That was great. Thanks and please more.
wow…they are ready then …bring it on..lol..great chapter post real soon please
That was truly amazing I think, that is one of the best chapters I have read
Very moving, your writing is excellent and I’m so glad I took the time to read this! Now I have to go back and read your other work. Thank you!
OMG! That was possibly the most romantic thing I’ve encountered in quite some time! I loved that insight into Tina’s thoughts on Bette and the emotions leading up to their first time…WOW! I loved it! Thank you for sharing!
Great job! Thanks for writing.
I’m a new reader of yours but already a die-hard fan. Absolutely gorgeous prose. Thanks for sharing.
Damn that was so fucking beautiful story and so amazing about these 2, love them. What a lovely story, love it. Can’t wait to see the next one, post soon please. Thanks!
What a gift this is. I so love your story.
Great job! I love I just love the way you are able to capture the characters. I have not seen a storyline like this one in awhile. Please continue…I want to see what happens. Two thumbs up for you!
holy hot dayum. wow . i mean shit. that was just excellent. now i can go to bed and think on that piece of heaven. thanks.
Very sweet, as well as hot. Thanks for sharing this.
beautiful… please post soon.
hot digity dayum, your words are simply breathtaking….
wow..you’re great! felt so real. :) post soon!
now that was beautiful… loved every word… and i can’t wait for the next chapter
OMG..this is beautiful. thank you. please post soon
this is truly a beautiful story. please come back soon. thanks.
OMFG BEAUTIFUL.
Post soon!!! I’m loving this.
WHOA! Wonderful story I LOve it Please continue post soon Thanks!
Simply beautiful…
That was truly one of the much touching Bette & Tina’s first time I ever read in this site and I’m feeling pretty moved – especially reading your wonderful last lines. That’s so right indeed : true love is more luminous than hundred candles and sweetest than rose petals ! When there’s such a tenderness surrounding a first time, poetry is everywhere…
And candlelights shine in eyes and hearts.
Thank you for this marvellous piece of pure beauty. I simply adored it !
… and cannot wait for the next update, of course…